And another good story (which despite being pretty much entirely erotica and me being in a hurry sent me out on two Wikipedia trips, one of which ended up at a particular pottery glazing technique and the other at an economic theory, and by the way I'm glad FoME pointed me to you :D), looks like; thank you for writing. :)
Damn. Talk about getting off (well, not Ellie...) to a good start. Great detail and descriptions, sprinkled again with enough of Ellie's quirks and callbacks to her past/the human world to give this encounter even more meaning.
The way you had Rarity tease her before diving in to her nipples was... Damn.
Rarity nonconsentually dying Ellie's pubes was a nice bit of levity, although, yes, she should've asked first. Love how Rarity's reaction to Ellie asking her to stop was to belie her failure to give Ellie an orgasm. So sweet and caring. Rarity may be a lady, but she's no pillow princess. Damn straight.
Gay for Godot has said almost everything I would have said. But I want to add as well just how much your writing immerses the reader. It can feel like it's actually happening with the right details and yours hits the mark.
Poor Ellie though. I think a lot of us know what that feels like.
The story that you linked as a prequel to this one? The link leads to a 404 error.
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I submitted that first, then this a minute later. I am VERY annoyed that this went through first and the other is still in queue.
Sounds pretty gay
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If you think this is gay you should see the prequel!
My attention: you have it.
Great story so far. If this is just the first chapter, then I can't wait to see what subsequent chapters are like.
By the way, I like what you did with the cover images of these two stories. :)
"As Rarity requested, Ellie lied down"
"As Rarity requested, Ellie lay down"?
And another good story (which despite being pretty much entirely erotica and me being in a hurry sent me out on two Wikipedia trips, one of which ended up at a particular pottery glazing technique and the other at an economic theory, and by the way I'm glad FoME pointed me to you :D), looks like; thank you for writing. :)
Damn. Talk about getting off (well, not Ellie...) to a good start. Great detail and descriptions, sprinkled again with enough of Ellie's quirks and callbacks to her past/the human world to give this encounter even more meaning.
The way you had Rarity tease her before diving in to her nipples was... Damn.
Rarity nonconsentually dying Ellie's pubes was a nice bit of levity, although, yes, she should've asked first. Love how Rarity's reaction to Ellie asking her to stop was to belie her failure to give Ellie an orgasm. So sweet and caring. Rarity may be a lady, but she's no pillow princess. Damn straight.
Gay for Godot has said almost everything I would have said. But I want to add as well just how much your writing immerses the reader. It can feel like it's actually happening with the right details and yours hits the mark.
Poor Ellie though. I think a lot of us know what that feels like.
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thank you! can't think of a better compliment for this type of story, and yes, i think some of us do know what that's like.