"It was something more that that, which"
"It was something more than that, which"?

"face was coated in not only in Rarity’s slick"
"face was coated not only in Rarity’s slick"?

(And that link mentioned in the author's note seems a good idea, by the way.)

No. She could not live with that. She was going to eat out this horse and eat out this horse hard. As hard as her ancestors once rode them across the Central Asian steppe.

Terrible analogy. Easier said than done, anyway.

You nailed the humor in this story. Little bits of levity to combine with the feels and sexiness later.

And what feels and sexiness there were in this! Like I've said before, I'm not into human x pony, but woman x mare is novel enough that I'll give it a look. Both of your stories in this vein have been a delight to read. Not just for the great writing (you know how to get down all those hot little details), but for the additional background/exposition of your wholly unique on both Equestria and the HiE character.

This last chapter was a satisfying climax in more than one way. Seeing Ellie get so emotional at being not just accepted, but celebrated, for who and what she/her body is made the resolution of this evening all the better.

Another excellent story from you!

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Talk about getting off (well, not Ellie...)

Ha! Gottem!

The way you had Rarity tease her before diving in to her nipples was... Damn.

The part with the cloth tape measure in particular was something I had in mind for a long time before putting it down into a story. Glad to finally get it off my... chest.

Damn straight.

Nothing straight about this! (Sorry, had to do it.)

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So did I. One of the reasons I've always hated using those apps...

I was pretty happy to find that my first association with the word "unicorn" switched from that to our magical horse friends. To a lesser degree, same for the different association my brain has now with the word "twilight". Thank Celestia for this show!

The world needs more hot hornjobs. Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn.

Co-signing this sentiment.

given the delicate nature of both parts involved, I can see that being the "home run inside park" equivalent for unicorns.

Oh, definitely! Which is why Rarity is so negative about the whole idea.

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You nailed the humor in this story. Little bits of levity to combine with the feels and sexiness later.

Thank you! I guess that is somehow becoming a signature of my style. Would not have thought this at the start of my pony writing career.

Seeing Ellie get so emotional at being not just accepted, but celebrated, for who and what she/her body is made the resolution of this evening all the better.

So the funny thing is, it struck me as I was writing this that out of all my stories current and pending, this section might be the one that comes closest to the main theme of your The Sum Of Her? Of course, on a much more compressed timescale and with a lot less gravity.

And what feels and sexiness there were in this! Like I've said before, I'm not into human x pony, but woman x mare is novel enough that I'll give it a look. Both of your stories in this vein have been a delight to read. Not just for the great writing (you know how to get down all those hot little details), but for the additional background/exposition of your wholly unique on both Equestria and the HiE character.

Aaaaa thank you for such high praise! It really makes me more motivated to write more of this really weird stuff that I might be the only person in existence who would write.

Goodness me, the amount of detail that went into this third part. I could picture everything so well, and I thought the use of the voice clips was a neat touch. (Even if I can't not hear "gum on their bum" for the second one.)

I laughed at the East Asian Steppe joke, and I really, really liked the way in which Ellie was hesitating and processing, and Rarity was concerned, and it was so full of good consent all around and aaaaah that alone is so wonderful.

But wow Ellie... very lucky woman she is to get to do that for Rarity. To hear Rarity make those moans and to make her whinny. I wasn't quite expecting that and I'm still chuckling even though it makes perfect sense.

I loved every bit of this from start to finish. And I'm glad I stretched it out the way I did, letting myself absorb it slowly, really hammer in the details. Made it even more fun.