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“Now you remember what I told you? This is a very important first step for our cooperation, Oaktree,” Sundown shouted over the now-constant gust of wind. “We absolutely need every single unicorn who can cast those spells. This whole operation fails if we can’t get them, you understand?”
I don't like how this information is obviously meant for us readers, but I can't think of any other solution that doesn't take a lot of words to describe.
“Soon, Oaktree. The unicorns.”
Right, he realized. The stress of the conversation had made him forget.
You had one job
I have a hard time understanding the layout of the chaos converter's turbines and the grating.
So far it seems like the conflict on this side of the story is resolved. I'm guessing it's going to be replaced by a riot from the farmers.
Oh, neat. I mean it’s pony sci-fi, so I didn’t spend too much time researching physics, I just imagined these turbines standing vertical to catch the horizontal wind.
Cool drawing though. Sorry again I didn’t write it clearly enough!
Christ...
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Now I wish that I had known what would occur in this story before Christmas, just so I could make it my Christmas wish that Gentle Butterwing and her supporters die horrible deaths before this story ends.
Why did I buy Cotton's act of just wanting to help the village?
I don't like how this information is obviously meant for us readers, but I can't think of any other solution that doesn't take a lot of words to describe.
You had one job
I have a hard time understanding the layout of the chaos converter's turbines and the grating.
So far it seems like the conflict on this side of the story is resolved. I'm guessing it's going to be replaced by a riot from the farmers.
Se you all next week, great chapter as usual
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Alas, I can only hope my descriptive ability improves. Hopefully my “not an artist” doodling skills will suffice here;
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The biggest difference is that I thought the turbines are sideways. This is a more refined version of what I was imagining at the end.
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Oh, neat. I mean it’s pony sci-fi, so I didn’t spend too much time researching physics, I just imagined these turbines standing vertical to catch the horizontal wind.
Cool drawing though. Sorry again I didn’t write it clearly enough!
A crying shame that little foal didn't pull a Tempest Shadow on that heretic scum.
Holy fuck.
Fuck.
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I mean the Story still is called Pegaus Device and its established that there is a Pegasus Device RIGHT there!
So yeah, why DID you buy that?
Oh god, pony batteries for the walls?!
Or chaos converters, whatever.
Unless those batteries were used for starting like a car does...
Did Stormy Night die?