Sunset Shimmer having left Equestria in search of her destiny begins a journey that will shake the universe.
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Looks like Flutters noticed Sunny's actions of self harm
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the kind shy one would notice that
Oy!!! Starswirl, Celestia, and Rainbow Dash are FRICKIN Dumb Morons!
Also, I'm surprised Ocellus is a Changeling Princess, and is very assertive. At least she has common sense, and stop a Changeling Massacre by Sunset, Fleur, and the Inquisition.
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Why can't Vegeta, Goku, Gohan, Piccolo, Bulma, or Misa NOTICE that! Their not blind or something. Plus, they got Super Strong Keen Senses to notice something is wrong with Sunset.
Also, where's DBZ/Super Twilight? Not the Pony/Canon One who is a little dummy for being Celestia's "Teacher Pet".
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Well she did just have the ability to grow taken from her. The desire to improve herself has been her driving force for most of if not her entire life. Now it's gone because as far as growth goes she's been transplanted from where she was to the very top in an instant. As I said sometime before, she really should have asked for the brochure before she accepted what turned out to be a really raw deal.
Besides that, she was already stated to be at least on par with Zeno, so why was the position of the one above all even offered to her? Whatever the case, it was, and she should have asked questions. Now she has to lay in the bed she's made for herself, and it's torture for her. It's no wonder she's turned to self-destructive practices considering how deep a pit of despair this revelation has to have left her in.
One final thing. I have a huge problem with the writing in this Story and your other stories.
I'm not trying to be rude, but I keep seeing the Characters Face Expression's being nearly always "Frowned/Frowning, Growled, Deadpanning, Grumbled, Facepalming, Nodding, Eyes Narrowed or Eyes Focused, Shrugging, Rolling Your Eyes", etc.
Seriously, I seen this a Hundred times, and their mostly negative expressions ( Frowned, Growled, Deadpanned, Facepalming, eyes focused, or rolling their eyes.), it's like Sunset or any other Character ALWAYS Frowning or upset.
It's make me think everyone/everypony are acting a little Emo by having these Negative Face Expressions, and only being happy or smiling in one or two occasions in each chapter.
I really don't want to be rude at your writing skills and your Stories. But, this "Negative" Face Expressions does get ANNOYING every time I read your stories. No offense. 😔 😤
I'm surprised NO ONE Criticized or talk about this before me???!!! 😒
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Agreeable. Question, is their a way to "Nerf" Sunset on her Infinite Powers? Go back to her Power of Over Trevigintillion to maybe to Sexvigintillion as a High Ball Reward???
Just so she can still be OP, and can still improve and grow? Because, she doesn't like having TOO MUCH POWER, and is even depressed and tried Suicide!!!!!
I think she needs to talk to Lord Zeno, Grand Priest, and Chronoa to help her with the Super Dragon Balls??!!
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To me is I try to avoid said, shouted and other such things. Second to me frowning is something you would do in a serious situation, you would be frowning and not smiling. Your taking the situation seriously.
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Okay. I'm just addressing the issue of it being Over Used, and it does get Annoying.
Plus, No one in the Comments Section talk about this. So I probably the First one that talk about the Frowning, Growled, and other Negative Face Expressions on Sunset and her Friends.
Since the Universe 7 V.S. Universe 6 Tournament is a Wash for Sunset and her Friends/Family. WHAT'S Zamasu doing to gain a Upper Hand with Sunset's Infinite OP Power, and her Z Fighter Friends/Family?
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Hmm, I don't know if I can fix that, it's just how I write. I will try though.
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The fact is wouldn't it make sense for them to smile, people don't smile that often in my experience. Smiling is hard, frowning is easy.
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Hmmm, need to think on that.
her arms? why?
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You mean Rainbow, imagine if you punched a solid wall of titanium at full force. The force would rebound up your arm.
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Okay, very well.
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What? Wasn't fluttershy the one looking at her arms?
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I'll explain that next chapter.
nice work