Sunset Shimmer having left Equestria in search of her destiny begins a journey that will shake the universe.
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Honestly, I don't know what people are talking about when they call this rushed. The only criticiam I have is that Yamcha didn't react at all to killing Twilight in the gruesome manner he did and isn't showing signs of it affecting him now. There's a reason a hand through the gut is a consistent MO of sadistic characters in old-school anime, a character type that Yamcha never was. He's literally got blood on his hands, and the existence of a metaphorical reset button it not a reason for him not to be wracked with emotion. As far as I recalled he never tried to take a life as a bandit.
one more to go... and then canon wise, was roshi training.. how will that go here though?
nice work.