Sunset Shimmer having left Equestria in search of her destiny begins a journey that will shake the universe.
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nice work
I wonder if Starglow is a Supreme Kai of Time or has the potential to become one.
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She is more like Hit than Chronoa.
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Suddenly I begin to imagine how a meeting between Starglow and Hit would go.
Okay, it's happened before but I didn't let it bother me, but this one is too much. That is to say, way too much happened in this chapter for 1000 words to be sufficient. Now that I've said that, I might as well address the rest. Even with the great swaths you cut from the Dragon Ball story with the changes, so much has happened that 60000 words just isn't enough and it shows. Realistically this thing should have hit 100k a while ago, but plot points are hit in such rapid succession that none of them get the attention they need. Considering how much has been different the whole way through, it suffers from this format that; when not covering dialogue, reads like someone recapping a story to a friend.