Magic and Monkey
written by HeartfireFirebrand
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seems rushed and you forgot to add Yamcha's reaction to fatally injuring someone before he got knocked out and how he felt after being slapped awake.
nice work.
10415283
I made some changes, thanks for the feedback.
Just read the story and its very entertaining and interesting can't wait to see where this is going to go and how far in the dragon ball universe this will get to.
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Thanks