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Okay, so thoughts on my first read.
Why does that little speech Mesmser gave about freeing Greyscale make me feel like Mesmer is gonna die?
I like that Greyscale does at least know he's been a little creepy. That moment with Copper teasing him about it was actually a really nice moment for his character.
Also dammit your author's notes make me wanna bust out a cork board. What recurring element am I missing?
Maribelle's unnoticed absence has me concerned. I don't think she's dead, but she's still among the most sussy of bakas in this group.
Awww that hug was really sweet!
Hi![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
Ohh bueno, que buen capitulo, me encanto; pobre Copper, ya se rompio, espero que Greyscale no la cague con esto; me gusto que Mesmer animara(?) a Greyscale a que tome los mandos de su vida, aunque me da ganas de meterle un puñetazo, no es un mal tipo.
Con esté capitulo ya tengo mis sospechas sobre quienes van a morir en esté arco (si es que sigue las bases de Danganronpa), ahora hay que ver como lo ejecutas
Aww. That was a surprisingly wholesome moment between Greyscale and Mesmer. The hug was definitely unexpected. Though that whole sequence has an air of finality to it that makes me fear a bit for Mesmer's life now. We all know what happens to mentor figures once they have nothing more to teach...
As for Copper, I'm glad she and Greyscale could (somewhat) reconcile. Her conditions are certainly understandable to say the least. :P
I just binged this whole story over the last two days. You've really got me hooked! Greyscale is such a fascinating protagonist and Monobunny's reaction to Patience is incredibly intriguing. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update!![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
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So happy to have another fan!
Thank you so much!
Unfortunately you'll now have to play the waiting game while I get the chapters written. The next chapter is almost done, but... Yeah, this story will take some time.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)