Following her restoration in 2022, the battleship USS Texas BB-35 disappeared in the Gulf of Mexico en-route back to Texas. Suddenly, those aboard her find themselves in a new world, and may soon have to fight for their lives
And I'm glad that you liked the chapter. As for Chapter 6, so far I have plans for the Texas crew to meet the Princesses, David to meet Luna, the Texas to be moored in Fillydelphia for the time being, and I also have plans to finally introduce the Black Baron and his minions, so stay tuned for that
And I tentatively have the first battle scene planned for Chapter 7. In it, the Texas will fire her main battery in anger for the first time against an enemy target since 1945
And I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, and thought that it was well worth the wait. Before too long I'll start Chapter 6, and hopefully it won't take as long, but I can't make any promises yet
a very good chapter to a very good story. it's good to finally see tensions calm down after everything that happened in the previous chapters. I can't wait for the princesses to get the full tour. and I have a feeling the Texas and her crew are going to be an instrumental part for equestria in taking down the black baron. I definitely can't wait for the next chapter.
you might also want to fix this sentence in the chapter.
We still might have need of some need of some good ol' Texas coffee here before too long."
And I'm glad that you liked the chapter, and are looking forward to the Texas crew meeting the Princesses, and then giving them the full tour of the Texas. I have a few fun things planned for this that I think you'll enjoy. And I can't confirm or deny what you said about the Black Baron, but I will say that he might be in for a VERY rude awakening once the Texas becomes involved with the war against him, so stay tuned for that
And thank you for pointing this sentence out. I went back and fixed it
And sorry to burst your bubble, but it wasn't "years". By my count, it was about 1 year and 3 months between Chapter 4's release, and Chapter 5's release. But in any case, I'm glad that you enjoyed your read of Chapter 5
And I never went anywhere really. I've been here the whole time, but I was just not able to write very much for various reasons. But I'm glad that you missed me
Not bad, though rarity was a bit overplayed (if AJ was with her, she would have reminded Rare that she had worked on the farm before and would survive) plus Rarity has never teleported (and why was Dash still shipbound, she should have gone air-born once at the 'ramp' [which would remind the Texas crew that those wings are functional]) ...
And yeah, I might have overdone the bit with Rarity, however, I only meant for this to be a one-time thing; more as a joke than anything else. I never said that RD was still shipbound. I mean yeah, she could have flown up, though I guess that she decided to climb up with the others. I'll make sure to have her fly in the first scene of Chapter 6, as that does make sense for her. And wait, Rarity never teleported? Well crap............
And yeah, it's been a long 1 year and 3 months, but it was well worth the wait. I'm glad that you liked Chapter 5, and I'm hoping that Chapter 3 ends up being just as good as this one was
I forgot I had a couple of these stories in my tracking. Well I shall wait for the next one. Or perhaps forget bout it tell it pops into existence on my tracking again who knows.
Rainbow Dash kept getting in our faces, yelling about how Humans were dangerous, and we needed to be killed
Well a fine fuck you to you too, ya c*nt.......
"Yeah....sorry for yelling at you all, and trying to throw hands like that. It's just...well....whenever there's a threat to Equestria, I've always been the one to rush out to try and fight it first, and that's led to some pretty painful lessons in not only patience, but also working with a team to deal with a problem. And when you guys just showed up out of the blue with your warship, and in a threatening manner, not to mention your mentioning that Humans are so warlike, David, that kinda set me off. Can you forgive me for being so rash?"
Well alright, not as upset anymore. Dash realizing she went overboard and admitting her mistakes, love to see it.
I gotta say this chapter was well worth the wait. I remember first reading this way back and the first chapter had only been released a week prior to me discovering this. Way before I decided to make an account on here. Glad I did though, makes it so much easier to track stories such as this without having to sift through literal hundreds of bookmarks lol. Excited to see where you take us next on this adventure!
Earth. We were once at the bottom of the food chain, but over the course of millennia, we crafted weapons and tools, banded together, and slowly rose to the top of the food chain, and now we fight to remain there, though unfortunately, Human nature is so warlike, and we're always looking for a fight with somebody. I guess that that's why we invented weapons before any other species did. Thankfully though, some of us learned to keep our warlike nature in check, and built instead of destroyed, enabling Human Civilization to thrive."
This entire paragraph was mind numbingly dumb. The first part no normal human being would ever say to a new intelligent species and the second part is just childish hippie dippie bs.
Excellent work and what type are the ponies battleship are they ww1 battleship ship or ww2 battleship where ww1 battleship better than ww2 battleship or where they same
And I'm glad that you liked RD's redemption here. It wasn't quite as funny as her getting yelled at by the Rear-Admiral in Chapter 4, but it was still a nice touch
And I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. It's been a long 1 year and 3 months, but I'm glad that you enjoyed Chapter 5, and I think you'll enjoy what I have planned for Chapter 6
As for what era the Pony warships are, as I said earlier in the story, their ships are from the early Pre Dreadnought-Era, which lasted from about 1883, until 1906 when the British launched HMS Dreadnought, thus kicking off the Dreadnought-Era. 9 years after HMS Dreadnought, the USS Texas BB-35 entered service in 1914. The Equestrian ships are from c.1890-1895 or so, so definitely pre-WW1
10979998 Yea, the first thing Rarity has done that's outside standard horn use (outside of her shop) is the diamond shield in the final finale (though I think that's because of the human version doing so) so while she may whine a bit much, she knows when its 'shoulder to the grindstone' (usually) ...
As for Dash, while both her and her EQG counterpart do prefer to be in the air, that doesn't mean this version does (though some of that should slip in (great restraint in not flying to the Texas just to prove her point on fastest flyer) ...
10980312 Aye I can whole heartily agree with ya. It’s always interesting to see a seemingly dead story pop back up in tracking after it’s been buried for 2-3 years Xd
10980298 Well, I'll note this for the future. And I have a plan for Rarity to help the Texas crew in the near future. I won't say how, but it's something right up her alley
And I'll make a note for a Texas sailor to ask RD why she didn't just fly up onto the Texas in Chapter 6, and then have her talk about it
10980314 No, I mean a story that's good, but it's dead-dead. Meaning, it's either been cancelled, been on hiatus for years, or hasn't been updated since 2013-2016, with no new updates in sight
10980316 Hmnmm, think about introducing 'heartsong' if Rare is in her wheelhouse while sewing/seamstress/tailor mode ...
As for the Enterprise circuit (see ST:TMP), I'm pretty sure that any Dash would be a 3-to-4 to one circuit of her own (at various altitudes) due to the time is takes to do one ('so slow') ... Your solution of a 'humbled?'/'chastised?' Dash could work ... [still think she'd be airborne by the second circuit though due to her need for speed]
10980319 Yes I know what ya mean. That was a rough estimate I saw a story come back in 2020 when it’s last chap was like 2014 that’s what I mostly mean by interesting to see a story that’s been dead pop back up.
10980354 Surprised me as well. However was a one time thing haven’t seen it happen since however I know there is that small possibility of it happening so a little light exists in my eyes for old stories like that however it is a little light with a grain of salt.
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I just dropped the Chapter. Read it at your leisure
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well this is a good surprise
Ahh another good chapter can't wait for more to come
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Hello hive vs machine,
And I'm glad that you liked the chapter. I worked really hard on it
10979805
Hello BrOnY4LiFe2,
And I'm glad that you liked the chapter. As for Chapter 6, so far I have plans for the Texas crew to meet the Princesses, David to meet Luna, the Texas to be moored in Fillydelphia for the time being, and I also have plans to finally introduce the Black Baron and his minions, so stay tuned for that
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Ooo can't wait for that to happen I wanna the Texas in some real action
great great chapter! well worth the wait! looking forward to chapter 6. well done!
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Yeah, it'll be great.
And I tentatively have the first battle scene planned for Chapter 7. In it, the Texas will fire her main battery in anger for the first time against an enemy target since 1945
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Hello p61blkwidow,
And I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, and thought that it was well worth the wait. Before too long I'll start Chapter 6, and hopefully it won't take as long, but I can't make any promises yet
a very good chapter to a very good story. it's good to finally see tensions calm down after everything that happened in the previous chapters. I can't wait for the princesses to get the full tour. and I have a feeling the Texas and her crew are going to be an instrumental part for equestria in taking down the black baron. I definitely can't wait for the next chapter.
you might also want to fix this sentence in the chapter.
We still might have need of some need of some good ol' Texas coffee here before too long."
10979837
Hello story smith,
And I'm glad that you liked the chapter, and are looking forward to the Texas crew meeting the Princesses, and then giving them the full tour of the Texas. I have a few fun things planned for this that I think you'll enjoy. And I can't confirm or deny what you said about the Black Baron, but I will say that he might be in for a VERY rude awakening once the Texas becomes involved with the war against him, so stay tuned for that
And thank you for pointing this sentence out. I went back and fixed it
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you're very welcome
Wooooooo awesome
I waited years and it was worth it
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Hello Sentinel053,
And I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, and all of the hard work that I put into making it
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Hello -Skittle-,
And sorry to burst your bubble, but it wasn't "years". By my count, it was about 1 year and 3 months between Chapter 4's release, and Chapter 5's release. But in any case, I'm glad that you enjoyed your read of Chapter 5
Welcome back partner, good to see ya.
10979876
Hello Blue Bolt,
And I never went anywhere really. I've been here the whole time, but I was just not able to write very much for various reasons. But I'm glad that you missed me
Not bad, though rarity was a bit overplayed (if AJ was with her, she would have reminded Rare that she had worked on the farm before and would survive) plus Rarity has never teleported (and why was Dash still shipbound, she should have gone air-born once at the 'ramp' [which would remind the Texas crew that those wings are functional]) ...
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Hey man no problem the Texas is a tough old girl and I’m sure while in equestria she’ll make one hell of a convincing argument
one year it felt both a long and sort time to wait i am glad it here and can't wait what happen next
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Yeah, I think that she will too, which is why the Black Baron and his forces had better watch out!
10979941
Hello Frazikar,
And yeah, I might have overdone the bit with Rarity, however, I only meant for this to be a one-time thing; more as a joke than anything else. I never said that RD was still shipbound. I mean yeah, she could have flown up, though I guess that she decided to climb up with the others. I'll make sure to have her fly in the first scene of Chapter 6, as that does make sense for her. And wait, Rarity never teleported? Well crap............
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Hello RanBro,
And yeah, it's been a long 1 year and 3 months, but it was well worth the wait. I'm glad that you liked Chapter 5, and I'm hoping that Chapter 3 ends up being just as good as this one was
I forgot I had a couple of these stories in my tracking. Well I shall wait for the next one. Or perhaps forget bout it tell it pops into existence on my tracking again who knows.
Hey welcome back!! We missed you
Woooo, NEW CHAPTER!!
Well a fine fuck you to you too, ya c*nt.......
Well alright, not as upset anymore. Dash realizing she went overboard and admitting her mistakes, love to see it.
I gotta say this chapter was well worth the wait. I remember first reading this way back and the first chapter had only been released a week prior to me discovering this. Way before I decided to make an account on here. Glad I did though, makes it so much easier to track stories such as this without having to sift through literal hundreds of bookmarks lol. Excited to see where you take us next on this adventure!
This entire paragraph was mind numbingly dumb. The first part no normal human being would ever say to a new intelligent species and the second part is just childish hippie dippie bs.
Excellent work and what type are the ponies battleship are they ww1 battleship ship or ww2 battleship where ww1 battleship better than ww2 battleship or where they same
10980085
Hello Prince Jules Moonshade,
And I forget about some of the stories in my Tracking feed too, until they update anyway. Then I'm excited to read them
10980092
Hello Kain 26831,
And I've been here the whole time, but I just haven't been able to write as much as I would like. But I'm glad that you missed me though
10980113
Hello SgtAwesome97,
And yeah, 1 year and 3 months later, Chapter 5 is FINALLY here!
10980125
Hello SgtAwesome97,
And I'm glad that you liked RD's redemption here. It wasn't quite as funny as her getting yelled at by the Rear-Admiral in Chapter 4, but it was still a nice touch
And I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. It's been a long 1 year and 3 months, but I'm glad that you enjoyed Chapter 5, and I think you'll enjoy what I have planned for Chapter 6
10980251
Hello DinoKid11,
And thank you
As for what era the Pony warships are, as I said earlier in the story, their ships are from the early Pre Dreadnought-Era, which lasted from about 1883, until 1906 when the British launched HMS Dreadnought, thus kicking off the Dreadnought-Era. 9 years after HMS Dreadnought, the USS Texas BB-35 entered service in 1914. The Equestrian ships are from c.1890-1895 or so, so definitely pre-WW1
10980218
Hello TinMan,
And you can say what you will about this paragraph, but I thought that it was a nice touch
10979998
Yea, the first thing Rarity has done that's outside standard horn use (outside of her shop) is the diamond shield in the final finale (though I think that's because of the human version doing so) so while she may whine a bit much, she knows when its 'shoulder to the grindstone' (usually) ...
As for Dash, while both her and her EQG counterpart do prefer to be in the air, that doesn't mean this version does (though some of that should slip in (great restraint in not flying to the Texas just to prove her point on fastest flyer) ...
10980281
Lol same
10980308
Unless it's a good story, but it's dead. Then I'm sad
10980312
Aye I can whole heartily agree with ya. It’s always interesting to see a seemingly dead story pop back up in tracking after it’s been buried for 2-3 years Xd
10980298
Well, I'll note this for the future. And I have a plan for Rarity to help the Texas crew in the near future. I won't say how, but it's something right up her alley
And I'll make a note for a Texas sailor to ask RD why she didn't just fly up onto the Texas in Chapter 6, and then have her talk about it
10980314
No, I mean a story that's good, but it's dead-dead. Meaning, it's either been cancelled, been on hiatus for years, or hasn't been updated since 2013-2016, with no new updates in sight
10980316
Hmnmm, think about introducing 'heartsong' if Rare is in her wheelhouse while sewing/seamstress/tailor mode ...
As for the Enterprise circuit (see ST:TMP), I'm pretty sure that any Dash would be a 3-to-4 to one circuit of her own (at various altitudes) due to the time is takes to do one ('so slow') ...
Your solution of a 'humbled?'/'chastised?' Dash could work ... [still think she'd be airborne by the second circuit though due to her need for speed]
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Yes I know what ya mean. That was a rough estimate I saw a story come back in 2020 when it’s last chap was like 2014 that’s what I mostly mean by interesting to see a story that’s been dead pop back up.
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It was dormant since 2014, but got a chapter in 2020?! That's insane. I've never heard of that happening before
10980326
That sounds good. I'll consider that for when I have Rarity help the Texas crew
And yeah, I think so too. This could work
10980354
Surprised me as well. However was a one time thing haven’t seen it happen since however I know there is that small possibility of it happening so a little light exists in my eyes for old stories like that however it is a little light with a grain of salt.