SOOOO...

Anyone dumb enough to bet against Luna being Pregnant?

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I doubt anyone's that dumb, but I hope to be proven wrong.

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Oh those spells did not help out at all.

I want to like this, I really do, but it sufferes alot of problems most displaced stories have, even ones I write, and that is pacing, not to mention this feels like a 15 year old's perverted wet dream. The last one I can live with, so long as the actual plot isn't forgotten. But the pacing and now that I mentioned it lack of plot kinda turn me off. I wish you the best of luck with this story and who knows, maybe I'll revisit it and love it. For now though, I can't favorite it and be honest.

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That's fine, not everything is for everyone. I hope you find something you like.

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Thanks for understanding. Some people get all bent of of shape when you dare show a different opinion.

I only hope you don't follow the same path as Hyrulequestria, withe the Fall of Equestria based plotline and excessive MC transformations.
Seriously, that fic went berko on the number of times the MC changed species, and it started to become tedious, not to mention the loss of their 'original' form, which is stupid, to say the least.

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The body mods. will mostly be temporary, a few will be permanent. Any race changes will be contextual, like how traveling through the mirror turns ponies into humans in the show, and traveling through again transforms them back into ponies.

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Okay, good.
Don't get me wrong, I like Hyrulequestria well enough, but it went overboard.

That said, you didn’t bring up whether or not you would use the FoE points.

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I'm still fleshing out the story but I'm most likely not going to use FoE elements in my story.

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That's a relief.
It would be too much of the same thing, if you did.

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After the next chapter is out, I'm going to sit down and plan out the story and all the elements I want to use.

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Well, I didn't get any notice of this chapter until just now, when I was double checking the barred-out fetish tags.
Not even in my Feed.
Didn't show in my unread chapters lists until I un-favourited and re-favourited.

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Strange. I've never had that happen to me before.

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It's happened a bunch of times to me.

I've brought it up to others, and been told it's happened to them, but no-one knows why it happens, nor how to fix it.

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I posted a blog about which Pokemon Krystal should get first. Please vote.

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I posted a blog about which Pokemon Krystal should get first. Please vote.

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Same man, we really need to figure this out, it’s not even just one story or consistent for me

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It’s probably a bug in the code try telling the admins. But then the site could be shut down to fix it… or maybe not don’t know for sure.

This was a good chapter

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I bet she'll be pregnant

Sorry, people. Wasn't done with the chapter yet!

That was a mis-click. The chapter should be done today though.

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Oh lol, thought it was good anyways! Good work and am excited for when you post the full chapter

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I mis-clicked when I went to edit the chapter. They really should space out the edit and publish buttons.

I'm a bit confuse here... So Luna did not changed into Nightmare Moon in madness? Does this mean there is no need to gather Twilight and the Element bearers? Since it seems Krystal just conquered Luna with her kinky techniques.

Wow zorua... not many people take depression seriously enough but that authors note that you put in has definitely earned you some respect from me. Thanks for taking it seriously

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Thanks, I do take depression seriously. I may not be the best author to write about the feelings behind it but I've seen depression tear people to shreds before.

10258616 From one depressed being to you, I can tell you it is appreciated.

Recently found this story and decided to give it a read. The seeming need to put exact measurements in, and the rather excessive amount of fluids involved, really makes me think you tend to spend a goodly amount of time in Corruption of Champions or Flexible Survival. It's not necessarily an issue, but it can be a bit jarring to the flow of the narrative.

On the note of narrative, in most stories I'd rather volubly object to Luna almost immediately jumping the protagonist's bones right after meeting them...but you have done a good job previously of establishing that this is a hyper-sexualized world. Before her banishment, Luna had likely never gone longer than a week without getting laid in a world like this, so the raw need after that long locked away does make sense, and the scene itself was detailed enough without getting bogged down in intricacy even with the aforementioned ridiculously excessive amounts of fluids. So I can live with that. I just hope that you are able to keep the actual plot moving without getting too bogged down into sex scenes. You have in intriguing, and very unusual, world setup going on so I am interested in seeing more of it going forward.

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That is if I can get the motivation to write, depression is a b*tch.