This is so god damn satisfying. I love this hehe

Will Alex get a harem?

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Most likely, I just hope atleast Queenie (chrysalis) joins she is my favorite and always hated it when she was in a bad light

I Really loved this chapter bud, this is one of my favorite stories, (recently) and I really hope you keep going, also good luck Alex, your gonna need it~

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May haps.

As a man once said “I like it, another”.

But on a serious note, I really like the humor that Alex have, and how it’s written so far.

Keep up the good work.

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👍

Alright! Now I don't know if you heard this one before. But since now we got Daybreaker, Nightmare Moon, Queen Chrysalis, and Alex as acting commanders. We need another Warchief to lead in this campaign. Care to give us an idea of who is going to be another commander on the field?

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... do I need another?

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If you want. Got anybody in mind?🤔

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I'm thinking of making a strain called, Whitelight or Black-Aether. This strain is able to not only possess magic, but also use it no matter what form you take. This could be used in countless ways, from powering up melee attacks to using elemental attacks.

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It's not so much that Alex is a threat to Discord, it's that Alex is just very intimidating and Discord was caught off guard. So far, Discord is the only being able to get rid of Alex and Blacklight. By making more people who have it and possibly making a new strain, I'm making that more difficult. I'm not trying to make Alex a Gary Stu, it's just hard not to at times cause with every Carribou he consumes, his Intelligence and knowledge only grows. I'm trying to find a weakness for Blacklight that might be found in Equestria, but again, really hard to do that. Why? Blacklight is a virus unlike anything they have ever seen so trying to get rid of it is going to be difficult. And since its sentient and sapient is whole 'nother slew of problems.

"Nope, and she can't. I have no mind to control." I said as I ripped open the top of my head to show I didn't even have a brain. Several ponies lost their lunches to say the least.

Does this scene remind anyone of a scene from Parasyte, or is that just me

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I mean height to Alex

I have an idea, why don’t you make an organ in nightmare moon and daybreaker new body so Alex could control them, A control gene. This would be the best way to control them and keep them in line.

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Go with Vemon! He clearly tops Spiderman in everyway. Also, when are you releasing a new chapter? I'm actually getting bored waiting, let alone guessing what your up to.

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One, I'm currently working on my 'Choose your own Adventure' story I have right now. Two, Venom is an amazing Anti-hero, but he doesn't have Spider-Man's heart. Three, I will be working on this after I update my other stories and try to get them up and about again.

Any new chapters coming?

Please continue the story it’s very very good

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yeah it's a believable occurrence that has probably happened in real life

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You mean some socially awkward person was hugged by a beautiful woman and they started stumbling over themselves? Yeah, that's probably happened at sometime somewhere.

Excited to see where this goes!

"You speak with a wisdom beyond your years." Luna continued, looking at Chrysalis with a little distaste. "As such, we shall listen to you, as we should have from the very beginning. You have shown no malice towards any of us and yet we treat you like a sleeping Manticore that is about to wake up." Luna said sadly as she bowed her head. "I hope you can forgive us."

As you should. "I fear we have awoke a sleeping giant, and filled them with a terrible resolve..." -Admiral Yamamoto

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... is that from Star Wars or Star Trek?

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It was allegedly said by the Japanese Admiral that masterminded the Dec. 7, 1941 Pearl Harbor attack. After the attacking planes came back and gave their reports, Yamamoto lamented not being able to sink the American aircraft carriers (they were out on patrol).
He was also against invading the American Mainland, "There is a Gun behind every blade of grass."

So basicly the Japanese kicked a Giant(USA) in the shin and expected that Giant to run away screaming. The Giant however, cracked it's knuckles and knocked them loopy.

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... noice.

Not to sound like 'that guy', but when are you going to post more chapters? Cause I'm tired of waiting for something new to come up.

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I would post more, I'm just having trouble figuring out how to continue. I always seem to write myself into corners and have to keep rewriting the same chapter. I'm currently on rewrite number 48... I think. Give or take a few.

Can't wait to see what you do next

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If you need someone to bounce ideas off of I could help you out. I act as a grammer natzi for another author and helped another for a time with bouncing ideas and helping him craft how he wants certain things to go. so I have some experience in this

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Really? That would be great! I'm almost finished with the next chapter but I kinda feel like I'm rushing it.

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Sure. I don't mind helping out from time to time when I have a free moment. I'll dm you to discuss things in more detail. I've seen a few prototype fics on here but I enjoy what you have going here so i don't mind lending a hand.

Moar?

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Have you hear of Carrion?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-L0_TJ4i-o
if not you welcome.

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Very interesting, I might implement some ideas into the story from it. Thx.

update?

It was pointless though as the Hunter C chomped one of the fleeing Caribou in half, head first, before leaping at another one to impale it on it's horns. Meanwhile, I had turned my attention back to the rest of the Caribou on my side. I consumed the Caribou impaled on my tail and began to stalk towards the rest. These ones however were a bit more resilient and took out daggers and other weapons.

I'm okay with this but be warned brawlers are technically the pre-evolution to hunters. (In the first game they didn't exist.)

"Look, I'm gonna figure out how to help her, but I need to talk to Celestia and Luna first. Oh, and Twilight, mind taking a look at this." I say giving Twilight the metal collar as I walked past her with Chrysalis following close behind.. "And don't mind the monster by the front doors." I yelled back at them.

He can probably make, combine, and have the chemicals be in a certain order in order to have the pheromones which are needed to make there food source.