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I want to see what you do with this. This doesn't come off too complex, but doesn't sell itself short either. You have potential here for a fun, entertaining story. Keep it up!
Please update some more.
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It's on its way. I published the first chapter to see what people thought about the idea so I'm making the chapters as I go. Next chapter's practically finished, just need to go through it a few dozen times to make sure I like it so it'll go out sometime in the next 24 hours.
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Thanks dear author i eagerly await for your upcoming update. Keep up the great work.
Nice opening chapter. Really drew me in and got me looking forward to continuing.
Like the idea, but the preceding text dump that was most of this chapter really deserves it's own story. Sooooooo much telling and no showing. I feel as though this story wanted to get past the dull parts but I really want to see a prequel made out of this chapter.
Since he grew up in Equestria, does Cinnamon usually swear clothes? This is an important question to have answered.
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Later you'll learn he generally only wears a Loincloth due to not having a natural way of concealing himself.