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He chose sub-optimal character path... this irks me.
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What's a Gary Stu?
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A Gary Stu is the male variant of a Mary Sue- a character archetype that seemingly has no flaws, and seems to always wrangle a situation to their favor. So far? Yeah, the character has had no real struggle he wasn’t able to diffuse immediately, so it’s a fair statement right now. We’re pretty early on, though, so other than the numerous grammatical errors, it’s fair to say that it’s a little early to judge.
Ok, I'm in love with the sheep
All this titel's should have a attached benefit in one way or another... At the very least something like a light&dark resistance or magic boost 1%. With a lvl 10 they would have a ten procent benefit.
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Basicly a character having skills and abilitys for almost or near no effort involved. My suggestion is to add more details. Skills and talents are one of the main pillars of a RPG sooo... Make it a little event when things are earned, otherwise it made it look cheap.
A god or god like being is that way in a game because he earned his powers. Its one thing to have potencial and another to actualy make it to it maximum effectiveness. That way you avoid Gary Stu as Main Character.
Say goodbye to insomnia with the 'Sleep Baa'
This skill will be a major Boon ♤♡
Technically so are most animals, when they get the chance.
Have I mentioned that before?
With all the wanted murder happy creaturea running rampage, how is anyone still alive
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Like that?
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Don't worry, blood is a liquid that can be used as well.
Or mud after it had rained 👍
With the monsters they murder regularly to level up and feed themself will the blood ink not run dry to soon.