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Is the plan to hord his skills arsenal and than use the back evolution to actually Archiv his true plan on how to look like/ end as his final form?
This form allows to pleasure multiple females at once
Two separate corpses or?
Becoming a skeleton takes a long time. Just saying...
Song of healing? A favorite of mine
Isn't that basically Slavery... Unless he is pulling a Shield Hero.
Ok that Spider is way to soon OP
Totally pulling a 'So i'm Spider, so what?'
Pretty sure Speech don't level up hat fast... A Yoda impression seem more likely. Story convinients?
Fun Dungeon time?
Good to see female characters on the wrong side get just the same treatment as the males.
Sounds a bit bland... Maybe add 2-4 lines explaining how he keeps healing them for like a hour or two, cooldown of abilities are a thing or not?
Ok... I really expected a grand prison break where the slaves support one another fighting. They did have a lot of time to learn about one anothers personalitys and skills to plan a escape...
Would 're-construction' not be more fitting? Becoming younger/reverse of age don't usualy fix stuff
GC's = Gold Coins?
So the Slaves are basicly to found his own Guild or Village?
Can't open the link for the Slave-List without new registry
How will the females that are after AI not going to burn down their Village in construction through infighting... Jax and Black Lizard already are a claw full... Now? Females-Armageddon on steroids
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Will fix that for everyone.
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Also why I choose [Rejuvenation]? Here's why
Can't wait to read the next chapter, keep up the good work.
Hold things yes, use differently working and interacting with separate things? Extreamly unlikely...
Are the Arms and Hands identical or different?
When i play 'Spore', i often give my Species two sets of arms.
One for combat and one for fine manipulation 💪
I’m glad that this part of the story is out and I’m a little disappointed that I was wrong about his new form and freya won’t be out of the running just yet just wait until you try her cooking and see her dance it’s really mesmerizing. Keep up the amazing work you do.
Dis the new Evo all you want but having six arms'd be dope
Finally got the chance to read this chapter and see my baby in it. It was short but I am happy anyways
Main character is overpowered as are his side characters. So strength is not a challenge.
What will it rather be? Political or religious focus?
Nation building like in 'Civilisation V' ?
Musicians are specialized.
- Piano
- Violing
- All kind of blow instruments
Maybe make a distinction, 3-4 sentences well placed can make the world of difference.
A.I. should invent Nerf weapons
( bow, sword, shield etc )
He be bloody rich once they spread