I like how things are setting up for disaster. I'm looking forward to see how things go awry for our main character. And I'm also looking forward to see if the next chapter has the obligatory bathroom encounter scene.

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N-no!

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Maybe...

Hmm, this one is definitely more calm and slice of life-ish due to our main character, I rather like it. I'd swear if I didn't already know who this was by I wouldn't be surprised if no clop even happened. Just what is gonna possess these ponies to bang?

Big Mac over here smelling the wine on his breath lmao.

Heavens, this main character is unsufferable, everything will lead him to a disaster on a personal level, juvie, being alone, being scammed, being the one who will take the blame instead of his "friends" etc.
As much as he deserves a good hammering from life, I don't really want him to, but he'll have to learn his lesson right?
Anyway, good work, and I think this chapter flows even better than the previous ones, great job.

The other characters I've looked forward to see getting laid, this one I'm looking forward to seeing him get fucked.

I can't think of a better unicorn to trot through a patch of Joke than this colt. Someone needs a dose of karmic backlash.

Now I'm curious, most of the 2nd POV chars are pretty lowkey, but this guy? I am curious as to how this is gonna go, little worried too if I'm being honest.

But, I am gonna stick around, because Pear Butter deserves all the love she can get!

I'm really starting to hate this kid.

I do want the main character to flirt with Tree Shaker, he met in the last chapter.

I'm calling mixed race parentage combined with a lower class income and severely racist bullies. Which led to a life of general unhappiness and delinquency culminating in a battery/assault/arson charge.

I Like this, it’s interesting.

Oh man...things will not be good.