9320109 Of course, my personal tastes lie with more realistic representations of the world and randomness does not fit that well. I will say that this story is amusing at times so that's something. One thing that you really fail at is all the randomly missed letters. Really, all you have to do is put this into Google docs and bam fix all the spelling mistakes.
9320164 If you spotted them, would you like to point a couple out as a way for me to correct them?
As I don't use Google Docs for the program freezes as I try to do anything in it. Tried to correct it with the help from support but just can't seem to correct the issue.
9320179 One thing you may consider is a word processor program known as Libreoffice. This will allow you to write your stories into it and get the convenience of a spell check and basic grammar checker. The program is free. Its not as feature rich as MS Word, but for what you are doing, it should work nicely. Here is a link to download the program.
If I'm being honest, this is the first story to use any form of real drug as a story element, instead of an later obstacle that I've read before... and I am honestly pleased by it
I believe this will be a very fun adventure of randomness, with a few good trips and maybe a couple bad ones.
This shit is funny as fuck.
hahahahha I love that ending
And... You lost me. Way too random for me, I'm out.
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How unfortunate, but everybody has their tastes. I have mine, and you yours.
I couldn't stop laughing at the end pls giVE me more.
I'm enjoying my dive into insanity here.
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it has the random tag though... what exactly did you expect?
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Of course, my personal tastes lie with more realistic representations of the world and randomness does not fit that well. I will say that this story is amusing at times so that's something. One thing that you really fail at is all the randomly missed letters. Really, all you have to do is put this into Google docs and bam fix all the spelling mistakes.
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If you spotted them, would you like to point a couple out as a way for me to correct them?
As I don't use Google Docs for the program freezes as I try to do anything in it. Tried to correct it with the help from support but just can't seem to correct the issue.
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"And I though the ponies were a nice race"
"I do would like a break" unless you're doing this for the unrealistic high effect.
"That's were you opened it to?"
"directly to a princesses chamber"
"and air was thick with smoke"
"Starlight was behined her"
"because my sun works to hard"
...The title of the chapter...
Though this chapter was decent in this area, the other chapters had some more weirdness to them.
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I appreciate the feedback, thank you for pointing these out. I will edit them when I have time away from my studies.
YES! death is the best!also i agree celestia, fuck twilight indeed for trying to lower the sun. PRAISE THE SUN!
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One thing you may consider is a word processor program known as Libreoffice. This will allow you to write your stories into it and get the convenience of a spell check and basic grammar checker. The program is free. Its not as feature rich as MS Word, but for what you are doing, it should work nicely. Here is a link to download the program.
https://www.libreoffice.org/
I’m died
Maaaaan, that's some guuud weed...
We need Treehugger emoticon...
I swear this story gets better and better as each chapter gets posted.
I suppose Death is a character tag in this story
The next ten seconds:
Fluttershy sighed as she facehooved. "They're inebriated."
Rarity gave her a sideways glance, "How exactly would you know that, Darling?"
Fluttershy looked up, "Treehugger farms some plants with similar effects. She may have convinced me to give it a chance once." She blushed, slightly.
Keep up the good work
Statement: I'm dieing for the first time in over 37 millennia.
The fact that they hotboxed the room is beautiful
Fo real though, fuck you Twilight
How does a equine even
How can i get what they have
I promise, it WILL not turn into a Luna X Thing fic.
This Wont stop me from making bone zone jokes
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I guess you'll just have to be prepared to die.
If I'm being honest, this is the first story to use any form of real drug as a story element, instead of an later obstacle that I've read before... and I am honestly pleased by it