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your concerned skeleton image made me chuckle, take my upvote sir
Una interesante historia me gusto la expresión de lunar al mencionar al señor muerte. Bien hecho siga así...
It’s...interesting? The conversation between death and the heavenly advisor was a bit long winded and rambling, but you hit enough new ideas to keep me curious.
This is best story in months!
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Yeah, but I had that interruption with Delmar to cut it off.
Kinda worked I suppose.
their species and the world are so lucky! magic, good immortal guiders, and leaders to keep bad things in check, come in handy to keeps the multiple intelligent species and animals well balance and happy so they haven't tried to kill each other on resources or land plus with those spirits and bad things that feed on hate and negative emotions make a species more open to working past differences for survival and the biggest thing im sure death shall appreciate is the control of the very forces of nature and its natural order plus those fix it artifacts and magic solutions there so lucky.
*CONCERN*
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I share your concern
I'll say you did. Entertain yourself with more of this.
You should get bored more often.
It is wrong to picture Death as just being Skeletor.
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NYEHH! I'LL GET YOU HE-MAN!
This is quiet entertaining, please continue to write.
It’s not every day that a story that I approve gets featured. Well done.
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It's not everyday you decide to snort salt on accident and you get this story.
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Me alegra que te guste la historia
Perdon si el espanol es duro
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...how do you decide to accidentally do something?
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I don't think that was salt, if my zip-lock bags being empty is a reliable clue...
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Exactly
This was lovely. Be bored more. Cause this shit is tasty
*Sees picture of skeleton. Skeleton=Death Metal *processing* *Idea reached*
SKELETONS!!! This story has Death Metal! I must read later. There had better be lots of booze and death metal in here!
1st chapter post read edit: Hmm, various comedic undertones done somewhat well. A misspelling or two...
Pending the fixing of spelling errors, the 1st chapter will be Soviet Approved.
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If you would point them out I will be happy to correct any errors I may have missed.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZTg6hg1miFg
You'll understand soon
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Let me see....I think here.
Fix the word 'behind', fix the word 'que' to 'cue', and fix the word "aren't", and you should be set from what I see.
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Why Star Wars?
https://youtu.be/H7O17O1t-9g
That image is beautiful...
I can't stop hearing him as skeletor
i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/765/682/652.jpg
Ok, so can I approve of the progression this story has taken? Not really. This story was great in chapter 1 as it featured some pretty cool humor, but fell prey to easy, boring sappiness in its progression, especially in the last two chapters featuring happy-go-lucky cuddle fic bonding. This story needs to go back to more crude humor as it first appeared in the first chapter instead of being a giggly playground paradise. This fic seems to me to be turning into an OC/Luna ship fic pretty quick.
Story is fun so far but the interactions between characters seems a little stiff and forced.
If I'm not dying, it's not spicy enough.
I have that meme in my folder already.
Lord of death is actually my Xbox gamer tag
Bitter is the only thing I have a problem with. That's why I hate coffee.
I like that line, can't say I've seen someone use it before
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Not to worry, next chapter will be a surprising one I hope.
I believe this will be a very fun adventure of randomness, with a few good trips and maybe a couple bad ones.
This shit is funny as fuck.
hahahahha I love that ending
And... You lost me. Way too random for me, I'm out.
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How unfortunate, but everybody has their tastes. I have mine, and you yours.
I couldn't stop laughing at the end pls giVE me more.
I'm enjoying my dive into insanity here.
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it has the random tag though... what exactly did you expect?
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Of course, my personal tastes lie with more realistic representations of the world and randomness does not fit that well. I will say that this story is amusing at times so that's something. One thing that you really fail at is all the randomly missed letters. Really, all you have to do is put this into Google docs and bam fix all the spelling mistakes.
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If you spotted them, would you like to point a couple out as a way for me to correct them?
As I don't use Google Docs for the program freezes as I try to do anything in it. Tried to correct it with the help from support but just can't seem to correct the issue.
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"And I though the ponies were a nice race"
"I do would like a break" unless you're doing this for the unrealistic high effect.
"That's were you opened it to?"
"directly to a princesses chamber"
"and air was thick with smoke"
"Starlight was behined her"
"because my sun works to hard"
...The title of the chapter...
Though this chapter was decent in this area, the other chapters had some more weirdness to them.
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I appreciate the feedback, thank you for pointing these out. I will edit them when I have time away from my studies.
YES! death is the best!also i agree celestia, fuck twilight indeed for trying to lower the sun. PRAISE THE SUN!