And if you could please put in a reference to Griever from NLOAC. I can see the quote "if you hear the sound of laughter over the sound of people screaming and dying you should run anywhere but towards it" fitting Alucard.
“I think what is setting you off, is that this is the first pony in a very long time that doesn't idolize you as a god.” Luna said while chuckling.
Yeah, because the one thing everyone knows will piss off Celestia is when ponies don't idolize her as a god.
It's weird. The story started out with a pretty accurate grasp on Alucard's characterization and the ponies, but he seems to be turning into his abridged personality (without any understanding as to what makes that funny) while the ponies (Celestia in particular) seem to slowly be turning into caricatures. I feel like the story doesn't know what tone it wants to have because it seems to be all over the place right now.
9376403 some of this stuff will be explained in the next 6 chapters, I cant say much cause i would spoil the entire arc, like celestia's attitude.
and like I said in the beginning , this Alucard is free of the influence of the millions of souls he had, so I grab onto that to modify a bit his personality, he's still reckless and stuff but with a bigger human side.
Well done agaun my friend and next time we tilk i have some Theories about who the villan is. Oh and by the way. You sneaky devil i saw all those abridged references. I would have thought that the blond piece of shit (Luce Valentine ) would be blueblood. I thought we were going to have a scene about him being a demigod, but nope. We just get a short moment with luna in his room as a reference or a teaser.
Great work as always and i look forward to the next chapter.
Also you have started the shipping train. Good luck with that.
I mean she has been basically worshipped by ponies for, at least, a thousand years and would subconsciously start feeling that it is the norm for others to treat her like that, not to mention that she is rather powerful so any potential enemy would treat her with a grest deal of respect as well.
And then, suddenly, there is a pony that doesn't respect her unless she proves that she is worthy of his respect, which is something she hasn't had to do for a very long time.
The fact that he seemingly respects Luna but not her is probably also getting to her.
9379189 I believe the arguments with reasonable claims of Celestia acting out of character is quite valid. I honestly believe that it's not a problem in my view, yet it is still apparent from her character. Though if more characters are written as leaning in the OOC category, I would recommend using the Alternate History Tag in the story's description. It helps readers know what kind of context this story is set in.
9379279 I mean it is a alternative universe cause alucard is here , but Celestia attitude is going to be explained in the next few chapters . Wait for the revelation
9376403 do not forget she had to put up with a super pinkie party and licked for a long time his mood was not cold or indifferent enough for the jokes of alucard at least this and my explanation for this, and with the two fled leaving celestia, the mare 6 and crinsom 5 to give him with that
I'm just waiting for the #life hack reference.
And if you could please put in a reference to Griever from NLOAC. I can see the quote "if you hear the sound of laughter over the sound of people screaming and dying you should run anywhere but towards it" fitting Alucard.
Loved alicard fucking with celastia also can’t wait for alucaird to really mind fuck his friends with his gender bending trick
Is this based on the original or on the abridged series?
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a bit of both, is going have comedy like the abridged, but the history will follow the canon events of Alucard past.
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When did he go her?
I loved the references and I feel the way you portray celestia is very fitting I personally always viewed her as having a ego.
Yeah, because the one thing everyone knows will piss off Celestia is when ponies don't idolize her as a god.
It's weird. The story started out with a pretty accurate grasp on Alucard's characterization and the ponies, but he seems to be turning into his abridged personality (without any understanding as to what makes that funny) while the ponies (Celestia in particular) seem to slowly be turning into caricatures. I feel like the story doesn't know what tone it wants to have because it seems to be all over the place right now.
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9376403
some of this stuff will be explained in the next 6 chapters, I cant say much cause i would spoil the entire arc, like celestia's attitude.
and like I said in the beginning , this Alucard is free of the influence of the millions of souls he had, so I grab onto that to modify a bit his personality, he's still reckless and stuff but with a bigger human side.
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Can we at some point get a 'Bitches love cannons'?
We NEED to have a smut scene in this bitch
I like the art, it really goes well with the story.
10% more funny
I feel like this story just like The Maretian is one of those stories that nearly every time there is a new chapter it is featured.
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Which is quite surprising since this story just got over 300 likes. And I personally believe that the author deserves it!
Not read it yet. The Crimson Fucker makes his way to Equestria... I've been on the look out for a story like this.
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thanks!
I'm glad you liked it so far.
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In the last three episodes
Did NOT expect Alucard to react like that at the end, I wonder if he will end up falling for Luna?
I wonder what the first thing he will have to hunt ... And if there will be any witnesses to that horror show
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Indeed he/she does that and many more.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7KSOk0hTSyI
Any time i see alucard this song starts up in my head.
It would either be stocked with blood or a bevy of sexy ladies/mares.
Well done agaun my friend and next time we tilk i have some Theories about who the villan is. Oh and by the way. You sneaky devil i saw all those abridged references. I would have thought that the blond piece of shit (Luce Valentine ) would be blueblood. I thought we were going to have a scene about him being a demigod, but nope. We just get a short moment with luna in his room as a reference or a teaser.
Great work as always and i look forward to the next chapter.
Also you have started the shipping train. Good luck with that.
Until later my friend.
HA, sure
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Is it though ?
I mean she has been basically worshipped by ponies for, at least, a thousand years and would subconsciously start feeling that it is the norm for others to treat her like that, not to mention that she is rather powerful so any potential enemy would treat her with a grest deal of respect as well.
And then, suddenly, there is a pony that doesn't respect her unless she proves that she is worthy of his respect, which is something she hasn't had to do for a very long time.
The fact that he seemingly respects Luna but not her is probably also getting to her.
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everything will be clearer soon, just wait :P
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I believe the arguments with reasonable claims of Celestia acting out of character is quite valid. I honestly believe that it's not a problem in my view, yet it is still apparent from her character. Though if more characters are written as leaning in the OOC category, I would recommend using the Alternate History Tag in the story's description. It helps readers know what kind of context this story is set in.
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I mean it is a alternative universe cause alucard is here , but Celestia attitude is going to be explained in the next few chapters . Wait for the revelation
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Understood, just giving my friendly advice here.
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I just added the alt universe tag.:P
Is it weird I can read all of this with their voices without trying? If so, I don't care because this was awesome!
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do not forget she had to put up with a super pinkie party and licked for a long time
his mood was not cold or indifferent enough for the jokes of alucard
at least this and my explanation for this, and with the two fled leaving celestia, the mare 6 and crinsom 5 to give him with that
I see Alucard is becoming the TFS version.
They don't know that Alucard a vampire yet I whandre what will happen when they do
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Perfect
Love this story
HEY!
Don't knock it till you try it.
Ha! Told you. Soulmates ♡
Brilliant story. Most beloved characters and a MC that is a delight no matter the situation. Unless your his enemy
Dracula would probably hit more in the Crystal Empire... Alucard? Probably everywhere.