Good chapter dear author but it was really short to be honest with you i hope your next chapter will be longer keep up the great work.

I love the original Fable 1 and Terraria, and have The Witcher 3 on Steam but haven't played it yet. I like the story and am happy to see the three games in it, especially Terraria because of how little exposure it gets on this site, but I feel like it wouldn't make a huge difference if it was just Terraria and not all three.

Every "Displaced" type story I've read that turns the protagonist into a character from a video game also changes the Pony World a bit so that it has aspects of that game in it. Strong story elements, too.

Giving Durin both Hero and Witcher powers is cool, but those "game mechanics" don't change the fact that the entire story is handled with Terraria alone, aside from that Gravehag.

Basically, it would be cool to see a Hero's Guild, or more Witchers show up, to flesh out the World to include story elements of those games as well.

Just read the whole thing, and I'm really enjoying it so far. The OCs both feel like real, emotional, beings with realistic responses. Tora is a great character, her attitude and linguistics are an absolute joy to read. Durin is solid as well, he's responding in reasonable ways, doesn't feel crazy overpowered, and seems to be showing real development as he goes along. Lovely work all the way around.

I do have to disagree with the notion of bringing other Witchers into the world, though. Part of what makes Durin compelling and something I'm interested to see the development of is his sole occupant aspect. Watching him adapt to that circumstance, and the reactions of others around him, would be less impactful if there were suddenly more like him.

Regardless, great work so far and I'm looking forward to more!

9709242 I'm afraid there is a problem storywise with that. You see, the idea is that all these elements didn't exist until Durin entered the world. However, I do see your point, and will endeavor to add more Fable and Witcher elements.

9709312 Thank you! It's great to hear you like it so much. If I'm being honest, I was worried the progression would be seen as lackluster, and Nova has been working hard on Tora's speech patterns, as a previous reader pointed out that her speech was unrealistic.

So yeah, it's great to hear that you enjoy it so much!

you gave the nice cat-lady a mosin? A fecking mosin? The only good things about the mosin, would be that its cheap and would probably fire if you pulled it, rusty and coated in mud, from the bottom of a russian ice-lake. the Mauser and lee enfields are much better bolt action rifles, with functionally superior specs. I got to hold an enfield once, as well as a mosin. The Enfield has an action so smooth, a german assault on a british line in ww1 was convinced every trooper had a machinegun. Why not get her an enfield? Or better yet, considering all the zombies they just fough, and 1897 trench-gun with slugs. And teach her to slam-fire.

Do not change this chapter in any way. It is a perfect representation of what their future holds.

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Just giver her a cannon. Bitches love cannons.

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Yes, but she's a cat, I think she'd still like a cannon though.

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Thank you. I didn't want to be a downer about saying that, cause the story is really cool.

9710019 It's no trouble, friend, I understand, and I thank you for the compliment.

Really enjoying this story and like the concept behind it as I have not really read many Terraria based crossovers however it seems that’s all this is and thus I’d like to see more elements of fable and Witcher all tho can’t say I know the Witcher to well due to having never played it. But other then that great story so far and can’t wait to see more! Also can’t wait to see that romance be put into play among other things as it’s so hard to find a good adventure and romance now a due to having read most of the completed ones I feel.

9710165 Me and Nova are glad you are enjoying the story, and don't worry, the arc after next we'll be showing as much of Fable and Witcher as we can, though we will admit that it will be a Terrarian based event still. Plenty of Witcher and Fable themes though, no worries.

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Eh, details. But yes, she most likely would.

Then Durin’s hand crackled with electricity, and he thrust his palm out, sending thousands of volts through the corpses. He followed this up with a blast of fire, thoroughly cooking them via both fire and lightning.

Whenever somebody shoots lightning out of their Hands I think of this
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Sg14jNbBb-8