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Welp, poor flufle, at least we know more about the world, ponies and Dagon herd, anyone else are monogamous, with minoans having some exceptions, possibly for some traditions in the past or something.
Cool
Nani?!
Things are getting interesting.
This whole chapter was just a big pile of "wat"
9756210 It was? That can't be good...
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Nono, not confusion "wat". Ridiculously hilarious "wat".
Just binges this. All the way from chapter one. Twas good. I love the Terraria things, since Terraria is one of my favourite games, meaning I also get most of the references, unlike the witcher and fable, which I can only understand from a minimum database made from mainly osmosis. In other words. Keep up the good work, kyu~!
I APPROVE THIS MEME!!
This reminds me that real-life cats can't actually taste sweetness, and that most sweet things aren't good for them in general.
You also would not want to receive oral sex from a cat, what with their sandpaper tongues and all.
Tora only gave the griffon 123 bits for the new meat. 24x5+3=123.
Ok. Ok. I haven't seen Fluffle -Puff in almost any decent fic in practically my entire time on the site.
As such thanks. Kindof hard to write in a character who is mostly silent and doesn't rely on language. Otherwise story seems ok so far. A bit of progress here.
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Dear author where's the update.
9768837 I'm afraid the date has been pushed back once again, thanks to a job interview and it's fallout. I should have the update and new chapter up some time tomorrow.
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thanks.
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Dear author please tell me that you are going to update your story soon.
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I just saw your other comments and I was feeling the same and I hope so too this is a very unique mixture of story elements that I enjoy very much
9771247 I am deeply sorry, you two, for the delays. It's been taking me days to get my work stuff in order, and I'm afraid I'm not sure when the update will be ready at this point. Hopefully it will be by the end of today, but it might just be by the time of tomorrow. Literally just reading the handbook for work has taken most of my time.
977163 Fine craftsmanship takes time don't worry about bro I'd enjoy your story very much and I'm waiting for more (I have waited a year for a story to update I'm quite patient especially when it's a high quality)
9772468 Thank you, I appreciate that.
Your fic is good but In my opinion the action is not enough to justify slice of life chapters out of nowhere, and it feels that the main protagonist is Tora and her friends. Also another problem I have is that the protagonist is too naive, doesn’t fight ponies ( I guess it would make sense if he doesn’t want a bad rep, but they are hunting him anyways, so it makes no sense), as soon as he meets Tora he gives her armor and better weapons (why, she’s a merc, she’s hunting him for money, and he doesn’t know her well enough to trust her with all that), then he tells her the truth about his planet and his powers. I mean if the protagonist is Tora then it makes perfect sense that everything would fall into place for her and she would get better equipment and overall more attention than Durin himself this would also explain why this is a slice of life with some action but if the protagonist is Durin, shouldn’t he at least get the most screen time out of everyone?
9817464 I do agree he doesn't get as much screen time, and that is what we are working on changing. However, if you don't know why he's not going after the ponies nor why he gave Tora armor, then, excuse my rudeness, but you seem to have not realized that a core part of Durin's personality is that he prefers and enjoys helping others. He is a rare personality type called an Advocate, which is a personality Martin Luther King Jr. shared.
Albeit Durin is not a copy paste of the personality, so he's a bit more standoffish.
Again, apologies for my rudeness, 'tis not my intent to be so.