Chrysalis places an ad in a local paper looking for victims to lay eggs inside of and kill. She gets a reply from the one pony she never would have expected, and then breeds an army to take over Canterlot
HA This has nothing to do with your story besides its title... Seems my ad blocker is so sensitive to ads its closes your stories main page when opened in a new tab
9171247 While you're at it, what's with using "alicorn" to mean "changeling queen", did I miss something? It made the reference to Twilight as "the alicorn" in the scene with Celestia and Rarity confusing.
And as a note on the description, I would recommend organizing it with chapters arranged vertically and content overviews to the side (like Headless Rainbow does), instead of completely-vertical. It would at least make listing things feasible.
HA This has nothing to do with your story besides its title... Seems my ad blocker is so sensitive to ads its closes your stories main page when opened in a new tab
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It was originally meant to only be a 5'000 word commission. I should update the story description.
Lots of instances of "Rairty" this chapter. There's also a sentence fragment of "Chrysalis, who had vanished."
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I should fix this. I will tomorrow.
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While you're at it, what's with using "alicorn" to mean "changeling queen", did I miss something? It made the reference to Twilight as "the alicorn" in the scene with Celestia and Rarity confusing.
And as a note on the description, I would recommend organizing it with chapters arranged vertically and content overviews to the side (like Headless Rainbow does), instead of completely-vertical. It would at least make listing things feasible.
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Alicorns are horses with wings and horns, so not at all. A bug horse with horns and wings is still an alicorn.
Thanks for the recommendation too. I think I'm just gonna give up with the list though XD.