Chrysalis places an ad in a local paper looking for victims to lay eggs inside of and kill. She gets a reply from the one pony she never would have expected, and then breeds an army to take over Canterlot
9172157 I'm pretty sure that's your headcanon. I believe that most of us define "alicorn" to be "a pony with both a horn and wings". And no, a changeling isn't exactly a pony nor a horse.
But then again, that's just me; besides, this is your story and your headcanon. When it comes to other stories though…
9184874 Well most of us don't touch ourselves to ponies getting eggs laid in their brain, but here we are. If that one "incorrect" use of a word is your big issue with this story, then allow me to cackle madly. You did not need to waste my time once again pointing out an issue that I have already addressed, I choose to use the word alicorn because it is the closest description to what a changeling is besides a monster or a bug horse. Mixing up the words I chose to use adds interest to the story, and if people really have an issue with me using one word out of place, they are free to go and read another fifty thousand story based around Chrysails laying parasites into the brains of ponies.
By the way, as far as I am aware, this is the only such story on the site. My story, my rules. Don't like it? Throw money at me to create a story how you like it. #Advertising (I'm just grumpy because nobody is ever "How's your day? I liked the story!" It's always whining. I guess it is to be expected writing what I do, but it makes me grouchy)
9184902 Hey hey, no need to be that agressive. I was just stating my opinion without any ill intent, and neither was I trying to force it on you. I get that some people are jerks about pedantic things like this, but I resent being seen as one of them, I'll have you know; I do my best to tone down aggressiveness.
Always find it strange that the majority of the time people write Celestia as easily broken and Luna as this unflappable badass but in the show Celestia has always been defiant to villains and the one time Luna has been in charge she bawled like a baby when things went south.
9185066 I see it like this because she got her ass kicked by chrysalis and totally ignored the warnings of Twilight, a very studious pony who she trusted more then almost anyone else, even though Twilight had no reason to lie. That was really, really stupid. We see an alt reality version where she does stuff, but that is an alt reality, so gong off this realities version of Celestia, we see her do a few things: Stop a Lord of chaos using a super weapon when he was not expecting it. Banish her sister to the moon for just wanting to be treated as an equal. Get her ass kicked by the Lord of Chaos when she got the weapon took off her, and rather then sending in guards to get them, she sends in her best student and some of her friends, who she barely knows. Get her ass kicked by a changeling queen the student she trusts so much tried to warn her about. Send her student into a stupid amount of danger in the Crystal Empire. I won't list everything, but yeah, you can see why a lot of people think she sucks.
Now for Luna: Turns into Nightmare Moon Was banished for 1000 years to the moon, came back and did not hold a grudge against her sister, even though her sister did not even bother to tell her nobody uses the Canterlot voice. Creates a monster that almost escapes into the real world and wipes out all of pony kind.
I don't see her as stronger then her sister, but she almost certainly has a stronger will because she did not go mad or hold a grudge after a thousand years on the moon. In this story she was put out on the front lines because I decided not to use Batponies, and I felt that Luna would not want to sit around doing nothing while her sister ordered around the royal guard and managed everything. Without her own army to command, that left Luna with the only remaining option of getting her hooves dirty.
I hope you enjoyed the stupid amount of thought I put into a clopfic.
9185246 Not saying Celestia has the best plans just saying that when she is faced against things stronger than she is she doesn’t show fear and is defiant. ie she is someone of a strong will.
Ive always seen the fact that Luna turned into NMM in the first place a sign of a weak mind, instead of voicing her complaints and doing something about not being as popular as her sister she let it fester until her jealousy reached a boiling point. To me it is like saying a school shooter/spree killer has a strong will. Then she again displayed a weak will when she lost control of the tantabus and immediately gave up all hope. If losing against something of your own creation in the domain you control is not a sign of a weak mind I don’t know what is.
When Celestia lost to Chrysalis she didn’t start bawling her eyes out, she immediately tried to come up with another plan however hopeless it may have been. Celestia’s problems in the show have always been her affinity towards non-violence, we’ve seen that when there is no other option she will resort to it however. In pretty much all the other timelines we saw where there was no main6 she had to have stopped NMM without the elements, and that she was willing to fight in the front lines when there was not a non-violent option.
9391570 I meant chief cook, I just used the shorthand for it. The word use is a little weird, but it is still valid. I did not use cook because the word looks weird in my head, and my brain does not like it XD. I don't get on with words of french origin for some reason.
9172157
I'm pretty sure that's your headcanon. I believe that most of us define "alicorn" to be "a pony with both a horn and wings". And no, a changeling isn't exactly a pony nor a horse.
But then again, that's just me; besides, this is your story and your headcanon. When it comes to other stories though…
9184874
Well most of us don't touch ourselves to ponies getting eggs laid in their brain, but here we are. If that one "incorrect" use of a word is your big issue with this story, then allow me to cackle madly. You did not need to waste my time once again pointing out an issue that I have already addressed, I choose to use the word alicorn because it is the closest description to what a changeling is besides a monster or a bug horse. Mixing up the words I chose to use adds interest to the story, and if people really have an issue with me using one word out of place, they are free to go and read another fifty thousand story based around Chrysails laying parasites into the brains of ponies.
By the way, as far as I am aware, this is the only such story on the site. My story, my rules. Don't like it? Throw money at me to create a story how you like it.
#Advertising
(I'm just grumpy because nobody is ever "How's your day? I liked the story!" It's always whining. I guess it is to be expected writing what I do, but it makes me grouchy)
9184902
Hey hey, no need to be that agressive. I was just stating my opinion without any ill intent, and neither was I trying to force it on you. I get that some people are jerks about pedantic things like this, but I resent being seen as one of them, I'll have you know; I do my best to tone down aggressiveness.
9184929
It's all chill. I'm not really being aggressive. I'm just being grumpy.
Always find it strange that the majority of the time people write Celestia as easily broken and Luna as this unflappable badass but in the show Celestia has always been defiant to villains and the one time Luna has been in charge she bawled like a baby when things went south.
9185066
I see it like this because she got her ass kicked by chrysalis and totally ignored the warnings of Twilight, a very studious pony who she trusted more then almost anyone else, even though Twilight had no reason to lie. That was really, really stupid. We see an alt reality version where she does stuff, but that is an alt reality, so gong off this realities version of Celestia, we see her do a few things:
Stop a Lord of chaos using a super weapon when he was not expecting it.
Banish her sister to the moon for just wanting to be treated as an equal.
Get her ass kicked by the Lord of Chaos when she got the weapon took off her, and rather then sending in guards to get them, she sends in her best student and some of her friends, who she barely knows.
Get her ass kicked by a changeling queen the student she trusts so much tried to warn her about.
Send her student into a stupid amount of danger in the Crystal Empire.
I won't list everything, but yeah, you can see why a lot of people think she sucks.
Now for Luna:
Turns into Nightmare Moon
Was banished for 1000 years to the moon, came back and did not hold a grudge against her sister, even though her sister did not even bother to tell her nobody uses the Canterlot voice.
Creates a monster that almost escapes into the real world and wipes out all of pony kind.
I don't see her as stronger then her sister, but she almost certainly has a stronger will because she did not go mad or hold a grudge after a thousand years on the moon. In this story she was put out on the front lines because I decided not to use Batponies, and I felt that Luna would not want to sit around doing nothing while her sister ordered around the royal guard and managed everything. Without her own army to command, that left Luna with the only remaining option of getting her hooves dirty.
I hope you enjoyed the stupid amount of thought I put into a clopfic.
9185246
Not saying Celestia has the best plans just saying that when she is faced against things stronger than she is she doesn’t show fear and is defiant. ie she is someone of a strong will.
Ive always seen the fact that Luna turned into NMM in the first place a sign of a weak mind, instead of voicing her complaints and doing something about not being as popular as her sister she let it fester until her jealousy reached a boiling point. To me it is like saying a school shooter/spree killer has a strong will. Then she again displayed a weak will when she lost control of the tantabus and immediately gave up all hope. If losing against something of your own creation in the domain you control is not a sign of a weak mind I don’t know what is.
When Celestia lost to Chrysalis she didn’t start bawling her eyes out, she immediately tried to come up with another plan however hopeless it may have been. Celestia’s problems in the show have always been her affinity towards non-violence, we’ve seen that when there is no other option she will resort to it however. In pretty much all the other timelines we saw where there was no main6 she had to have stopped NMM without the elements, and that she was willing to fight in the front lines when there was not a non-violent option.
9185317
Well she didn't show fear. She got her ass kicked though. Luna kept some of her personality because....
Because
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9184951
Well, misunderstanding resolved, I guess. While I want to say a few more things, I'll keep those to myself.
I think you meant "chef" and not "chief".
9391570
I meant chief cook, I just used the shorthand for it. The word use is a little weird, but it is still valid. I did not use cook because the word looks weird in my head, and my brain does not like it XD. I don't get on with words of french origin for some reason.