You know, considering this fic's premise, it'd be freaking hilarious if Flash arrived and was corrupted instead-Equestria was already lewder than he could possibly imagine.
I doubt I'll read this, as it's not my the usual style I like to read, but your description made me think of the above. So...have a comment and a good luck, I suppose.
9094803 Sorry, but neither Alternative Perversion nor I are bound by your particular tastes or demands of a story. We wanted to write anthro and we did that. If that offends you, that I ask you to ignore this story and go on to ones which you like more.
Anthro is a legitimate, stylistic choice for those who dislike the pony-shape, but still want to stay as close to the design of the show as possible. If we wanted to write them as human, we would have done so.
I´m sorry, that you don´t like this, but we can´t help you there. I can recommend some Equestria Girls fic on this very site or other fanfictions. Other than that, I can´t help you. I still hope, you have a plesant time.
9091959 Actually theres a joke story title that says ... been a while .. i think it was .. please downvote this story ...it had like 900? Downvotes i think... Like I said been awhile. I won't downvote this story ... it's written well which is worth the upvote and just because I hate flash 2nd only to timberspruce the pedophile ... hes 21 hes co director of the camp also it takes 3 years to get a counselor degree .. even if he's 18 getting college credits as a colledge student volunteer camp counsellor he's a adult in a position of authority and sci twis a teen student he's a fkn creep. If they met up when he was a high school student that'd be better what was the writers thinking im betting a brony writer just wanted his oc to get with a twilight. Sorry side tracked but yah i can't downvote this story you explained exactly the premise of the story and what to expect ... flash corrupting mares ... for those against non con, corruption why are you reading this plus the author hasn't confirmed a bad ending we may see the tables turned.
Sunburst is such a pushover. And Starlight? She thirsty, but denial isn't just a river in Zebrica. Maybe if Starlight is throwing herself at him kissing his hooves, then she'll get some Sunny D.
I am very impressed with your character development, you have taken the time to take an OC, and give them a background so I am actually invested in the characters... It is my sincere hope you continue this, as it is an exception to the normally tame stories here, unfortunately most of these become a "flash in the pan" where the author writes a few chapters then loses interest or time...
I would really like to see a story where Flash, ultimately achieves all his goals...this story has the potential to be both epic and to put Fall of Equestria t shame if you stay the course
I like this story and I *love* the part with the strip club, mares being coerced into stripping and sex work is the hottest thing ever, especially when they're used for pleasure toys when they're not being used to turn a profit. I'm really hoping for more of this arc in this story.
Holy crap, two new chapters already?! your not messing around.
I love it
Flash needs to dominate twilight
Faveorited this and tracking it. Its good especially showing how flash is doing this by corrupting and making them horny. Good job
No! Come on I was just about to read this. Stop ruining every good story by making it anthro
9094512
Um... Sorry. I prefer the humanoid shape.
9094598
I prefer anthro and ponyfied so this is still good to me
You know, considering this fic's premise, it'd be freaking hilarious if Flash arrived and was corrupted instead-Equestria was already lewder than he could possibly imagine.
I doubt I'll read this, as it's not my the usual style I like to read, but your description made me think of the above. So...have a comment and a good luck, I suppose.
9094598
So make them human!
9094803
Sorry, but neither Alternative Perversion nor I are bound by your particular tastes or demands of a story. We wanted to write anthro and we did that. If that offends you, that I ask you to ignore this story and go on to ones which you like more.
Anthro is a legitimate, stylistic choice for those who dislike the pony-shape, but still want to stay as close to the design of the show as possible. If we wanted to write them as human, we would have done so.
I´m sorry, that you don´t like this, but we can´t help you there. I can recommend some Equestria Girls fic on this very site or other fanfictions. Other than that, I can´t help you. I still hope, you have a plesant time.
Must know the Name of the artist of such sexy picture! lol good story. Don't really care much for Flash Sentry but this is very good
9091959
Actually theres a joke story title that says ... been a while .. i think it was .. please downvote this story ...it had like 900? Downvotes i think... Like I said been awhile. I won't downvote this story ... it's written well which is worth the upvote and just because I hate flash 2nd only to timberspruce the pedophile ... hes 21 hes co director of the camp also it takes 3 years to get a counselor degree .. even if he's 18 getting college credits as a colledge student volunteer camp counsellor he's a adult in a position of authority and sci twis a teen student he's a fkn creep. If they met up when he was a high school student that'd be better what was the writers thinking im betting a brony writer just wanted his oc to get with a twilight. Sorry side tracked but yah i can't downvote this story you explained exactly the premise of the story and what to expect ... flash corrupting mares ... for those against non con, corruption why are you reading this plus the author hasn't confirmed a bad ending we may see the tables turned.
Flash should help Sunburst and Starlight too.
Sunburst is such a pushover. And Starlight? She thirsty, but denial isn't just a river in Zebrica. Maybe if Starlight is throwing herself at him kissing his hooves, then she'll get some Sunny D.
Well that was a super fun chapter to read!
9094996
The artist is known as comelytomcake. Just look him up on derpibooru.
Sounds like a job for Incidental Background Mare #9.
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9096465
I confess, I'm not sure how to take that, whether it's a good look or a bad one.
9096574
It's the look of a mare who is ready and willing to chop up Flash Sentry with an ax.
I am very impressed with your character development, you have taken the time to take an OC, and give them a background so I am actually invested in the characters... It is my sincere hope you continue this, as it is an exception to the normally tame stories here, unfortunately most of these become a "flash in the pan" where the author writes a few chapters then loses interest or time...
I would really like to see a story where Flash, ultimately achieves all his goals...this story has the potential to be both epic and to put Fall of Equestria t shame if you stay the course
I like this story and I *love* the part with the strip club, mares being coerced into stripping and sex work is the hottest thing ever, especially when they're used for pleasure toys when they're not being used to turn a profit. I'm really hoping for more of this arc in this story.