Your story so far isn't, but I think with your planned path (from the description), you might want to put a non-con tag on this.

9090342
I'm actually trying my hardest to avoid non-con, but without a strict definition in the tag guidelines, I don't know whether or not it'd be allowed. Hopefully you'll continue reading and point it out if I ever reach that point, but, at this point, I don't think it quite fits.

9090347

Flash Sentry corrupting all the mares in Ponyville, one or two at a time. Includes the breaking of minds, the slutification of princesses, and more.

I was mainly going off your mention of "Mind Break". Once someone's mind is broken, any hope of consent is lost. I don't plan to follow this, just noticed the description and lack of that tag. If there is none of this kinda stuff planned, you might want to revise your descriptions.

Good luck with your story!

9090380
I like to believe I'm a bit more nuanced than just straight up rape.

As for the good luck... thanks. It appears I'm gonna need it.

Alright, you have my attention.

Hmm...im very torn on this, on the one side i would like to get into this but the first 3 kinks are very off-putting for me. Not a fan of stuff like that.
Why not just have the magical mcguffin send their hornyness in overdrive and jump on the first guy they see without all the nasty stuff?
I'll give this a try but the moment it crosses the line im out no matter how good the clop is.

9090527
Nice to have you back.

9090529
Sorry, but a lot of my enjoyment is seeing the mare degrade from upstanding element to horny slut. While there's a lot of hypersexual princess, it's only better for me (and the co-author Nohen) when we see the effect it has on their daily life as they change to accommodate their horniness.

Pretty great story so far, btw do you know who drew the coverart?

Flash need to make a slut out of twilight

9090563
If the point of the story is that Flash Sentry does stuff to turn Twilight or whoever else into (reading from the kink list) a dominated, humiliated, mind-broken slut, without the prior knowledge and consent of the victim (or insert different noun there if you wanna), isn't that pretty much the definition of non-consensual?

9090768
Honestly, I don't know. I'd argue it falls into dub-con, not non-con, and Flash does ask them before he breaks them (The moment before, hence the dub). This is why a description of dub-con or non-con would be helpful in the tag section.

Still, if enough people agree it should be one way, then I must be wrong. Tag added.

9090768
9091037 A general tenant of (for example) BDSM, is that all parties be able to consent or withdraw consent at any time, and if it is not consensual, it's non-consensual.

There is no harm in having the tag, it will save you a LOT of potential downvotes from people who don't want to see anything that isn't 100% consensual (to say nothing of people thinking you are bait-and-switching). Proper tagging ensures you not only get patrons who want to read your stuff, but it helps those who don't stay away and not blame you for it.

9091090
I concede to your wisdom in this. Clearly I was mistaken.

9091095 On better notes: Congrats on being featured!

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I get the feeling I know who the mystery pony is.

It's not rape if I brainwash them.

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Frankly, I don't know. I've seen stories with worse grammar get up here. I've seen stories with worse characterization hit the top of the feature box. I've seen stories with worse everything than my own.

Incest, foal con, and other mind break stories have hit the top before, so I don't think it's too kinky for most people.

If someone could tell me why there are so many downvotes, I'd like to know.

9091688 Take your pick:

Mind Break (of Twilight)
Humiliation (of Twilight)
Non con
Flash Sentry

Not saying I down voted (I haven't read it yet) but I've seen all of these get shit on at some point before.

That's the most dislikes I've ever seen on a featured story.
Props for that, I guess?

Well, I was mildly interested at first. And then I got to that last scene. Now I'm quite curious to find out more about who is watching.

9091941
I'll quote you on that.

9091941
For some people, the very existence of Flash Sentry is enough. Non-con? Throw it out the window and burn it.

As for myself, I don't really get all the hate directed towards FS. Non-con isn't a turn-off for me, but when it involves Twilight... yeah, I better not read this.

Then why am I commenting?