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Yeah, the first one to read and comment boi!! This was pretty good by the way my friend, nice job.
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Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it
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No prob my friend.
A good enough read for a short clop, but it could have done with fleshing out and a proofreader, as I noticed multiple punctuation and structuring errors.
Not super into the milking, but the cock milking and breeding scenes? Those could have definetly used some more detail.
7/10