Ryan POV
Waking up is usually one of the worst parts of the day, for me it's getting out of bed when I'm too comfortable. I would always set the alarm forward another 10-20 minutes if that was the case. Right now is one such moment. I woke up to Daybreaker's chest right in front of my face with Celestia's pressed against my upper back, the shoulders actually. Both their legs overlapping mine, their arms and wings wrapped around me. They looked so peaceful, so adorable, and I was too comfortable to move. Unfortunately morningwood decided to make itself known because of where my head was and I couldn't look down enough to at least see if it was safe to try to tuck it in. Even if she wouldn't mind or if she would've wanted it now is not the time or place for such activities. God, Faust, or whoever must have heard my silent plea as Celestia started waking up.
"Hmmm... Comfy?" She asked quietly, hugging me tighter.
"Yup. You?" I asked, she turned my head just enough to push her lips to mine.
"More than ever, sadly it's time to raise the sun." She said as she got out of the bed and near a window. She opened the curtains just enough to see what she was doing before she lit her horn as well as this half of the world, she made sure to keep the curtains closed so the room was still pretty dark for the most part. While she was doing this though Daybreaker pulled me closer and practically buried my face into her chest, and if that wasn't enough little me is now poking her, how far down I don't know. I don't feel anything off so I could just be poking part of her leg and... Okay that's not her leg.
"*moan* Ryan... If you w... Only ask..." Daybreaker mumbled in her sleep.
'What?' I thought to myself as Celestia crawled back into the bed and retook as much of her previous position as she could. This roused Daybreaker from her slumber who immediately took notice of our position and blushed as she also took notice of little me then got a seductive look on her face.
"Well that's certainly something you should take care of, though I wouldn't mind helping with that, especially after that dream I was having with you." She said, slowly tracing her finger up to my neck to tilt it up some. I hugged her tighter and gave her ass a squeeze getting a moan out of her.
"Later. Now is not the time nor place for those kinds of activities, especially if you and your sisters are screamers, and by screamers I mean RCV screamers. I handled a few rounds with Misty and Eris just fine, but if any of the others decide they want to join I don't think I'll be able to keep it up, doesn't help that I forgot to bring Losvayne with me." She looked disappointed for a moment, but accepted my answer.
"Hm, pity. I will hold you to that though. Celestia, care to join then?" She asked, turning my attention to her. Celestia's face was noticeably red and she had trouble responding. I turned over and placed a hand on her cheek in an attempt to calm her down.
"If you're not ready by then that's perfectly fine. It's not like I'm expecting you to do something you're not comfortable with. You want to join that's fine, you want it just the two of us that's fine, you want to wait a while longer that's fine, you don't want to get on your knees or bend over that's fine as well. You're ready when you're ready, No one's judging you." I said. She relaxed and pulled herself closer, I swear I'm like a body pillow right now.
"Thank you. Are you sure you don-" She started.
"It'll go away on it's own, not thinking about plowing those perfectly shaped asses of yours helps enough. Instead I'm thinking about just enjoying this comfortable bed with two of my favorite ladies and what we're going to do on this vacation." I interrupted. I've got my eyes closed right now and I can almost tell that they're blushing, Daybreaker's flames also shot up a little so there was that as well. I felt Daybreaker lowering one of her hands to my lower waist, but just before she could Emily called.
"Ryan we talked about this before." Emily said.
"Really? I don't remember a conversation against me staying in bed to cuddle whoever else was in it." I said innocently.
"You know what I mean damnit. I mean staying in bed because you're comfortable and not tired!" She tried to remind me.
"And you didn't bring this up for the past few months why?" I asked. Now that I think about it I'm surprised a mute button was never installed.
"Because Misty and Eris were still asleep unlike you and these two, now you and the solar sisters need to get your butts out of bed, your train should be stopping within the hour."
"But I don't wanna!" I said childishly.
"Do it or I'll give Misty and Eris some... Ideas in bed." She threatened.
"Define 'ideas'." Do I even want to know?
"Disturbing fetishes from our time as well as any I've thought of, most of which unpleasant." Sorry, not working.
"Clearly you don't know them as well as I do, none of us will force anything on the other. The worst we'll do is try to nudge them into it like with Eris and-"
"Ryan, I don't need to know of your bedroom activities, especially when I already have a general idea of what was going on." She interrupted.
"Whatever, you win, I'm getting up, sorry ladies." I apologized to Celestia and Daybreaker who got out of bed shortly after.
"Disappointing." Daybreaker said.
"Agreed" Celestia said.
Meanwhile with a noble who fucked up badly...
"Do u kno de wae my bruda?" A deformed red creature asked for the nth time.
"AAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHH STOP IT STOP IT STOP IT!" A noble shouted, madness slowly, but surely sinking in.
"Sing wit me my bruda, sing wit me de song of my people. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH-"
"I WILL KILL YOU!" The noble threatened. In response the creature multiplied, now there are just as many of these funny little creatures as there are servants employed at the estate.
"Behold, our battle cry!" The noble began frantically running through the estate as the sound of tongues clicking pursued him, both in an attempt to find a suitable weapon and to escape. What he did not know though was this was only the beginning of his personal hell.
"Was it worth it?" A crow asked after flying in through a window, causing the poor soul to turn to it in confusion and horror.
"Call her an abomination again! I fucking DARE you to do it you pathetic excuse for a stallion!" The crow said. The stallion blasted it out the window causing it to fade away slowly.
"Have fun~." The crow said before finally fading. The noble turned to face the creatures still clicking their tongues.
"SPIT ON HIM MY BRUDAS! FOR EBOLA!" The screaming could be heard from the other end of the street.
Back to our protagonist(?)... An hour and a half later specifically.
The train finally reached the station, it felt good to get off of it. Wasting no time to find the beach house I flew straight up to see where it might be, it was actually pretty close, a cab could get us there quickly. Turns out there's also a carnival not far from the beach as well so definitely something worth checking out. Dropping down I helped the others carry what I could, but that was still a lot to carry so they had to help. It's actually a little funny, I can effortlessly slaughter dragons and entire slave camps, but I can't carry a bunch of suit cases without the Void. Luna assured me it was no trouble, but the gentleman in me says otherwise.
Leaving the station we were practically bombarded by the ponies outside of it. To say the reactions were mixed is an understatement. Some were jeering while others were doing the opposite. To be specific some were giving praise and bowing to us, others were demanding my head, some weren't doing anything and looked ready to run out of here, then there were the morons antagonizing Eris, Nightmare, Daybreaker, and Misty. Those ponies coincidentally fell face first into the ground after twisting both their ankles.
After leaving them behind we got a cab that surprisingly could carry all our stuff. I payed him a little extra at the end for not causing any trouble and keeping his mouth shut. After he dropped us off we spent a little while getting to the beach and all I can say is the view alone was worth the wait and the money, no signs of pollution or loitering, no one to start trouble, the outside was great. The inside looked like it had just been cleaned, most of the interior actually looked brand new, the kitchen had everything we needed and then some, I think we'll enjoy living here for a while. We spent at least an hour unpacking, Eris didn't have much trouble considering she was literally to just 'poof' everything she needed, Misty didn't pack much, the others did need a little help. It was more of a matter of where to put it rather than who puts their stuff there, each of the 3 bedrooms had multiple dressers, there were 3 bathrooms, plenty of room to put it all. After helping Celestia, Daybreaker, and Nightmare unpack I began to do the same with Luna.
I should note that each bed only had enough for 3 people so someone was going to be alone. I offered and since I don't exactly need sleep that would have been an extra bed if anyone needed it, though everyone decided against that, everyone except Luna who took it instead. I wanted to ask if she just wanted her own room or if she was thinking of anyone else here. Reaching into one of her bags I felt something fuzzy, pulling it out I found it was a white teddy bear, I spent so long examining it that I didn't notice Luna practically running up swipe it from my hands.
"Be careful with that!" She said.
"I'm sorry. Is that precious you? It looks well cared for." I said laying my hand on her shoulder.
"It was a gift... From my mother and father... Before they disappeared." She said looking ready to cry. I wrapped my arms around her and ran my fingers through her mane.
"Does it have a name?" I asked.
"Bright Star, it's name is Bright Star." Luna answered calming down.
"I think it's more adorable that you're keeping this, I'm not going to judge you for something like this, you know that right? Besides, you should keep something to remember them by. Tell you what though, if I ever see them I'll beat an explanation out of them if I need to." I said before pulling her in for a kiss.
"Thank you, though I hope it won't come to that." She said with a smile on her face.
"Luna, be honest with me. Did you want this room because you wanted it to yourself or so you can sleep with the bear without fear of the others judging you?" I asked. She didn't answer.
"Would you like me to sleep with you tonight?" I asked, her face became red almost instantly as she stuttered with her response.
"Just in the same bed, activities like that don't have to happen if you don't want them. The others won't mind either way, just put up a sound barrier if you do decide you want it. Otherwise you still get to cuddle your bear and I'll cuddle you." After hearing that she calmed down again and kissed me again.
"I'll accept that offer Ryan, I look forward to it. Now go on, we'll be leaving soon right?" She asked with a smile on her face.
"Yup, I think we'll hit the beach first before we hit one of the carnivals." I responded.
"You just want to see us in swimsuits don't you?" She asked knowing what to expect.
"Would it surprise you if I said yes, that it's one of the reasons? I'll go get the sunscreen and all that ready, see you and the others in a bit." I answered.
"Alright, I'll be out after I put my clothes away." I heard her say on my way out.
This vacation is already great in my book.
Why just why it's time for them to die
EBOLA STILL LIIIIIVVVVEEEESSSS!!!! *BigJigglyPanda laughing*
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its like a zombie apocalypse it never dies
I feel like you just wanted to post this vacation chapter on vacation so it would fit XD
DA WAE IS BACK LET'S SHOUT HOORAY
KNUCKLES NOW ARE HERE TO STAY
WE'RE READY TO SEIZE THE DAY
BROTHERS, DO YOU KNOW DA WAE?
https://youtu.be/1IhHMOCXFao
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UGANDA FOREVER MY BRUDDAS!
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To be fair I did mention that in the last chapter so I thought "why not". Seriously at least one person had to have seen that coming.
Good to know it’s alive. Can’t wait for the next chapter
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No, I just went based off what I thought was logical based off his ancestry. He is only human in that it is his default form. Otherwise, he is a Aeiron, which are energy beings. Specifically alderine energy. Which is kind of like an alloy of every fundamental particle type, all bonded together through something similar to quantum entanglement. Aeiron can control their "alloy" by manipulating those QE like bonds. Assimilation is like eating for them, it forms bonds with outside particles, thus assimilating them into the "alloy." Having control over this kind of energy allows you to essentially manipulate physics, without actually changing, bending, or breaking anything. As for the wings, blame Itex from the Maximum Ride universe.
As for the LMAR and a few other more minor implants, augments, and replacements I didn't mention, blame him. He tried to commit suicide by chopping off every limb but one and then stabbed the knife into his brain through his eye. In the universe he came from (which is dead now by the way, space time itself was torn apart at the seams after a test gone wrong) humanity was extremely successful and advanced. Completely united under one flag, the Pheonix Republic, and focused on advancing the science and technology as quickly and safely as possible. It was at the, "we built a planet wide hardlight shield to protect one of the few farming planets we need, " stage. Hard light tech was especially advanced. Some non-breach-capable ships we're little more than generators, engines, and a hard light projector to project the entirety of the rest of the ship. Typically, ships like that were also equipped with temporary backup power and breach capable escape pods. Typically. There were cheaper HL ships without those safety precautions.
The neural energy draining is just assimilating only the things directly involved in neural pulses.
Because his default form is human, he has more trouble controlling his alderine energy than a "pure" Aeiron like say Polaris does.
When is the next chapter
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No idea, been focused on the KH story and gaming.
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Kh story i don't know which one of your stories that is
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Embrace of light and dark
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I know right the cycle is still contagious
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You did say humans turned into animalistic, humanoid feral creatures, but we know Misty also got caught in the middle of the spell before it failed. It's clear she's able to think and speak again, but it wasn't mentioned if she still looks exactly the same as she did before, or if she started to change back to a normal human before getting stuck somewhere in-between. The internet has no shortage of furry images, so it's not difficult to find an accurate picture of a bipedal, anthropomorphic wolf, but the lack of your personal description leaves us just guessing. Like, does she have any distinguishing characteristics or scars? Any birthmarks, different-colored patches of fur, or cowlicks? Does she have a unique gait when she walks, any physical quirks or fidgets, or an uncommon accent? As I said before, the story is still decent, but the little details like I mentioned are what takes a simple character in a story and brings them to life. Instead of just being a character in a story, the person becomes someone your readers can really envision in their minds, and relate with. It's the difference between an amateur artist's colored pencil drawing and a masterpiece in an art gallery. And I'm not picking at the story just to do it, I'm simply pointing out an issue I see that you can fix to improve the quality of the whole story.
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Fair enough. I guess I can try to find a picture close to how she looks. To answer as much of your question as I can, she's an anthro wolf, white fur, red eyes, black around the tips of her ears and tail, all but the anthro part mentioned in the author's notes of one of the chapters, her height of 5'7 is also mentioned. No scars, She has a slim, but not unhealthy build, I'm not going into details regarding certain other sizes. I never put too much thought into how a character walks or sounds so I might have to get back to you on that and other things.
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It's your story of course, I'm just making suggestions. If you take and implement them, great; if not, it's still a decent story that I'm reading.
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People like Misty are the only redeemable ones imho.
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It's never pleasant. I myself have Asperger's. I've learned tti deal with it. If your want help ask away
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Agreed.
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There's a character being hot, then there's going out of your way for no reason to insert that character into the story specifically for the purpose of putting them in a relationship with another character.
Essentially, you turned her into a 2d character. She's Discord, except now the MC finds her attractive.
It would've been fine if there were other reasons for the Rule 63. Like if other characters were Rule 63'd as well, even if those characters were seemingly at random. But the fact that it's only Discord is disappointing because it's abundantly apparent that you only did it so you could put her in the relationship with the MC.
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I never said she would be the only gender swapped character. I also never said if anymore would also join the relationship.
She isn't going to be the only one.
The harem may or may not grow.
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Still. My memory is terrible, but I'm pretty sure that the romance with Eris started quite early, so despite everything it still feels like a cheap way to force them into a relationship.
I mean, there has to actually be a reason behind the romantic feelings, whether it be physical attraction, mental attraction, being saved from a traumatic experience, etc. and given that it's Discord/Eris, it kinda rules out physical and mental attraction. S/he is chaotic by nature, and I doubt there's much time to think about "feelings" (Canonically, Discord seemingly didn't give much attention to his own feelings, causing chaos for his own joy but never really considering how lonely he was or anything of that sort until it was pointed out to him during his reformation, whereupon he suddenly realised his desire for companionship and latched onto Fluttershy as a newborn child does their mother).
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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No idea, writing next chapter of First Curses, maybe after that.
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Oh, thanks for clearing that up. I must admit, i seem to be one of the many who forgets to read the tags and it has bitten me in the back now.
When's the new chapter coming up
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Haven't started yet, writing next chapter of First Curses atm.
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Ok just asking
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I feel stupid
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