“OH...Oh my.” Mrs. Shy squeaked. Like mother, like daughter.

My nose flared at this

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https://youtu.be/agHza17nBuM the intro! Haha

Uuug.. thought I was kidding but
..windy told her!!!?
https://youtu.be/M-p6LwYmoUY

Wow... All it needs now is Flurry teen or Chrysalis... Holy bucking!

Also...milquetoast
And learned a new word!
Reading for the plot.

Oh man. This is certainly new.

You damn horses, how dare you assume my refractory period. You need to check your horse-privilege.”

LMFAO amazing

pwease… cum in my ahssss!”

pwease

ಠ_ಠ
This is clearly the dirtiest thing in this whole story
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discrete, profitable… and hopefully, fun.

Ending quotation mark

AWkwardly unsure

Uhh... I dunno.

grabbed his hand... gently lead him

led

right into your groin

his groin

he also notice the

noticed

Immediately the face of the older

Immediately, the face

series of kissed and licks all

kisses

Mrs. Shy was a saking quiver

shaking (?)

room as he nose finally

her

Celestia she had never been so

Celestia, she had never been so

with it’s throbbing winks,

its

hand to MRs. Shy’s

down to see MRs. Shy’s cunt

Mrs.

impossible level of dopamines as her

dopamine

kissed his wife,all while his balls

wife, all

Stretching her, changin her.

changing

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Thank you! Will tune that stuff up later today once I get home!

I sure hope that their marriage isn`t too-badly hurt by this.

Also, that last scene.

He shoulda straight up said "Miss me with that gay shit"

That thing with her husband at the end made it much less enjoyable.

"Again?" Uh... Fluttershy, is this the SECOND boyfriend your mother's milf cunt has stolen from you?

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Yeah sure. "second"

“What the fuck are you talking about?” Anon growled, “I can go again RIGHT NOW.” He motioned down at his dick, still hard as rock, bouncing out in front of him aggressively with a slick strand of cum dripping from its end. “You damn horses, how dare you assume my refractory period. You need to check your horse-privilege.”

This

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That was epic.

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Thanks!

"Again!?"

Not to mention the fact that he would be adding yet ANOTHER notch on the belt tracking how many of his friend’s MILF-y mom’s he’d conquered

Yeah, doing the stories in reverse order is kinda weird, since we have sentences like this relating to situations we have no clue about.

a big, thick uncircumcised log of flesh

Good - male genital mutilation should be outright illegal, just like how female genital mutilation is. And doing it to a baby, who cannot give consent and can die from it or receive gruesome injuries, should result in the "parents" being thrown into jail for child cruelty and similar horrendous crimes.
There's no medical benefits circumcision awards in first-world countries, and even in third-world areas the benefits are extremely few; it only survives modern morality and law because it's a disgusting part of a handful of antiquated religious cultures.
Tell me, oh religious butchers of male genitals, why did your so-called "god" make boys and men have foreskins, if they have to be cut off at birth? To be cruel and perpetuate male baby suffering?
The foreskin exists to PROTECT the penis, to keep it CLEAN and free from infections! Cutting it off removes these benefits!

Male genital mutilation should be illegal. If it has to stay legal to please some religious nutjobs who love inflicting agony onto male babies and converts, then it should be restricted until after the 'patient' is of legal age and able to give consent - so no more baby-butchering or child-cutting.

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While I agree on many points, this is hardly the place for a rant like this.

Well this was very interesing I did enjoy it tho~

I wasn't planning on reading more but why not? The new and improved Mission Failed has an as of now unpublished sex scene with anon that's really good. Surely I can give this a chance.

He’d gotten the odd jobs since then. Mowing lawns, gardening work, cleaning. Most of his clients were pegasi and earth ponies who didn’t have the ability to ‘cheat’ with magic. Well, except for that crazy teal-green unicorn who just hired anon to ‘make jazz hands at her’ for hours on end. THAT was strange. But Anon didn’t mind: the money he picked up would keep that damned tyrant of a purple alicorn off his back about moving out and getting a ‘real’ job.

Even when Twilight isn't a hundred miles from anything going on in the story, you still manage to take a giant, steaming shit on her. You make Baby Jesus cry with the way you right Twily.

So when he’d gotten a letter asking him to be at Fluttershy’s cabin by 1PM for work, he had expected the annoyingly meek butter-yellow pegasus to need help grooming her pets, or building a doghouse, or some other inane task.

Credit, I suppose for having the narrator be equally horrible when discussing Fluttershy. This is going to be one of those stories I give up on early, isn't it?

Haphazardly walking into the dark room while looking over his shoulder at the “OK Mrs. Shy so what’s in here that needs…”

This looks a bit tacky. We didn't need a quote here and what we got distracts the reader's eye. Maybe just say he turned over his shoulder to ask Mrs. Shy again what they were doing.

Anon’s voice trailed off as he saw a bed completely stripped of sheets and blankets, a fairly expensive looking video camera set up at the foot of the bed aimed at the mattress, and several studio lighting stands positioned around the periphery lighting the area.

Oh great. We're on to the sex now. I guess this means the abusive narration was only limited to two paragraphs this time around. I reckon I can live with that.

Someone does need to put sheets on that bed though. Why would anyone want to ruin a perfectly good mattress?

“JESUS CHRIST!” Anon shouted, terrified. “WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS!?” He whirled around, facing down the smaller Mrs. Shy, whose ears were now splayed back against her head with a frightened expression on her face. “IS THIS SOME KIND OF SNUFF FILM? ARE YOU KIDNAPPING ME? OH GOD ARE YOU LIKE SOME KIND OF PONY-ISIS?”

What a great line!

Mr. Shy chuckled before speaking softly. “Oh my, well...I WAS hoping to be able to watch it again later, but if you aren’t OK with that, I suppose I can forgo filming this time. I just want you to feel comfortable, Mr. Anon.”

“Film WHAT!? Watch WHAT!?” Anon shouted, exasperated.

The older stallion smiled slightly then cocked his head then said in the nicest voice. “Why - fuck my wife of course.”

I'm leaving now...

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Edit: I didn't read the trigger warnings. My mistake!

Mrs. Shy chuckled softly, weakling waving a hoof in Anon’s direction before blushing ever so slightly. “Oh please, you flatterer stop! I’m old enough to be your mother.” She picked up the now-empty plate of cookies and walked toward the sink. “I do hope that was enough food for you Anonymous. Would you like something else to fill your tummy? Can I get you anything to make you more comfy?”

Anon: That's why you're so amazing though! You may be old enough to be my mother, but your self-care and whatever exercise you do really shows. You look ravishing! You have a body younger mares envy! You have curves in all the right places, but you take care that it doesn't become fatty looking. That's not even touching your kind, nurturing personality! You do your utmost to ensure that your guest is comfortable and enjoying their time with you. You're an amazing hostess, offering your guest delicious food and drink. You're polite, demure and considerate of others.
It's enough to make me wonder if Zephyr is really your own flesh and blood, despite how much he looks like your husband, given his behaviorism.
Take pride in what you have accomplished, because I can assure you that not every mare your age would receive such sincere compliments.