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Clopficsinthecomments


I want nothing more than to bring a smile to your face with a light-hearted clopfic! If you want to bring a smile to mine, leave a comment!

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I bet this is going to be in the feature box.

Not gonna lie, I clicked on this IMMEDIATELY without knowing who the author or what the plot even was yet...just gimme a bit to read this

I normally don't read anon stories but I made an exception to this since Mrs. Shy is in it. Overall, this was good.

8959781
While I read both, I would go with ending A

Going with ending B. That's right I'm keeping her.

It appears that Anon has been screwed out of his bits!

What even are both of these endings?

8959884
All of my anon shit is inspired by the amazing shoutingisfun there's all sorts of references throughout

8959999
Ey now! Horses do it! It's different for em! I used to think it was super dumb and unrealistic too!

I like flutters mom but honestly I’d go for Mayor Mare.

the moment I see this on the front page.
milf story... check
Clopficsinthecomments story.... check
YEEEEEES!
I know I should feel bad about ending B, but I was too busy laughing. Seriously hope these continue, If only to see how other ponies react to the destiny changing cock.

8960085
Haha, just gauging from the comments thus far seems like it's a 50/50 split between a and b

“OH...Oh my.” Mrs. Shy squeaked. Like mother, like daughter.

My nose flared at this

8960139
I would think everyone's insatiable need for pony words would cause them to read both.

8960156
Yeah I get that, I meant who prefers which ending. I was pretty sure everyone would read each ending.

8960172
right,right, makes sense. Your already in the feature box BTW, congrats.:derpytongue2:

Heh, I read so much hentai that end this way I'm starting to get inured to this stuff. Nice clop as always.

... Now wake up thinking about Rarity's mom so Anon can fuck her too :v

love A a little more than B.

If Fluttershy is a 3/10 to this guy, than a 10/10 must the biggest douchebag of a dyke that I have ever met.

LITERALLY 5 seconds before klicking on fimfiction i wrote someone :
'want to be entertained but its so late!' (01 24 here)

and i klick and ... To make a cuckold human-pony sex tape while her husband watches them.
i mean wow. that setup alone and ... FLUTTERSHYS MOM OF ALL PONYS!? ... -stars align!! - and ITS NOT SECOND PERSON!! THANK CELESTIA! (that ruined to many storys already!)
oh gosh i cant wait to read it o__o !! ty so much!

https://youtu.be/agHza17nBuM the intro! Haha

Uuug.. thought I was kidding but
..windy told her!!!?
https://youtu.be/M-p6LwYmoUY

Wow... All it needs now is Flurry teen or Chrysalis... Holy bucking!

Also...milquetoast
And learned a new word!
Reading for the plot.

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Ajahhahaha aammmen!
But he was just trollish.. aka lying

I am thinking Anon went too far and destroyed Mrs. Shy. And, I feel stiffing Fluttershy is not going to win Anon any new friends, because I am thinking the Shys have to be the most cursed family in Equestria, if not close. Sadly, I think Anon only cares about getting the girl or the mare at all costs like it is winning at all costs.

After reading both endings, I can safely say I prefer ending A. It just fits the flow of the rest of the story a little better IMO

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Oh I did
Anon... An idol for ponykind!

Are there prequels? It references Twilight Velvet and Windy.

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Windy has been written by me.

I haven't done the Velvet one... yet

Oh man. This is certainly new.

You damn horses, how dare you assume my refractory period. You need to check your horse-privilege.”

LMFAO amazing

pwease… cum in my ahssss!”

pwease

ಠ_ಠ
This is clearly the dirtiest thing in this whole story
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discrete, profitable… and hopefully, fun.

Ending quotation mark

AWkwardly unsure

Uhh... I dunno.

grabbed his hand... gently lead him

led

right into your groin

his groin

he also notice the

noticed

Immediately the face of the older

Immediately, the face

series of kissed and licks all

kisses

Mrs. Shy was a saking quiver

shaking (?)

room as he nose finally

her

Celestia she had never been so

Celestia, she had never been so

with it’s throbbing winks,

its

hand to MRs. Shy’s

down to see MRs. Shy’s cunt

Mrs.

impossible level of dopamines as her

dopamine

kissed his wife,all while his balls

wife, all

Stretching her, changin her.

changing

Who knows what’s in those beds?”

Holy shit, why is this so funny
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incredible! I really added

It really

8962475
Thank you! Will tune that stuff up later today once I get home!

Pretty good! Any chance for you doing more hardcore stuff like this in the future? Like more slapping and such, perhaps bondage?

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Haha, it's coming it's coming...

Something special for Father's day is coming first though

I sure hope that their marriage isn`t too-badly hurt by this.

Also, that last scene.:rainbowlaugh:

Oh no Bad ending
BAD ENDING
BAD ENDING
QUICK RELOAD SHIT :raritydespair:

He shoulda straight up said "Miss me with that gay shit"

8959831
indeed, mrs shy is so much hotter than her daughter so i'll be keeping her. so definitely ending B

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