Two years ago Sunset Shimmer ruined your life in her quest for power. With no more friends and no more future, you spend your winter break alone on the beach hoping to just see one last sunset. Thanks to her that's exactly what you get.
The beginning, besides the clop itself which was also really, really well written and amazing was really good. Nice job Holy, once again you created an amazing chapter.
Her teal eyes shine in the moonlight again and you look down to see a satisfied smile creep back over her tired face. She nuzzles herself back into your chest, filling your system with love and warmth and happiness that no amount of negative thoughts can shake off. You take in another deep breath and settle into the pillow, letting your mind run through the last few thoughts before you finally fall asleep cuddling with her.
This was one of my favourite paragraphs btw, the last sentence was adorable and it really shows the development of the mc, great job. :)
You blink a few times before looking back over to her. "What? Starting a crime spree again?"
Again?
You slide your hands across her butt and gently lift her up, giving one last glance up to her biting her lip with an intense desire in her eyes before averting your gaze to her glistening, red pussy.
Red?
Also, something tells me sunset wasn’t a virgin before this.
This chapter on it's own could almost be considered a novella, which I find rather amusing, anyway, after a long time of procrastination I actually read this, I enjoyed it thoroughly.
awesome chapter keep it up cant wait for next chapter
10360372 What in the name of Celestia's cake-laden plot is a recreational nuke...
Great chapter!
Finally!
Another great chapter once again. Keep it up dude!
So at what point do we get confirmation that this is the prequel to Little Stars?
Unf. Great chapter knew it'd be worth the wait but damn! Still a good story regardless of the clop
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Pretty sure this is a troll account, no one is actually retarded enough to type is mess out, right?
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If you knew what we knew you wouldn’t think that way 😤😡😠
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Imagine a nuke but you buy it at walmart, thats what it is.
The beginning, besides the clop itself which was also really, really well written and amazing was really good. Nice job Holy, once again you created an amazing chapter.
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Wut
This was one of my favourite paragraphs btw, the last sentence was adorable and it really shows the development of the mc, great job. :)
10416585 With all the shit that Walmart sells I honestly wouldn't be surprised in the slightest.
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Yeah, fair.
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hmmmm no I am pretty sure we would still think that message was stupid
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=YZOKTJzMkn8
That sums it all up.
I came. I saw. I came again.
Can y'all just tell me where the porn is at, please? I don't care about the damn fluff. Thank.
Again?
Red?
Also, something tells me sunset wasn’t a virgin before this.
Please add a space.
This broke my emersion.
This chapter on it's own could almost be considered a novella, which I find rather amusing, anyway, after a long time of procrastination I actually read this, I enjoyed it thoroughly.
You are really good @ love scenes and im jealous.
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shut up