This is pretty good, but can you stick to one set of armor, or atleast a few sets, it gets confusing after a bit, but overall pretty good bud, keep up the good work
Thank you all guys, but I'm sorry because like Erza Scarlet from Fairy Tail the main character CAN'T stick to one set of armor. Because depending on his situations he must change his armor that suit his needs. Each armor designed for each different problems, know what I'm saying?
Ok wow ummm this still feels extremely fucking fast. Like we are in the gas gas gas levels of fast and that does not help the problem of a bad 1st chapter and all the errors. Now I know making stories is hard and I can see you have a chunk of people loving it but I just can’t go further.
Normally I can easily stand a story with lots of errors but usually they actually have a plot that isn’t just lore dump galore. Like we are already talking about taking over cities in the second chapter? And sadly this is a very common trope where the first couple chapters are very confusing lore dumps then we got back to normal time where he’s stuck in a statue. Now if you actually continued the story where he went into the forest instead of instantly going to “I’m a statue now and this is how” mode I would have been so much more hooked when you talked about the main character raiding slave camps and making a army but instead it’s just a huge lore dump and you don’t feel like your with the character for the amazing adventure at the start.
Wow that was a rant sorry but yea. Great idea but I just can’t continue past the start and the lore dumps
10734819 Well, if you continue to read this story futher, all the other chapters will surely make more sense to you. My advice to you is don't pass judgment until you got the whole story.
Ok ok this is hot
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Why is that?
Is he going to go through with this? Cause, it sounds like a bad idea if you ask me.
I really like this story but can you please stop changing the guy's armor, it gets confusing at least to međź‘Ś
This is great
Looking forward to more!!!
Racism is what causes wars. And you, you made it loud and clear.
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that religion, money (gold, oil, rare wood etc.), and food are some other big causes of war
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Agreed
This is pretty good, but can you stick to one set of armor, or atleast a few sets, it gets confusing after a bit, but overall pretty good bud, keep up the good work
Congratz, you got featured. 11/9/2019
Thank you all guys, but I'm sorry because like Erza Scarlet from Fairy Tail the main character CAN'T stick to one set of armor. Because depending on his situations he must change his armor that suit his needs. Each armor designed for each different problems, know what I'm saying?
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Go through with what?
So far loving where you are going with this. The powers are original and the story interesting.
Yeah but they aren't human.
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Not the inhabitants, the main character.
Ok wow ummm this still feels extremely fucking fast. Like we are in the gas gas gas levels of fast and that does not help the problem of a bad 1st chapter and all the errors. Now I know making stories is hard and I can see you have a chunk of people loving it but I just can’t go further.
Normally I can easily stand a story with lots of errors but usually they actually have a plot that isn’t just lore dump galore. Like we are already talking about taking over cities in the second chapter? And sadly this is a very common trope where the first couple chapters are very confusing lore dumps then we got back to normal time where he’s stuck in a statue. Now if you actually continued the story where he went into the forest instead of instantly going to “I’m a statue now and this is how” mode I would have been so much more hooked when you talked about the main character raiding slave camps and making a army but instead it’s just a huge lore dump and you don’t feel like your with the character for the amazing adventure at the start.
Wow that was a rant sorry but yea. Great idea but I just can’t continue past the start and the lore dumps
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Well, if you continue to read this story futher, all the other chapters will surely make more sense to you. My advice to you is don't pass judgment until you got the whole story.