Dam, I wanted ti see a story where the mane six didn't win and NM stayed in power, oh well.

This is why you Kill people dont leave them alive i know "they will get new bearer" but that would have taken more time and not killing Celestia was just a bad move once again vileness are defeated by there own actions or inaction

Well shit

It's probably a trap

Arton at least has a reason to become a king now

I just hope he won't commit the same mistake and will just kill Celestia
And for bearers? He doesn't need to kill them but seriously injure them
Causing brain damage or damaging all limbs, just immobilizing them

Also Lunar Legion will probably join Arton, they were loyal to Nightmare and Arton is unnoficial second in command so they will follow him

yay more read.

Fuck you celestia! New Lunar Republic! Révolution lunaire!

10004221
Agreed.
now to the author well done bud, and that ending, oh this is gonna be alot of FUN

omG

…………SON OF A "BEEEEEEEEEEEEPPP!!!"

10004190
Took the words right out of my mouth.

Let me guess he will be king of the deer kingdom and go to war against celestia.

"Let's end this nightmare forever." I suggested and she looked at me with a smile and nobbed.

Nodded. You keep saying Nod with a B like Nob.

Well, the only thing you can do is try to be on good terms with Celestia. And for hopefully get that pardon, cause that is what I do.

10005675
I agree with that, but I kinda want to see shit hit fan.

10005899
Oh no. When it comes to Celestia, it is best to be on her good side. If not, than may her mother have mercy on those that defy harmony. Besides, what will revenge do? Only her mother is to blame, it was always her doing, never her children.

10006031
No no no I mean I want to see it devolve into a shouting Match. Celestia Has to have a lot of anger still left over for this guy.

10004221

10005675
SPOILER ALERT: Even though Arton has a reason to be king and earned the right to be king, he simply have no interest in being king. He's a warrior, so he exist to do battle. As such, he would be a bad king, a poor peacetime ruler; a soldier more than anything else, he dosen't understand anything about administration nor care to learn about it. If he chose to be king, he'll end up like Robert Baratheon; being plunged into drinking, feasting, gambling and suchlike. Arton knows it so he will refuse to be king. As for getting on Celestia's good side, Arton highly doubt that Celestia would even consider hearing him out and grant him a pardon. He killed her mother, who in their right mind wouldn't want revenge for the death of their family. Luna (As Nightmare Moon) let go of her hatred towards Arton after knowing both sides of their story, just because she accepted that he's not evil dosen't mean Celestia does. So there is no guarantee about making peace with Celestia, but Arton dosen't want to start another war with the alicorns. So Arton's dilemma is simple, shall he face Celestia or shall he flee?

Know what I'm saying?

"Trail by combat, Right now!"

"What? That's not a trial. That's an execution!"

10006318
I know. Better execution than surrender, right?

10006293
What if Arton created a council and he would became one of the members of it
Then he wouldn't have to focus on ruling but army and military and the rest give to others in council

If I was Arton I would stay the hell away Equestria if I don't want to become a bird toilet again.

OHhh I see where this is going, and I’m loving it. Can’t wait to see what happens nexts.

10006324
When will the next chapter be out?

10006293
First off, yes I understand you very well.🙁 Second, he should flee if all outs fails, and it be wise to at least try. And that my friend is a gamble I take.🤝 And lastly, your right about your guy not to take the crown. But power is the same with the Mafia: When one boss is dead, someone has to take the throne.

10007121
I don't know.

10007150
Like I wrote before (10006327) he doesn't need to take full control, power but a seat in the council making him do what he is good at, army, war, etc

Also Lunar Legion is with him, he was like unofficial second in command so it's not like they don't have any military force, also they can get help from a thestral nation, city, home
Also if he has to he can easily create chaos in Equestrian "army" or what is left of it
Like with deer he can use fear gas but also toxic and tear ones

Let's say he can have other abilities of Talion, wraith from Shadow of War

Like Shadow Strike Pull to kill captains and generals to create chaos and fear in chain of command
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He can also poison food and water from a great distance (Poison Tendril) which will make infected explode with will infect others (Bursting Toxin) or will go berserk on their friends also infecting others(Contagion)

And let's not forget about the most op and versatile ability I ever saw made for war

Domination
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You can freaking create a civil war in Equestria and recruit everyone to your army even animals

Also from what I know this ability changes, transforms all their previous loyalty to you and it's done once

Think about it like that
Equestrian soldier in their mind visualizes an image of Celestia with associated locality with it
So domination should replace the image with Arton's, making him loyal to him

So when he will use another armor, the effect should still be there

Also, can Arton also create other things like rings (you know what rings I mean don't you :) ) and other enchanted jewelry?
In some way, it is an armor

10007771
dude, i ain't the author but i thini that is a great idea

10007540
i see, sorry asking, its just that i really love this story that i can't help to ask

Я с радостью буду ждать продолжения это произведения.

10009209
?????

10009262
Раньше не видел русский язык? Хорошо, напишу на английском. I will wait for the continuation of this work. I Russian.

10009268
I don't speak russian. Translate, please.

10009270
the second one is Did not see Russian language before? Ok, I will write in English
the first one is I will be happy to continue this work.

10010480
Thank you.

10006293
face her and put her in the Ground like he Should have hand Nightmare do

sighed Princess Celestia.

Me:

That's war for you. You never know what might happen. I'm loving the story so far.

"Can we at least show you to the royal bed chamber where you can rest and sleep?" Asked Berta, I nobbed.

Nobbed???????