With the Zebras taking over Equestria, and the Pony males being led away as slaves, while the Pony females are left behind to breed new Zebras, one Human, 5 of his friends, and an old train, are the last ones standing that can help
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Is this where that other rivel train from Battleship ended up or is this a whole separate universe?
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Hello ShadowLight96,
And no, this universe is totally separate from the Battleship Express Universe. Same train, same job, but different universe, different crew, different purpose.
Just reading the description sounds like a real riot, but I am going to read it because of the "Daylight".
Big enthusiast of it and steam locomotives in general.
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Hello Dashie1791,
And yes, I now fear that I REALLY might have broke open a hornets nest with this one. However, it had to be done, so I do hope that you enjoy your read!
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Ahh. Ok.
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I am starting to get worried though. I think that I REALLY stirred up a hornets nest with this one. It hasn’t even been up for an hour yet, and all it’s gotten are down votes.
So your first thought was to write a 55k word response fic?
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Hello The Abyss,
And actually, my first response was to be sick to my stomach, then rant in a blog post, then the gears started to spin, then I spent 2 weeks writing this, before submitting it here. There is a method to my perceived madness, trust me.
I also hope that this story doesn’t sink itself like my first story here did.
Well job lad. Had the war gone on I'd a needed to bring my Modern Offensive Battalion to strike them down. I might be a royal but the battlefield is where i belong(spoken form OC perpective)
8899762
Hello Sanguine Blade,
And I’m glad that you liked the story. Sure, it was a little bit short, but yet it WAS a one shot anti-fic, so I did the best with what I had. I’m still glad that you enjoyed it though!
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Your works have yet to disappoint my dear friend. This reminded me of RED Dawn from 1984. I am at your service for any works of yours as you know. Just give me an note.
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Thanks! And yeah, that’s kind of what it reminded me of too.
Also, I just wanted to let you know that soon, I’ll begin work on a story that WILL feature Santa Fe 5000 as it’s central train! I’m still putting it together, and it WILL be an M rated story for a sex and a LOT of nudity, but it might be worth a look once I’m done with it.
(The story centers around the engine, and it’s 4 crewmen, as well as the 100 car freight train that it was pulling when they were sent to Equestria. However, in this version of Equestria, all of the Ponies are not only anthros, but also ALL females, and ALL of them are nudists as well! Think about it. 4 young clothed guys, plus a dog that belongs to the engineer, in a world of female, anthro nudist Ponies! What could POSSIBLY go wrong?)
Quite good fic there. Already read your "Battleship Express" a while ago, and its sequel is currently sitting in "later list" .
Keep up your writing. I go back to writing my own stories.
Good. The zebra fucking mares and the mares just going along with it is stupid.
And, I'm done. Stopped reading at the wolf part. I'm not interested in anthro wolves, I'm interested in humans helping ponies.
Damn dude, this had potential.
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wow its like rule 63 but only to one gender. Im intrigued
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Controversial content does that.
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Don't let those down thump's get to you. You did put a warning on the story description.
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Hello J-90,
And I'm glad that you enjoyed not only this story, but "Battleship Express" as well. Both of these are fine stories, and yes, I've got PLENTY more coming down the pipeline in the future!
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Hello HumanSVD,
And yes, THAT is one of the worst aspects of the "Zebra Domination Universe", right alongside the Ponies never even standing a ghost of a chance, and the mares being nympho sluts, and the stallions being weak cucks. Them going along with it. Sure, it DID happen in this story, but that was due to mind control drugs. Luckily though, the good guys can cure it.
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Hello HumanSVD,
And yes. I'm sad that you stopped reading, but let me explain myself. My real-life spirit animal is a Wolf. I feel a deep connection with them, and I work that into my stories. Humans with wolf-like features is a staple in my stories. If you don't like that, just don't read, but most people seem to enjoy it.
I would advise you though to at least read the story to the end. It's not that long, and it definitely IS worth the read!
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Hello Sanguine Blade,
And I'm glad that you think it's interesting. It's still being developed, but I'm about to write the first chapter soon. I don't know when I'll realease it, but I'll give a heads up in a blog when I do.
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Hello ShadowLight96,
And yeah, I know that. Luckily, this story seems to be holding it's own. It has more likes than dislikes, so it's so far so good.
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Hello J-90,
And yeah, I did. Stories like this aren't for everyone, and I do it to help out those who hate Zebra Dom, and want the Zebras to fry. I'll do me, and they can do them.
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No problem! All is forgiven. Use the tunnels, tho. Those are linked to every town and city in Equestria.
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We will. We’ll use them, and the tunnels that Ruby’s pack dug as well. With them all, we WILL emerge victorious!
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Was 'emerge victorious' supposed to be a joke?
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More of a double-meaning. It's like a big pile of snow, if you catch my drift!
I've read some truly awful things here, but this is easily one of the worst cysts to pop up on this site.
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Hello Damn Hamster,
And while I want to argue, I'll just say this. If you don't like my work, stop reading stories by me.
Or if not, then yes, I'm glad that I'm not alone in hating Zebradom.
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While it's definitely foul, you come across as being in denial/projecting. That combined with a weird obsession for trains and the furry fetish on display really paints a disturbing mental profile (on par with DakariMykan). As for the "story" itself...how it got approved is beyond me. From a disjointed plot to awful dialogue, from subpar characterisation to unlikable "OC", this fic makes jussonic and Evictus look like Koontz or early Clancy.
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Let me break this down for you.
1. Just because I like trains, and wat trains at that, does NOT mean that I have a train fetish!
2. Human-furry hybrids are a key part of my stories, so if you don’t like that, don’t read my stories.
3. It got approved because my other work in the past succeeded.
4. You’re the first person to complain that this story is “garbage”. Sure, it has some dislikes, but more likes, so more people like it than not.
5. Yes, I can agree that this story IS a bit disjointed, however, it was my first one-shot story, so please bear with me while I keep learning. If I could do it over again, Leopard would just have Gilda, and Gilda alone. Herds are a VERY bad idea!
6. I’ve said it before, but I’ll say it again, if you don’t like my stories, nothing says that you have to read them. They’re not for everyone, though a lot of people seem to like what I write.
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I'm counting on it.
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I know that you are. This is a VERY interesting story if you can stomach it, so i hope that you enjoy it.
I don't know if I'll get around to reading this, but I'm glad to know other people dislike that dumb zebra domination cliche lol
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Hello Prince Polaris,
And I'm REALLY glad that I'm not alone in hating Zebradom! I got SO sick and tired of seeing it, and absolutely NO stories against it! My frustrations overflowed, and I poured all of my anger, frustrations, and writing skills into "Fear from the Rails".
However, just as a heads-up, PLEASE read this story now if you're gonna read it at all. Why? It's soon to undergo a MAJOR overhaul! I made a few critical mistakes with it, the worst of which was having the main character have multiple wives. I'm going to fix this soon, as well as add a new chapter or 2 to the end. (Don't worry if you like the story the way that it is now, I'll still have the old chapters available for reading, as well as the new/altered ones!)
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Heh, sometime I might! Myself, I hate it because it's just... I've read a few of these, and the zebras are always portrayed as sex-obsessed assholes, the mares seem to be lobotomized, and none of the stories even touch on the fact that pretty much every family in equestria is being torn apart, I mean, fuck, imagine poor flurry heart being pretty much forgotten because her dad's in prison and her mom's somehow forgotten about everything except dicks.
And for some reason, zebras are supposed to be bigger than ponies even though they're... not, lol
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I whole-heartedly agree with you.
"Kwa Rusha", and "Zebra Conspiracy" are the worst of the worst. In fact, it was "Zebra Conspiracy" that I patterned the early chapters of "Fear from the Rails" after.
What really grinds my gears about it is how EASILY the Zebras win. It's LITERALLY effortless! They show up, mares begin to fall for them, the stallions forget how to stallion, and it's all over in a bloodless coup. At least in "Fall of Equestria" (Which I also despised, but at least there's PLENTY of anti-fics for it, none the least of which is my famous "Battleship Express"!) there was a bloody war first. Not this time. Now its just "go belly-up, there's nothing wrong here, Zebras love us, don't have foals, only Zebra babies".......etc. It's gross, SO impractical, and just SO out of character for all of the Ponies in the stories. Not one of them is EVER suspicious of anything. Meanwhile, in the Canon of the show, Ponies ALWAYS panic at the first sign of trouble!
And I find it sad too. The mares and fillies all leave with the Zebras, the stallions are all locked up, and God only knows what happened to the colts. Familes are torn apart, and for no real reason. What kind of a mare would have her husband and son(s) get sick, and then let these strange Zebras into her home, who then take EVERYTHING of value, or made of fabric, get rid of them, and then sleep with them and their daughters, before leaving with the Zebras to some strange land beyond Equestria? Never wonder what happened to the male Ponies that they loved? Let Zebras touch them, and their, (possibly underage!) daughters sexually, and only feel lust for it? I'm sorry, but NO sane mother would EVER do, or feel like this!
In this story, I had the Zebras use a chemical that brainwashed the females into acting like they do in most Zebradom stories. However, when the effects are negated, all hell breaks loose!
And yes, according to natural biology, not only do Ponies/horses have MUCH bigger dicks than Zebras, but Ponies/horses also have more chromosomes. Basically, any and all foals born from a Pony/Zebra pairing WILL be born sterile!
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I gotta admit, one of the reasons I dislike it is because I can't help but find the idea of cheating.. hot, yet I also despise the concept because of how life-ruining it is. So these stories are like the perfect "I hate this, but damn it, I came" kinda situation.
I've never actually read fall of equestria, I don't think, I tried rwa kushra (I tried to spell it) but it was kinda lame, the zebra conspiracy (and to be honest only the first chapter because the ones after just abandoned all logic), and that's about it.
Heh, maybe I should bang out my own anti-fic... without getting into too much detail, my main OC Polaris, he's cursed with dark magic, but unlike ya boi Sombra, thanks to the 1980s he managed to convert his magic to feed on lust instead of pain.
The magic also forces him to keep in shape, and protects him from some diseases, so in a zebra takeover situation.. Polaris would very likely end up the only stallion left who can still get people pregnant, and the only one with the magic/stamina/energy to actually pull off some sort of large scale "keep the pony race going" kinda deal.
I mean, his magic feeds on it... and he runs a built-in-the-60s bunker that's meant to hold all of ponyville in the case of nuclear war, AND his dad's king of ThreeTown, one of the Underworld towns, so he would maybe have the support of a whole damn country on his side, right underneath everyone's noses.
But... I dunno, that'd be a lot of work, I seem to be rambling a bit lol
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If you want to write an anti-fic to Zebradom like I did, go right ahead. I’d like to have “Fear from the Rails” have another story like it.
All I know is that I hate Zebradom, as it’s tasteless, logicless, wholly impractical, and totally out of character.
HOLD ON EVERYPONY, IT'S TIME FOR AN OVERHAUL!!!!!!
For me it was an excellent story, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you thanks for sharing
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Hello LigerfoxZeroX,
And I’m glad that you enjoyed the story. Oh, and this isn’t the end of the story of you’ve only read the Original Timeline. There’s the brand new, (and now canon, whereas the Old Timeline no longer is) New Timeline. Most of the events are the same, but the guys also get to see their families again. I would HIGHLY recommend reading it!