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ScarFox9700


I'm just your average Brony. I love trains, I love history, I love writing stories, and I really, really love wolves! But most of all, I love writing my stories here for your enjoyment!

Comments ( 158 )

Is this where that other rivel train from Battleship ended up or is this a whole separate universe?

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Hello ShadowLight96,

And no, this universe is totally separate from the Battleship Express Universe. Same train, same job, but different universe, different crew, different purpose.

Just reading the description sounds like a real riot, but I am going to read it because of the "Daylight".
Big enthusiast of it and steam locomotives in general.

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Hello Dashie1791,

And yes, I now fear that I REALLY might have broke open a hornets nest with this one. However, it had to be done, so I do hope that you enjoy your read!

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I am starting to get worried though. I think that I REALLY stirred up a hornets nest with this one. It hasn’t even been up for an hour yet, and all it’s gotten are down votes.

(This story is my one-shot response to the whole "Zebra Domination" Universe, as well as an anti-fic to the storyThe Zebra Conspiracy, by Very Sleepy. I absolutely ABHOR this universe, and EVERYTHING that it stands for!

So your first thought was to write a 55k word response fic?

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Hello The Abyss,

And actually, my first response was to be sick to my stomach, then rant in a blog post, then the gears started to spin, then I spent 2 weeks writing this, before submitting it here. There is a method to my perceived madness, trust me.

I also hope that this story doesn’t sink itself like my first story here did.

*Cocks Assault rifle* If those bitches are deliberatley cooperating time to die! Captain Blackpowder get the battalion ready!

Nice opening Introduction for the story, I can't wait to see what happens next to Ben and his crew.

Oh man, these Zebra's are so DEAD when Scar and his Crew get their weapons out of the train, I can't wait to see the bloodshed from the Zebra's, also why didn't they drag Shinning away with them and try to make a cure for that poison that the Zebra's used on the ponies then.

Well at least Appaloosa is safe for now, but damn Cadance is really gone now that she see's Zed as her husband instead of Shining Armor, also what about Celestia, Luna and the Mane 6, not to mention how far in the time line is this world, is Twilight already an Alicorn and has her castle or what. Also I can't wait to see how Scar and his crew get the cure and start to spread it around to the cities, I would think they would try to make one that they could dump into the water just like those Zebra Bastards did, of course the cure would work for the ponies while the Zebras would slowly get sick and either become too week or even die from it. Now that would be Karma if that were to happen, keep up the good work.

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Hey Dusk, and hang on tight! This adventure is about to get VERY interesting!

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Hey Dusk, and yes, the Zebras ARE dead! Soon, stuff WILL start getting real, and then Zebras WILL be dying!

And they didn’t have the knowledge, or the resources at the time. Every day was.a struggle for their own survival. And on that last night, Scar was all alone with just an ax. After Shining was taken, Scar’s first thoughts were to get back to his friends, and protect them. Plus, he was still dazed and confused by what was happening around him.

Don’t worry though, Shining WILL be back soon!

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Hello Sanguine Blade,

And yes, some Ponies like Cadence ARE collaborating, but yet, they are under the influence of mind control potions. It’s NOT their fault! And the Zebras WILL pay for what they did to the mates of Equestria!

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Hey Dusk, and yes, Appaloosa, Dodge City, And Trottingham managed to survive.

And yes, Cadence, Celestia, Luna, and Twilight have all fallen. HOWEVER, as I stated in the story, this was due to mind control potions. This was NOT of their own free will!

And yes, the cure is coming up soon, AND, the Zebras WILL fall victim to a disease crafted by the Ponies! Yes, Karma IS coming, and in the most ironic way possible!

Now that is what I call AWESOME, those Zebras didn't see it coming, I can't wait to see how their Elders react to the Ponies taking back what is theirs.

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Hey Dusk, and if you liked this, just WAIT until you see Chapters 4 and 5!

Oh Man, Testicular cancer now that was pure EVIL of you Scar, I LOVED IT, couldn't happen to nicer people then those Zebra's, that's ONE way of killing them off and quite funny too.

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Thanks Dusk! I REALLY wanted to find the most ironic virus that the Ponies could possibly give to the Zebras, and Then I thought of this! I’m glad that you liked it, and brace yourself, Chapter 5 is a REAL doozy!

Well job lad. Had the war gone on I'd a needed to bring my Modern Offensive Battalion to strike them down. I might be a royal but the battlefield is where i belong(spoken form OC perpective)

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Hello Sanguine Blade,

And I’m glad that you liked the story. Sure, it was a little bit short, but yet it WAS a one shot anti-fic, so I did the best with what I had. I’m still glad that you enjoyed it though!

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Your works have yet to disappoint my dear friend. This reminded me of RED Dawn from 1984. I am at your service for any works of yours as you know. Just give me an note.

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Thanks! And yeah, that’s kind of what it reminded me of too.

Also, I just wanted to let you know that soon, I’ll begin work on a story that WILL feature Santa Fe 5000 as it’s central train! I’m still putting it together, and it WILL be an M rated story for a sex and a LOT of nudity, but it might be worth a look once I’m done with it.

(The story centers around the engine, and it’s 4 crewmen, as well as the 100 car freight train that it was pulling when they were sent to Equestria. However, in this version of Equestria, all of the Ponies are not only anthros, but also ALL females, and ALL of them are nudists as well! Think about it. 4 young clothed guys, plus a dog that belongs to the engineer, in a world of female, anthro nudist Ponies! What could POSSIBLY go wrong?)

Look out Zebras, the PAIN TRAIN is a-comin' and there ain't no brakes!

I kinda want Cadence to die right now lol.
Pretty good so far.
I'm definitely entertained☺

Quite good fic there. Already read your "Battleship Express" a while ago, and its sequel is currently sitting in "later list" .
Keep up your writing. I go back to writing my own stories.

Good. The zebra fucking mares and the mares just going along with it is stupid.

And, I'm done. Stopped reading at the wolf part. I'm not interested in anthro wolves, I'm interested in humans helping ponies.

Damn dude, this had potential.

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wow its like rule 63 but only to one gender. Im intrigued

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Don't let those down thump's get to you. You did put a warning on the story description.

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Hello Coranth,

And yes, the Pain Train IS coming, and yes, just like the Rape Train, it ain't got no brakes!

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Hello Dashie1791,

And yeah, Cadence was bad, but yet, remember; she's NOT doing it on her own! The Zebra's are using mind-control drugs on the mares. This is later countered, but for the time being, it is bad.

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Hello J-90,

And I'm glad that you enjoyed not only this story, but "Battleship Express" as well. Both of these are fine stories, and yes, I've got PLENTY more coming down the pipeline in the future!

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Hello HumanSVD,

And yes, THAT is one of the worst aspects of the "Zebra Domination Universe", right alongside the Ponies never even standing a ghost of a chance, and the mares being nympho sluts, and the stallions being weak cucks. Them going along with it. Sure, it DID happen in this story, but that was due to mind control drugs. Luckily though, the good guys can cure it.

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Hello HumanSVD,

And yes. I'm sad that you stopped reading, but let me explain myself. My real-life spirit animal is a Wolf. I feel a deep connection with them, and I work that into my stories. Humans with wolf-like features is a staple in my stories. If you don't like that, just don't read, but most people seem to enjoy it.

I would advise you though to at least read the story to the end. It's not that long, and it definitely IS worth the read!

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Hello Sanguine Blade,

And I'm glad that you think it's interesting. It's still being developed, but I'm about to write the first chapter soon. I don't know when I'll realease it, but I'll give a heads up in a blog when I do.

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Hello ShadowLight96,

And yeah, I know that. Luckily, this story seems to be holding it's own. It has more likes than dislikes, so it's so far so good.

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Hello J-90,

And yeah, I did. Stories like this aren't for everyone, and I do it to help out those who hate Zebra Dom, and want the Zebras to fry. I'll do me, and they can do them.

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*has a shotgun and pickaxe at the ready while wearing the same thing as Harry Warden from My Bloody Valentine*
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You need a digger to help with the gas, mind if I help?

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Hello SirAlcatraz,

And actually, something like this went through my head when I was writing up Chapter 5! Sure, the got help, but anypony else willing to fight the Zebras is MORE than welcome to join the Resistance! You WILL be heavily vetted to ensure that your'e not a Zebra spy, but if you pass, then you will be let in! We need diggers to get us underneath Zebra-controlled towns and settlements!

Comment posted by Silver Ghost deleted May 3rd, 2018
Comment posted by Silver Ghost deleted May 3rd, 2018

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Wow, um yeah. Well, considering that the raid on the quarantine facility was a complete success, and all stallions were liberated, yes, I'd say that that helped, at least a little bit, as it cut down on the Zebras who were stationed at the quarantine facility at the time of our hitting it.

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Already spent 27 days digging tunnels to every major base in Equestria before the attack on the quarantine facility, I was going to make my move and free the stallions when the building collapsed on me! it took me 12 HOURS to dig myself out of there. Then I came across a Zebra patrol, and well, let's just say they won't be returning to base. Then spent all that time you were attacking the Crystal Empire by scaring the heebie-jeebies out of any unfortunate Zebra patrols that happened to go by an abandoned mine called Henderson Mine. And by that, I mean killing them. 2300 kills so far. That work?

Oh hehehe, their bringing a thousands more sins this time and I'm going to love every last punishment that their going to get.

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Hello Sir Alcatraz,

Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you.

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Here's how I see it though. First of all, sorry for collapsing your tunnel when we blew up the quarantine facility. We had no idea that you were even there!

Other than that, we were REALLY starting to wonder why a quarantine camp that size only had 27 Zebras in it! Later, we learned that Captain Ruby and the rest of her Pack of Diamond Dogs were wreaking havoc in that area, but I KNEW that they might have been exaggerating! Now I know that they most likely had YOU helping them! At any rate though, good job, and your efforts REALLY helped the Resistance, so keep up the good work!

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HelloGodofSalvasion,

And yes, they came in by the thousands thinking that taking over Equestria would be easy. Sure, taking was easy, but holding it? Not so fast! Now they're about to learn the TRUE meaning of pain, and what happens with you mess with pissed off Humans!

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