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Miles Skywalker

Miles Skywalker #1 · Apr 16th, 2018 · · · Finding The Perfect Mate ·

It's okay, but have you ever heard of the comma key? You need to use it more. And also tons upon metric tons of run-on sentences.

Oops door #2 · May 11th, 2018 · · · A Day In The Town ·

Fun Read

NoWrongWayToFantasize

NoWrongWayToFantasize #3 · Oct 3rd, 2018 · · 1 · A Day In The Town ·

Would actually be decent if it wasn't for the switching of tenses, and some goddamn punctuation.

+1, but only because I believe in potential, not current state.

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