When Jet Stream puts his and Apogee's special Tuesday nights on hold three weeks in a row, the frustrated teen decides to turn to her mother Delta Vee for help. When things don't work out like she imagined she finds herself having to improvise.
While I won't pretend that I wasn't slightly disappointed that Apogee and Delta didn't do the deed...
All in all I honestly think this way turned out pretty nice ^^ It's got it's confusing parts and it's sweet parts XD And it's REALLY nice to see those two hug and talk for once o.o So yeah ^^ really nice direction for the story even if I was personally hoping for another direction XD
I think that's fair. I knew some people were going to be a little disappointed, and that's my fault for setting up the story in one direction and then changing it in the final stretch. Glad you still got something out of it.
Maybe I'm alone in regards to this sentiment, but personally, I don't feel like you cheated me in any way with how your story progressed. From the beginning, we knew two things: (1) Apogee would likely attempt a sexual relationship with Delta and (2) that we had no idea what Delta would feel about that. I think this chapter definitely played up to that premise, in an interesting way. Apogee was shown to be viewing the situation with rose-colored glasses, only to have to come to terms with reality. And it paved the way for Delta to teach her daughter an important life lesson: sex does not equal love.
Loved the story! I personally hope that the canon comics go in a somewhat similar direction or end with the reconciliation of the entire family. We'll see where it goes but I'm glad I got to read this story and experience this outcome. Hope you keep writing!
Actually my biggest worry was that people might feel that I took Delta out of character. That I made her too nice and understanding and loving. But I've never really been a fan of that interpretation of the character. I still think Delta loves Apogee and in the right situations she'll show that love.
In any case, I'm interested to see Shino's take on the subject.
9206070 As I said in my notes, I'm not sure I'll wind up writing more beyond this. I feel like the 4 chapters tell a pretty complete story. But I can't say for sure that I won't write more about Apogee and Delta following the events of this story. I do enjoy the characters. For the immediate future I'm going to be writing some other stuff though.
Whew, finally got around to this, and well... a nice read, better then I was expecting - nicely done Rei! I quite enjoyed this, an interesting development.
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Damn dude. Wasn't expecting such a good realiat end. Had me in tears. Never boned my mom but defiantly brought up some other stuff that hit home. I feel like this was a real true ending not hyper sexual , it honestly would have felt cheap otherwise. (Though i feel bad that delta had to get two ponies off and still not get herself off.) 10/10 was not expecting that wholesome end.
9223795 (edit) I continue the series anyway, but ch4 was more to show that Delta wasn't in a good enough place emotionally to commit to what Apogee wanted.
But that doesn't mean something may not happen in the future.
A disheartened sigh passed from Apogee's lips. This had become more about her mom than the orgasm. She reminded herself not to feel entitled to anything more than what she was getting. It did little good, though. It hurt to imagine Delta didn't feel the same way she did right now. The physical pleasure of their act was a cold comfort if she had to enjoy it alone.
Wow! This is a great story but I wonder what therapist would have to say about this part right here. LoL
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oi, its finally here, op delivered
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While I won't pretend that I wasn't slightly disappointed that Apogee and Delta didn't do the deed...
All in all I honestly think this way turned out pretty nice ^^ It's got it's confusing parts and it's sweet parts XD And it's REALLY nice to see those two hug and talk for once o.o So yeah ^^ really nice direction for the story even if I was personally hoping for another direction XD
Have an up-vote for a good story XD
Damn, was really hoping for that more sexual conclusion, but I gotta admit your choice was also a good way to end it, probably better.
If only it didn’t blueball me so hard. c'est la vie.
The feels....the FEEEEEEEEEEEEELS!!!
Dude. I came in expecting smut and you sucker punched me right in the fucking feels.
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I think that's fair. I knew some people were going to be a little disappointed, and that's my fault for setting up the story in one direction and then changing it in the final stretch. Glad you still got something out of it.
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I mean it did have a little smut. xP
Definitely not the focus though.
Maybe I'm alone in regards to this sentiment, but personally, I don't feel like you cheated me in any way with how your story progressed. From the beginning, we knew two things: (1) Apogee would likely attempt a sexual relationship with Delta and (2) that we had no idea what Delta would feel about that. I think this chapter definitely played up to that premise, in an interesting way. Apogee was shown to be viewing the situation with rose-colored glasses, only to have to come to terms with reality. And it paved the way for Delta to teach her daughter an important life lesson: sex does not equal love.
Loved the story! I personally hope that the canon comics go in a somewhat similar direction or end with the reconciliation of the entire family. We'll see where it goes but I'm glad I got to read this story and experience this outcome. Hope you keep writing!
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Actually my biggest worry was that people might feel that I took Delta out of character. That I made her too nice and understanding and loving. But I've never really been a fan of that interpretation of the character. I still think Delta loves Apogee and in the right situations she'll show that love.
In any case, I'm interested to see Shino's take on the subject.
Letting your characters develop naturally, like they're real people, is honestly beautiful to read
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I'm really glad you see it that way. Thanks.
When might we get the next chapter?
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As I said in my notes, I'm not sure I'll wind up writing more beyond this. I feel like the 4 chapters tell a pretty complete story.
But I can't say for sure that I won't write more about Apogee and Delta following the events of this story. I do enjoy the characters.
For the immediate future I'm going to be writing some other stuff though.
Whew, finally got around to this, and well... a nice read, better then I was expecting - nicely done Rei! I quite enjoyed this, an interesting development.
Good show.
I hope you have some more multi chapters for these characters. This Shino verse has really blossomed in the last year and I want to see this continue.
ThatBadGuy enters a restaurant.
ThatBadGuy: "Waiter! May I order several chapters of hot mother on daughter incest porn?"
Waiter nods.
Author: "Certainly, sir. We will deliver to you eventually."
Several months later~
Waiter returns to the table with a silver platter and a lid over it
Author: "Here it is, sir. Just as you ordered."
As the waiter leaves, ThatBadGuy adjusts his napkin.
ThatBadGuy: "Ahhhh! I am well looking forward this one!"
ThatBadGuy lifts the lid.
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ThatBadGuy:i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/531/319/99f.gif
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Hopefully the chef's special works just as well.
Damn dude. Wasn't expecting such a good realiat end. Had me in tears. Never boned my mom but defiantly brought up some other stuff that hit home. I feel like this was a real true ending not hyper sexual , it honestly would have felt cheap otherwise. (Though i feel bad that delta had to get two ponies off and still not get herself off.) 10/10 was not expecting that wholesome end.
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I continue the series anyway, but ch4 was more to show that Delta wasn't in a good enough place emotionally to commit to what Apogee wanted.
But that doesn't mean something may not happen in the future.
I felt my heart sink deep near the last quarter. Didn’t think Delta had it in her to admit such shortcomings.
Wow! This is a great story but I wonder what therapist would have to say about this part right here. LoL