Cool. Let's see where this goes.

Erm, before reading: Mistakes in the summary.

Harbanger --> Harbinger
furure --> future
apocalipse --> apocalypse

950398 Thanks.

950405 dude it seems like you just sh*t out awesome fanfics

After reading: I like the premise, but there are three big things that are throwing it off.
Grammar, Punctuation, and Spelling.
Maybe have a pre reader or friend go over the chapters before you submit them?

Anyway, I can't help but read Alpha's speech in the voice of Legion...

Cheers ~GA

950436 I'll try.

Interesting. Let's see where this leads.

This kinda reminds me of AI Artificial Intelligence and Bicentennial Man

951495 Bicentenial man was one of the influences.

ME GUSTA

Legion is best pony.

It has potential, but this chapter alone feels incomplete, since nothing really happens.

At the same time, that's what a prologue is for.

The war of the machines.

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950398 I don't know... Harbanger could have been intentional, if you know what I mean

Okay, I do like your story, there are just a few things you should probably do.

1. Try to space out more, when I first clicked on chapter, I am immediately hit with great walls of text.
2. Try to indent whenever you end a conversation.

That is all I can see so far, good story. just need to fix a few things.