Cleaned Corners has secured his position at Friendship Castle, so now he's securing the staff. With ropes. And gags. And threats. And hypnotism. And maybe a few drugs. Okay, it's possible that he's using lots of drugs.
Thank you for sharing, I've missed your work a lot. It's like... a scrub brush for my soul. Scraping and cleansing by stretching out my emotions harder than they usually get to feel.
The first person perspective is still very nice, seeing all these aspects of psychological damage that wouldn't normally be even close to considered. Seeing Spike, who's ultimately very tangential to at least the intent of anyone involved, but the magnitude of what's happening and how it roots so deeply into his brain...
One of the things that came to mind was that... I feel like at one point you wrote Porn, and I'm not sure this is or isn't that anymore. That's not really a good or bad thing - though I definitely have a surplus of things to get off to and not enough of... whatever this is, so. Actually I'm pretty curious on what your motivation is here, because while I deeply appreciate everything I feel, I don't have that sense of "this is what I'm supposed to feel." Like, Double Down definitely still felt like smut, just also with characters you really have a bond with and want to do justice to, but this seems experimental in a different way from that, now? Apologies if it's not meant to be and I'm implying bad things. :x
I know it's extremely unlikely, but I really hope Spike gets to be with Rarity at some point. Anyway, it's nice to see this update. No one writes this shit like you do.
Glad to see more of this horrible debauchery.
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Sorry, not really possible. You just have to get lucky...
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Nope. Sometimes I feel like writing. That's when updates happen! Even if it's two, or more, years later.
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Glad to provide more horrible debauchery. And debauchery is absolutely the correct word for how this is going down.
I actually really like how you've changed the POV for this chapter. I wonder who Spike's talking too?
I'm so glad this updated! I really love corruption stories; hope you finish this one day.
Thank you for sharing, I've missed your work a lot. It's like... a scrub brush for my soul. Scraping and cleansing by stretching out my emotions harder than they usually get to feel.
The first person perspective is still very nice, seeing all these aspects of psychological damage that wouldn't normally be even close to considered. Seeing Spike, who's ultimately very tangential to at least the intent of anyone involved, but the magnitude of what's happening and how it roots so deeply into his brain...
One of the things that came to mind was that... I feel like at one point you wrote Porn, and I'm not sure this is or isn't that anymore. That's not really a good or bad thing - though I definitely have a surplus of things to get off to and not enough of... whatever this is, so. Actually I'm pretty curious on what your motivation is here, because while I deeply appreciate everything I feel, I don't have that sense of "this is what I'm supposed to feel." Like, Double Down definitely still felt like smut, just also with characters you really have a bond with and want to do justice to, but this seems experimental in a different way from that, now? Apologies if it's not meant to be and I'm implying bad things. :x
Fixed or not fixed, it's just good to this updated again.
I know the context is meant to rather grim but I would very much like to see that.
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It updated
I know it's extremely unlikely, but I really hope Spike gets to be with Rarity at some point.
Anyway, it's nice to see this update. No one writes this shit like you do.
Shame updates are so infrequent, this is pretty good.