8580415
Yeah, your done now goodbye.

If I had an actual mouth to express emotions with still, I would be giving a small smile as I said, " We'll see... we'll see... "

You forgot to change the text color here.

8660392
whoop... thanks!

"Her she is Twilight Sparkle," said the older mare.

I believe you mean Here.

8667634
Fixed! Thanks!

I didn't expect Silver Spoon being the filly, other than that, I see Slender is more passive out of the four so far

Holy shit, what a way to end it. And I like the way Slendy is written. It cool