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More of this awesome story please!
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I will try to get another chapter of this story out before the end of today.
Red: Redundant information presented twice making it a runon. Consider shortening to 'Twilight had sent a report of a sighting within 'forest name here' after investigating a rumor that a younger filly had seen him and then the rest was fine. Otherwise this is a bit of a run on way of saying that the clouds were seen being clouds because people saw the clouds being clouds with clouds.
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...you know I thought I had retyped that sectio to say something along those lines... might've forgot to hit the save button on that edit.
Anyways, thanks again!
XD other than the fact I had to switch from night mode... This is Glorious!
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Oh, you use that too?