Jet Stream awakes having just done the unthinkable with his daughter - but the 'mission' he 'launched' the previous night isn't over... A surprise visit from his sour ex will lead to serious complications - and he still has a horny teen to deal with!
Also, I didn't know that you could combine smut and feels and still have it be this amazing. Like...wow. Jet turning almost feral in his lust for Apogee while Delta reads the little notes he's been making since they split. And it works, sort of like the natural progression of both Jet and Delta.
It's weird when someone thinks that, but then again, I'm weird.
I can see where the time went into this, as well. It was well worth the wait in the end.
Here's to you, our Clopfic hero. And here's to happier days in Delta's future.
Sweet bucking Celestia this is almost making me cry..... I want delta vee and Jet to get back together so fucking bad.... I want delta vee to be happy again.
Amazing. You managed to combine smut, character development, and feels all in the same chapter. I have no idea how, but you managed to make it all work together. It took a long time for another chapter, compared to last time, but the quality and time put into this overcomes any of that.
Looks like Jet has lowered his guard and is willing to continue sex until the heat is gone. Of course, that's obviously not going to happen, as we all know. Both of them are not going to want to stop doing this together. It's just one more big, important step until they change their minds and decide to become lovers. I look forward to that intimacy.
Thanks guys! This means a lot... I put a ton of time into this chapter and was really nervous about how it might come off with the extra scene of Jet-Delta being revealed.
8623537 Sorry to hear that! There were definitely a lot of plot elements that are driving the sexual 'fun' right now (ZESPER/ESTRUS) so I could see where you might feel there is too much 'forcing'.
I just really felt that I had to keep the furnace burning very hot... so that a lasting fire would sustain Apojet going forward.
8623550 I’m not saying you wrote it in badly but it felt kinda long winded at parts. Honestly near the end I was skipping through most of the sex and picking up at the quotes haha
Just a side note I thought of: sometime in between this scene and your Apogee Gets 'Dizzy' side story, Delta manages to go from nearly breaking down and trying to escape from herself, to buying/giving Apogee a REALLY expensive cooler. How long do you think it took Delta to break down enough to do that for Apogee? A month? A week? Just after she left this scene?
I'd like to think that she went through a little shifting pastiche of emotions... Pissed at first, then wanting to get close to her daughter again, and probably the only thing she could think of that they were able to chat about was sex... So she goes all out with the most expensive toy... It's kind of sweet and actually.
Definitely it's a few weeks later, which tells you how much this stews with Delta...
But you've given me a lot to think about! Well done, nice thinking!
as amazing as this whole scene is i hope Jet goes back to that apothecary and smacks the stupid out of that kid who gave him those pills. I don't know where this story is going to go, but i hope in someway Delta Vee and Jet reconcile their mistakes.
More Jet and Delta V Please. They need a good one-on-one together to forgive each together of the past and make up, to know that need each other and how much They mean to each other. Maybe even a drunk one-on-one. ;)
And, I for one, liked Delta reading all that. It was nice. After the family lunch scene, I liked how she really got to thinking. Also...I really would like to see it all reconciled, and a little mother and daughter action...guess I’m a pervert. lol
Of course, there’s also Dizzy to consider later on. Happy little herd, with a smart mature mare showing the energetic fillies how to do it right.
Wow, that was fucking hot and that ending was fantastic. I absolutely loved the long sex scenes, especially the parts dedicated to the characters' climax. It's very frustrating when an author puts so much effort and detail into a sex scene and then simply writes a few dry lines for the orgasm. The orgasm is the literal climax of the scene! The most intense part of lovemaking, it's what all the sex was leading up to, it should get a paragraph of detail at the very least. Also I admit, during all the fucking I was hoping Delta would catch them in the act and end up being okay with it, I love that kind of stuff.
Anyway, I loved this chapter and the ending was great, I felt so bad for Delta. I really want to see her and Jet get back together now. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of this story. Fantastic job, man.
I'm just hoping for their Capture by Delta. She's a really good Character in my Books. But I like the reactions between Apogee and her dad... I forgot his name lol
Phew, this was one doozy of a chapter, both in length (heh) and content!
I'm not surprised one little bit about the fact that Jet and Apogee had fallen prey to their desires... but dammit if it wasn't hot as hell! Apogee learned a valuable lesson - careful what you wish for, you might just get it... and so much that it'll bloat you. Which was extremely unf, by the way.
I still can't believe that Delta didn't catch the ruckus the two were doing! Jet has no idea how incredibly lucky he was that he didn't get caught... though he doesn't know whether he did or didn't. He just knows that Delta has left, and he'll probably be left in a tizzy worrying about her catching them in the act.
This also makes me wonder whether ZESPER manages to override the moon tea which apogee has been using. If it did, that's going to be one interesting turn of events. ... nah, we know that won't happen from the spin-off one-shots which happen after this, but still. That was one hell of a slurry of potent doses.
That will be one amusing conversation. Jet: "Look, about last time you visited, I am so sorry! It's just... I wanted to get suppressants from the pharmacy store, they must have given us boosters and I just wasn't able to resist it for too long!" Delta: "... what are you talking about?"
That last bit though... Delta is, even if extremely slowly, starting to see that her situation is not as one-sided as she has perceived this entire time.
Hoo boy, I am SO looking forward to the aftermath of this!
Also, that little difference in Jet's notes in the journal of Delta's, where he differentiated her older self as DV and her current self as Delta... a beautiful little touch.
Also also, the chapters are getting longer as time passes. Is this a trend? Not that I mind long chapters, but don't force yourself to write long chapters for the sake of them being long in the future. Thankfully this one was full of content, you you get a solid 11/10 for this
(I'm not crying, your crying. Shut up!) Well that latest chapters given me a wave of emotions. Well done so far. I hope this series keeps going till there's some reconciliation for the whole family. Really nicely done.
"Huh, guess she really had to take a leak." Delta snarked aloud to herself, knowing that her kid was actually probably trying. In her usual way, to manage the interactions between her and Jet Stream to a smooth outcome.
Don't worry about the deleted comment. That was a mistaken correction I made.
As Jet made ready to reply with some snide remark about Delta's being the one with too much junk in the trunk, she cut him off, her grin was now a beaming smile. "Besides - usually you're trying to get me to stick around: so I take off. Now that you're trying to get rid of me, I figure I'll stick around for a bit... just to piss you off."
No need or use for the colon there. Should be a comma. Besides - usually you're trying to get me to stick around, so I take off.
Apogee felt her uterus convulsing, quivering… dipping its opening down with each milking grasp of her inner-muscles to bathe her cervix in her father’s batter… slapping the portal to her wings against his still spurting cock-slit with little kisses as her climax continued to wrack her body. She began to feel the thick semen squelch noisily from where her filly-lips joined her father’s shaft, splattering to the table below… she had been filled.
I think you meant slapping the portal to her womb against his still-spurting cock slit ?
The whole DV vs. Delta thing seems like Jet displacing some of his guilt. He knows it's his fault, but he doesn't seem to fully grasp that he completely ruined Delta, robbed her of everything she had to live for and replaced it all with someone who seems to have only become a reason to live after the fact. Delta Vee is Delta Vee. The mare we see now is what she's like when she's broken.
Something tells me that if Delta found out Jet was screwing Apogee she'd go ballistic and murder him, or have to be prevented from doing so by the authorities. Either that or she'd grab Apogee and go somewhere far away.
She'd never be able to abide even the possibility of Jet doing to Apogee what he did to her.
Why did i think that Delta was gonna join in at the end? This author has such crazy-as-fuck way of having Apogee and Jet get away with shit that that scenario being a possibility sounds entirely feasible. And great. And probably a pain in the rear to clean up afterwards.
Damn good read, still a lot of errors with spelling and word placement, but still easy to understand as they're small mistakes. I'd suggest a better spell-checking application/online web document editor/etc, if you feel like using that route at some point in the foreseeable future to maximize the fullness of the quality of this story. Sure, it's just clop, but it's still got some good story to it in bits and pieces and I feel it would make it more enjoyable for readers all-around, whether they're reading it to get their rocks off or reading it to pass time and enjoy the quality of writing.
Again, awesome story. I'm not a fan of anal or bulging, or hyper-sized penors and sexual excrement amounts, but this story caught me so well that I read it all (including the prequel) in one go, from like four in the morning til eight. I literally cannot even complain about those things.
Please, do not stop sharing your stories any time soon on this site. Followed for sure, and I will be coming to Fimfic more often to read more of your stuff. Awesome work.
8627904 That's a very astute observation, and likely quite true in my opinion (in terms of guilt deflection). That being said, he definitely sees Delta Vee split into the before and after as a character.
I wonder if Delta feels that she is a different pony too.
8624488 My editor may very shortly be satisfying that perverted desire of yours (Delta x Apogee)...
Keep an eye out for xRei's debut on fimfic in the next few weeks!
I don't see the herd going to what you've suggested... But damn if that wouldn't be fun to write! Jet with his little harem of nerd/engineer/astronaut mare's!
I'm good for Deltagee, as long as Jet isn't involved. There's just way too much bad blood between them and, as Feather mentioned, knowing that Jet is fucking Apogee would probably enrage or terrify Delta.
8644199 On the happier/funnier side, imagine all the silliness in the latest chapter--a horny Apogee trying to pleasure her parent without the other knowing--only it's happening to both Jet and Delta, each oblivious to their daughter's attraction to the other.
Oh, and to answer your earlier question: Delta clearly realizes that she's a different mare than who she was in university, but I doubt she perceives it as her having become a separate distinct entity, the way Jet does. She's changed. Even if her life turned around and she was able to follow her dreams again, she wouldn't be the same as before.
Man I wish i give this more then one up vote and fave. Like last time, this is just dam good. You have a skill, a skill some may think is weird but dam do you have this skill vary well. So keep up the smashing work and hope to see more!
I find myself invested in the story, that being said, I'll be holding off on reading this until it's complete, as I typically do. From the comments I glanced over, I get that the story could really go any way and some of the mentions are really making it hard for me to hold off! After reading through "It's not rocket science." and a couple side stories, I realized I cared more for the story than the clop, which for Rocket Science being mostly clop is a pretty incredible feat. Great Job on these stories!
The font resizing in the back half got broken due to an improper close here:
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Thanks, I fixed it!
Well, I see where the title came into effect.
Also, I didn't know that you could combine smut and feels and still have it be this amazing. Like...wow. Jet turning almost feral in his lust for Apogee while Delta reads the little notes he's been making since they split. And it works, sort of like the natural progression of both Jet and Delta.
It's weird when someone thinks that, but then again, I'm weird.
I can see where the time went into this, as well. It was well worth the wait in the end.
Here's to you, our Clopfic hero. And here's to happier days in Delta's future.
Sweet bucking Celestia this is almost making me cry..... I want delta vee and Jet to get back together so fucking bad.... I want delta vee to be happy again.
Good smut stuff too
Amazing. You managed to combine smut, character development, and feels all in the same chapter. I have no idea how, but you managed to make it all work together. It took a long time for another chapter, compared to last time, but the quality and time put into this overcomes any of that.
Looks like Jet has lowered his guard and is willing to continue sex until the heat is gone. Of course, that's obviously not going to happen, as we all know. Both of them are not going to want to stop doing this together. It's just one more big, important step until they change their minds and decide to become lovers. I look forward to that intimacy.
That would have been hot but it felt too forced.
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Thanks guys! This means a lot... I put a ton of time into this chapter and was really nervous about how it might come off with the extra scene of Jet-Delta being revealed.
So glad that I was able to have an impact on you!
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Sorry to hear that! There were definitely a lot of plot elements that are driving the sexual 'fun' right now (ZESPER/ESTRUS) so I could see where you might feel there is too much 'forcing'.
I just really felt that I had to keep the furnace burning very hot... so that a lasting fire would sustain Apojet going forward.
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I’m not saying you wrote it in badly but it felt kinda long winded at parts. Honestly near the end I was skipping through most of the sex and picking up at the quotes haha
Great job my friend. Cant wait for more
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Thank you!
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anytime my friend. keep up the great work
towards the end there i though delta was going to make a discovery
This makes me want to like and favorite again but I can't, you deserve all the likes and favorites!
Just a side note I thought of: sometime in between this scene and your Apogee Gets 'Dizzy' side story, Delta manages to go from nearly breaking down and trying to escape from herself, to buying/giving Apogee a REALLY expensive cooler. How long do you think it took Delta to break down enough to do that for Apogee? A month? A week? Just after she left this scene?
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That's a really damn good question!
I'd like to think that she went through a little shifting pastiche of emotions... Pissed at first, then wanting to get close to her daughter again, and probably the only thing she could think of that they were able to chat about was sex... So she goes all out with the most expensive toy... It's kind of sweet and actually.
Definitely it's a few weeks later, which tells you how much this stews with Delta...
But you've given me a lot to think about! Well done, nice thinking!
as amazing as this whole scene is i hope Jet goes back to that apothecary and smacks the stupid out of that kid who gave him those pills.
I don't know where this story is going to go, but i hope in someway Delta Vee and Jet reconcile their mistakes.
Well, there's not much I can say that I haven't said before, so... yeah, good work once again!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Well. That was quite a ride. From snickers to smut to the sads. Now I want to give Delta a hug. And for Jet to give her the D. But mostly a hug.
I nearly died. You're killing me.
More Jet and Delta V Please. They need a good one-on-one together to forgive each together of the past and make up, to know that need each other and how much They mean to each other. Maybe even a drunk one-on-one. ;)
Oh, that was good!
And, I for one, liked Delta reading all that. It was nice. After the family lunch scene, I liked how she really got to thinking.
Also...I really would like to see it all reconciled, and a little mother and daughter action...guess I’m a pervert. lol
Of course, there’s also Dizzy to consider later on. Happy little herd, with a smart mature mare showing the energetic fillies how to do it right.
Wow, that was fucking hot and that ending was fantastic. I absolutely loved the long sex scenes, especially the parts dedicated to the characters' climax. It's very frustrating when an author puts so much effort and detail into a sex scene and then simply writes a few dry lines for the orgasm. The orgasm is the literal climax of the scene! The most intense part of lovemaking, it's what all the sex was leading up to, it should get a paragraph of detail at the very least. Also I admit, during all the fucking I was hoping Delta would catch them in the act and end up being okay with it, I love that kind of stuff.
Anyway, I loved this chapter and the ending was great, I felt so bad for Delta. I really want to see her and Jet get back together now. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of this story. Fantastic job, man.
I'm just hoping for their Capture by Delta. She's a really good Character in my Books. But I like the reactions between Apogee and her dad... I forgot his name lol
Phew, this was one doozy of a chapter, both in length (heh) and content!
I'm not surprised one little bit about the fact that Jet and Apogee had fallen prey to their desires... but dammit if it wasn't hot as hell!
Apogee learned a valuable lesson - careful what you wish for, you might just get it... and so much that it'll bloat you. Which was extremely unf, by the way.
I still can't believe that Delta didn't catch the ruckus the two were doing! Jet has no idea how incredibly lucky he was that he didn't get caught... though he doesn't know whether he did or didn't. He just knows that Delta has left, and he'll probably be left in a tizzy worrying about her catching them in the act.
This also makes me wonder whether ZESPER manages to override the moon tea which apogee has been using.
If it did, that's going to be one interesting turn of events.
... nah, we know that won't happen from the spin-off one-shots which happen after this, but still. That was one hell of a slurry of potent doses.
That will be one amusing conversation.
Jet: "Look, about last time you visited, I am so sorry! It's just... I wanted to get suppressants from the pharmacy store, they must have given us boosters and I just wasn't able to resist it for too long!"
Delta: "... what are you talking about?"
That last bit though... Delta is, even if extremely slowly, starting to see that her situation is not as one-sided as she has perceived this entire time.
Hoo boy, I am SO looking forward to the aftermath of this!
Also, that little difference in Jet's notes in the journal of Delta's, where he differentiated her older self as DV and her current self as Delta... a beautiful little touch.
Also also, the chapters are getting longer as time passes. Is this a trend?
Not that I mind long chapters, but don't force yourself to write long chapters for the sake of them being long in the future. Thankfully this one was full of content, you you get a solid 11/10 for this
(I'm not crying, your crying. Shut up!) Well that latest chapters given me a wave of emotions. Well done so far. I hope this series keeps going till there's some reconciliation for the whole family. Really nicely done.
Jesus man, right in the feels. XD
Should be trying, in her usual way, to manage
They don't have hands. You also don't have to say "hoof-towel." It can simply be "on the nearby towel" or "on a nearby towel."
thousands
Don't worry about the deleted comment. That was a mistaken correction I made.
No need or use for the colon there. Should be a comma. Besides - usually you're trying to get me to stick around, so I take off.
I think you meant slapping the portal to her womb against his still-spurting cock slit ?
The whole DV vs. Delta thing seems like Jet displacing some of his guilt. He knows it's his fault, but he doesn't seem to fully grasp that he completely ruined Delta, robbed her of everything she had to live for and replaced it all with someone who seems to have only become a reason to live after the fact. Delta Vee is Delta Vee. The mare we see now is what she's like when she's broken.
Great chapter! Very nice mix of sex and feels.
At the end of this chapter, I really found myself wanting, Jet, to have both of his mares. Hopefully it will happen by the end of this story.
Will be waiting for more!
Something tells me that if Delta found out Jet was screwing Apogee she'd go ballistic and murder him, or have to be prevented from doing so by the authorities. Either that or she'd grab Apogee and go somewhere far away.
She'd never be able to abide even the possibility of Jet doing to Apogee what he did to her.
Why did i think that Delta was gonna join in at the end? This author has such crazy-as-fuck way of having Apogee and Jet get away with shit that that scenario being a possibility sounds entirely feasible. And great. And probably a pain in the rear to clean up afterwards.
Damn good read, still a lot of errors with spelling and word placement, but still easy to understand as they're small mistakes. I'd suggest a better spell-checking application/online web document editor/etc, if you feel like using that route at some point in the foreseeable future to maximize the fullness of the quality of this story. Sure, it's just clop, but it's still got some good story to it in bits and pieces and I feel it would make it more enjoyable for readers all-around, whether they're reading it to get their rocks off or reading it to pass time and enjoy the quality of writing.
Again, awesome story. I'm not a fan of anal or bulging, or hyper-sized penors and sexual excrement amounts, but this story caught me so well that I read it all (including the prequel) in one go, from like four in the morning til eight. I literally cannot even complain about those things.
Please, do not stop sharing your stories any time soon on this site. Followed for sure, and I will be coming to Fimfic more often to read more of your stuff. Awesome work.
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Wow! Thank you very much!
It's been a blast writing these characters and I absolutely love that readers are enjoying the story!
There's a lot more to come from these plucky ponyos too!
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That's a very astute observation, and likely quite true in my opinion (in terms of guilt deflection). That being said, he definitely sees Delta Vee split into the before and after as a character.
I wonder if Delta feels that she is a different pony too.
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Thank you!
There are a lot of people looking forward to them getting back together (I'm one of them!).
But it is going to be a looong road to travel unfortunately. The pain and hurt of over 16 years will take a while to overcome.
If it can be overcome at all.
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Thank you! I hope so too, there's a long road ahead though!
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My editor may very shortly be satisfying that perverted desire of yours (Delta x Apogee)...
Keep an eye out for xRei's debut on fimfic in the next few weeks!
I don't see the herd going to what you've suggested... But damn if that wouldn't be fun to write! Jet with his little harem of nerd/engineer/astronaut mare's!
Lucky stallion!
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Happy New Year, Cfic!
I'm good for Deltagee, as long as Jet isn't involved. There's just way too much bad blood between them and, as Feather mentioned, knowing that Jet is fucking Apogee would probably enrage or terrify Delta.
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Yes, that's the way we both feel too. There's a limit to what you can do without making it a porn-star file type thing.
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On the happier/funnier side, imagine all the silliness in the latest chapter--a horny Apogee trying to pleasure her parent without the other knowing--only it's happening to both Jet and Delta, each oblivious to their daughter's attraction to the other.
Oh, and to answer your earlier question: Delta clearly realizes that she's a different mare than who she was in university, but I doubt she perceives it as her having become a separate distinct entity, the way Jet does. She's changed. Even if her life turned around and she was able to follow her dreams again, she wouldn't be the same as before.
Man I wish i give this more then one up vote and fave.
Like last time, this is just dam good. You have a skill, a skill some may think is weird but dam do you have this skill vary well.
So keep up the smashing work and hope to see more!
Im skipping over the clop in a clopfic. Its like skipping over the races in a racing game! You're too good amd make me feel bad for not writing more.
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Nooo don't skip T-T
I'm flattered and sad at the same time lol
I find myself invested in the story, that being said, I'll be holding off on reading this until it's complete, as I typically do. From the comments I glanced over, I get that the story could really go any way and some of the mentions are really making it hard for me to hold off!
After reading through "It's not rocket science." and a couple side stories, I realized I cared more for the story than the clop, which for Rocket Science being mostly clop is a pretty incredible feat. Great Job on these stories!
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Thanks!