Jet Stream awakes having just done the unthinkable with his daughter - but the 'mission' he 'launched' the previous night isn't over... A surprise visit from his sour ex will lead to serious complications - and he still has a horny teen to deal with!
Haven't read this chapter yet, I know I wont be disappointed though! Another 15k words, Geeezuz! I assume you just riff for hours and hours, what fuels your insanity (good insane though)?
8587819 Surprisingly never heard of that genre, any suggestions? But I can definitely second that a space heater rocking out on full blast is very relaxing.
I just about died laughing. PErfect interlude. I cant wait for MOm to find out what has happened between them. Hope they have threesome. Good luck on future chapters.
8587865 Nice! Anything Jazz is đź‘Ťđź‘Ť in my book (Granted I'll give any genre a listen) Although some of these songs seem to lose me with weird/misplaced/bad vocal drops... Meh just me being critical haha.
Juicy ponuts on the desktops.... *drool* How many monitors you running with?
Delta Vee is shaping up to be pretty much a total bitch. SHE seduced and convinced Jet to sleep with her, and then blames HIM for being pregnant despite not taking the pill.
8588170 k. ALso, someone finally used an idea of mine that i suggested to them, and wrote a story. Its called Changed for the Better, Or CHanging for the Better.
I cant remember. All i know is that Israel Yubuki wrote it
Well, looks like we're going to have that good ol' family dinner Delta was talking about after all.
Also, poor Jet. The guy just can't get a break, lately.
Not only has Jet likely developed a bit of an incest fetish, AND not only is his daughter still in the middle of estrus while using birth control that potentially could fail, AND not only did the pharmacist just screw him over by giving him ZESPER instead of an estrus suppressor, he now has to deal with his ex-wife and an Apogee who has just learned how to make him "tick". He's in for some turbulence and trouble ahead.
Also:
The entwined pair stumbled over to Apogee's bed, Jet Stream landing underneath the panting pegasus mare.
It's Delta's bed, not Apogee's.
And somewhere in the conversation Apogee had with Daisy, there's italics going for two paragraphs.
8588230 Yikes!!! Good catches there! When I was writing it last night there was at least 4-5 times where I typed out Apogee when I meant Delta Vee... She would kick my ass if she knew I was letting her daughter steal her scene!
Glad you're enjoying! Jet Stream definitely needs to illuminate the 'fasten seatbelt' light!
(I'm totally stealing your turbulence pun btw - can't believe I didn't think of that!)
8587894 Aww, be fair to poor Delta. I thought she made some good strides in this chapter. She really tried to help out her daughter... It's really not easy for her to talk about her prior relationship with Jet you know...
Also, I think she helped Jet to get over his intimacy problem... She didn't force anything. We also don't know yet what happened between the two of them: did birth control fail? Was she not on birth control? Was it anyone's 'fault'?... All of that will be revealed by Shino I expect!
But yeah, she's not your typical happy go lucky mare. She's got baggage.
She bugs me when she gripes about her lot in life to Apogee... She probably doesn't mean it this way but it comes across that she wishes Apogee never existed. When she does that I want to just stop her and tell her to give her kid a hug...
That was entertaining. Also, maybe someone could do something with the Daisy Cutter and Sidewinder idea. There's enough there that it can be made into it's own story, and Clopfics is busy with this already.
8588671 If you suggested that to Jet Stream he'd probably say: "What is it with ponies and stupid furniture-related business ideas!? AND WHY DO THEY END UP WORKING!?"
A very entertaining and humorous interlude. No Apojet, but you're right in that the wait makes it that much better when it finally comes. Especially now that Apogee is now going to be assertive towards her dad soon. I wonder what'll happen with Delta Vee being around now. I can only imagine drama arising if she finds out. Her relationship with Jet is too broken to really ever repair with how tragic it must have ended. It certainly won't be pretty when she does find out who Jet is sleeping nowadays.
Daisy and Sidewinder was amazing to read. I look forward to hear the next mention of them. Although, I am a bit concerned. If Sidewinder did 'that' with his sister, what does that mean for his marefriend? I do wonder what'll happen next with Daisy's situation.
I just wanted to take a moment to make a better comment than I tend to do, this time giving some more detail. First, I think this is my fave NSFW fanfic to date now. It has everything I want! A good showing on the kink list, some plot that does not get in the way and overstays it’s welcome and plenty of smut between it. It’s fun to read for the smut or to read into the back story you give it. I love me some plot to my smut so this is a big win for me. So, a big thank you for this good work and I hope all of this good fanfair keeps up for it to the end. So until next chapter, I will be biting on my bits too see it show up!
8588357 8588462 i agree with both of these fine gentlemen. Though I wouldn't mind if we just got the end of that story told by Daisy through her own eyes in a later chapter. I might prefer it that way actually.
8589142 Thank you! Your comment was touching to read! It's always hard to find that balance so knowing that it clicked for you gives me a confidence boost!
Suffice it to say there's nothing between the two planned yet for a while... At least in what I have planned out. That being said if there's still interest after we get back to Apojet, maybe a side-story or a later side-chapter will be in order!
Yet another great chapter for sure. Gave me a couple of good chuckles too, which is quite a rarity for clopfics. Good job with the worldbuilding as well. Especially Delta's story of how things were back in the days I really quite enjoyed. It was a little hard picturing Jet Stream as the shy, submissive one at first, but with the explanation and his mishap, it does seem plausible. Seriously though, the way you portrayed Delta in the present time ... this is what I was aiming for in my story! It's just the right amount of 'I don't give a shit' without making her sound like a lowlife. Bravo for that! As for Apogee's struggles in high school ... it brings back memories, I'll say that much. It's good to know she now has someone to turn and talk to, though. Other than that, pretty much everything I wanted to say has been said by other people here, so yeah. Great work once again. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Also ... holy crap, thank you so much for the shoutout! Much appreciated! ^^
8590653 Hahaha, we're playing telephone tag in our respective comment sections! I just commented on the Delta/Jet dynamic differences we have.
I think there's actually not that much conflict. I'm with you that jet would take the lead on basically everything in the relationship as a confident, intelligent, smooth talker. In this last chapter they've been dating a little while (you can see how jet has made all the plans and is driving things along)... The only difference is for physical intimacy, which Delta is forced to take the lead in.
No conflict at all in my opinion, if anything it joins up with the dynamic i envisioned pretty well! And after this first time I can guarantee you that jet would also be much more confident in taking charge of bedroom activities as well.
8590665 Hehe yeah, I just noticed. I'll keep my reply limited to here, though, to save both of us switching back and forth from story to story. Anyway, I appreciate the compliments. I'm still quite new to writing 'serious' stories, so I'm glad to see people are liking it so far,
There really are quite a lot of possibilities here, and a lot of potential as well. I gotta say, I do like your idea of Jet Stream becoming so focused on his work (really, that could be the reason why he's so successful nowadays) and leaving Delta behind to take care of a baby-Apogee. Hell, for all we know he might have only started truly caring for her when she was in her late toddler-years, and after Delta had struggled to make ends meet for years. One could write an entire separate story about a successful Jet Stream climbing the career-ladder until one day the realization that his ex is somewhere out there, struggling to survive with their daughter, hits him hard and he gets all overly-protective about Apogee, takes her into his penthouse in Las Pegasus, etc. He doesn't seem like that kind of person to me, but hey, it's just one of many potential scenarios I could see having happened in the past. But yeah, the reason why I'm hesitant to push this deep into the family's backstory is that, essentially, it could all become redundant with one update made by Shino. Don't get me wrong, I highly doubt he'd go out of his way to 'ruin' what little headcannons exist about the family, but it can be a tad frustrating spending days working on a deep, emotional storyline, just to have it declared non-canon (unintentionally or not) a day later, regardless of whether or not it's a good story on its own. Really, that's the reason why I kept my story rather vague and had it relying as little on the main storyline as possible. But I'm rambling here, I hope you get my point.
As for a conflict between our stories ... really, I don't think there is any at all. Hell, I didn't even think about where in the timeline the flashback-part of my story is set, as I literally just went through the timeline-pictures on the blog and sorta molded them into one piece. For all I know, the first time-part could have happened after the kiss-scene, before it, or whatever. If I had to be a nitpicker and pin it down, I'd say that their first time could have been between their kiss in the park and the graduation party where (as implied by Shino) Delta got pregnant, but really, I couldn't care less about some minor discrepancies here and there. Art (including something as seemingly mundane as pony-fanfiction) is subject to readers' interpretation, and if people prefer believing that, between kissing each other in the park, and Delta getting pregnant with Apogee, the two were out partying for half a year or so, I sure am not going say it's wrong. Rambling aside, I don't feel like the two stories need to be exactly pointed out on one canon timeline, as there might always be some additions from Shino himself later on, but I do think everyone has a different approach they like most, and I'm normally not one to take that room for interpretation away. Jesus, I can't believe I just spent half an hour typing all this out. I should've gone to sleep three hours ago.
You know, I don't think that's where it'll go: it'd just be too awkward for Jet and Apogee, and there's no way in hell Delta is going to go through something like that with the way things are between her and Jet right now. Plus I have the feeling the idea of having sex with her daughter is actually abhorrent to Delta, anyways. Though, the longer Delta's there to cockblock them, the harder it will be for both of them to contain themselves after they drink the potion.
If all three of them have dinner (since Delta's already mentioned that possibility in this chapter) it'll probably result in Apogee doing something with her hind legs to Jet's fleshy stallion missile under the table while they both try and fail desperately to not appear awkward or like they're acting weird. And if things go fine and Delta leaves without suspecting a thing, then they'll probably do stuff so freaky they'll wake up the following morning with next to no recollection of the events of yesterday except for "they did it".
8592060 It would be kinda cool if apogee can fit jet's stallionhoods head just in her mouth as it flares and she gets forced to swallow an entire load.
8592060 I have to agree. I don't think Delta would ever be okay with the very thought of doing anything with her daughter or Jet. It'd be far too much everyone to ever have that kind of interaction. As depressing as it is, Jet and Delta shouldn't really have sex or get back together. Whatever happened that caused this breakup and potential divorce was tragic enough to ruin something that seemed to good to fail, and they both have done their best to move on from that. To have any sex would kind of undermine their whole seperation.
I also fully agree with your prediction that Apogee will do something to her dad while have dinner with Delta. Jet is certainly not going to complain about her daughter doing such a thing now. We can only hope Apogee remains coherent once Delta leaves them and gives Jet his chance to let himself loose.
8592060 This may or may not be (spoilers: it is) pretty much exactly what the first clop scene of the next chapter will be.
I don't want to disappoint anybody looking for a full blown 'aristocrats' type scenario... But the line I've been teasing with believability with this fic would be left a million miles behind if I wrote that type of scene. Maybe one day I'd do it as a side what if April fools day exercise, but otherwise I've got no interest in writing it here as it's just too far gone.
Still, you're pretty close on the initial scene, you mind reader!
8592216 Yeah... But depending on where Shino takes it, is love to write the clop scene that brings them back together. Still a lot of canon story for that to happen though, I think!
8592277 I'd love for everything to work out as well. It's just going to be really difficult to make sense or happen. Delta would have to be somehow be okay with incest, which many find revolting, and repair whatever happened with Jet. Shino sure is building up on how badly it didn't work out, and clop isn't going to repair a horrible breakup so easily.
But who knows? Like you said, Shino still has a lot of story planned out, and we have no idea what he'll do. I'd love nothing more to be proven wrong, and to read some amazing writing that can convincingly have it all make sense and have everything work out. Who wouldn't love a happy ending for all these lovable characters?
8592410 Well, Clop did say he wants this to be at least somewhat believable. I just don't see Delta being okay with having sex with either her ex or her daughter.
8592515 It’s a clop fic. He essentially bought a lust potion which he probably drank as he hoof was “shaking”. Earlier in the story it was implied that he’s more attracted to Delta than anyone else and Delta is the sex pest who’s fine with describing her sex life to her daughter.
Haven't read this chapter yet, I know I wont be disappointed though! Another 15k words, Geeezuz! I assume you just riff for hours and hours, what fuels your insanity (good insane though)?
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Chillhop music and a space heater blasting on my feet.
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Surprisingly never heard of that genre, any suggestions? But I can definitely second that a space heater rocking out on full blast is very relaxing.
This is gonna be Gud.
I just about died laughing. PErfect interlude. I cant wait for MOm to find out what has happened between them. Hope they have threesome. Good luck on future chapters.
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Check this out as a great starting point:
If you like it, the Chillhop channel on YouTube does 24hr streams
For me this is essentially the ideal focus music. My mind turns off completely and just flows on autopilot.
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I may have forgotten to mention that I also cover my desktops in juicy female ponut pictures as I write... That's an important piece too
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Thanks! I did try to put a lot of humor in this one!
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Nice! Anything Jazz is đź‘Ťđź‘Ť in my book (Granted I'll give any genre a listen) Although some of these songs seem to lose me with weird/misplaced/bad vocal drops... Meh just me being critical haha.
Juicy ponuts on the desktops.... *drool* How many monitors you running with?
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It's good. Cant wait for the next chapter, and the mom finding out the relationship.
Delta Vee is shaping up to be pretty much a total bitch. SHE seduced and convinced Jet to sleep with her, and then blames HIM for being pregnant despite not taking the pill.
Great job. I can’t wait for more
8587865
Ok, where the heck do you get the pics?
reactiongifs.com/r/2012/09/Billy-D_Approves.gif
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Derpibooru.org my friend
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k. ALso, someone finally used an idea of mine that i suggested to them, and wrote a story. Its called Changed for the Better, Or CHanging for the Better.
I cant remember. All i know is that Israel Yubuki wrote it
Well, looks like we're going to have that good ol' family dinner Delta was talking about after all.
Also, poor Jet. The guy just can't get a break, lately.
Not only has Jet likely developed a bit of an incest fetish, AND not only is his daughter still in the middle of estrus while using birth control that potentially could fail, AND not only did the pharmacist just screw him over by giving him ZESPER instead of an estrus suppressor, he now has to deal with his ex-wife and an Apogee who has just learned how to make him "tick". He's in for some turbulence and trouble ahead.
Also:
It's Delta's bed, not Apogee's.
And somewhere in the conversation Apogee had with Daisy, there's italics going for two paragraphs.
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Yikes!!! Good catches there! When I was writing it last night there was at least 4-5 times where I typed out Apogee when I meant Delta Vee... She would kick my ass if she knew I was letting her daughter steal her scene!
Glad you're enjoying! Jet Stream definitely needs to illuminate the 'fasten seatbelt' light!
(I'm totally stealing your turbulence pun btw - can't believe I didn't think of that!)
8587894
Aww, be fair to poor Delta. I thought she made some good strides in this chapter. She really tried to help out her daughter... It's really not easy for her to talk about her prior relationship with Jet you know...
Also, I think she helped Jet to get over his intimacy problem... She didn't force anything. We also don't know yet what happened between the two of them: did birth control fail? Was she not on birth control? Was it anyone's 'fault'?... All of that will be revealed by Shino I expect!
But yeah, she's not your typical happy go lucky mare. She's got baggage.
She bugs me when she gripes about her lot in life to Apogee... She probably doesn't mean it this way but it comes across that she wishes Apogee never existed. When she does that I want to just stop her and tell her to give her kid a hug...
I really like seeing the relationship Jet and Delta had, will there be a story about them in their college days at some point?
That was entertaining.
Also, maybe someone could do something with the Daisy Cutter and Sidewinder idea. There's enough there that it can be made into it's own story, and Clopfics is busy with this already.
Dude, I'd love to see a spin-off with Daisy Cutter and her brother. :3
8588357
What this guy said. Right here.
Sweet Celestia this was one Ridealong. Although Jet Stream's business can flourish if it was called "Airtravel and Airtravel Accessories". no?
8588671
If you suggested that to Jet Stream he'd probably say: "What is it with ponies and stupid furniture-related business ideas!? AND WHY DO THEY END UP WORKING!?"
Then he'd fire you.
A very entertaining and humorous interlude. No Apojet, but you're right in that the wait makes it that much better when it finally comes. Especially now that Apogee is now going to be assertive towards her dad soon. I wonder what'll happen with Delta Vee being around now. I can only imagine drama arising if she finds out. Her relationship with Jet is too broken to really ever repair with how tragic it must have ended. It certainly won't be pretty when she does find out who Jet is sleeping nowadays.
Daisy and Sidewinder was amazing to read. I look forward to hear the next mention of them. Although, I am a bit concerned. If Sidewinder did 'that' with his sister, what does that mean for his marefriend? I do wonder what'll happen next with Daisy's situation.
I just wanted to take a moment to make a better comment than I tend to do, this time giving some more detail. First, I think this is my fave NSFW fanfic to date now. It has everything I want! A good showing on the kink list, some plot that does not get in the way and overstays it’s welcome and plenty of smut between it. It’s fun to read for the smut or to read into the back story you give it. I love me some plot to my smut so this is a big win for me. So, a big thank you for this good work and I hope all of this good fanfair keeps up for it to the end. So until next chapter, I will be biting on my bits too see it show up!
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i agree with both of these fine gentlemen. Though I wouldn't mind if we just got the end of that story told by Daisy through her own eyes in a later chapter. I might prefer it that way actually.
Cum on 3way between mother daughter and daddy.
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Thank you! Your comment was touching to read! It's always hard to find that balance so knowing that it clicked for you gives me a confidence boost!
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Wow! A lot of interest in Diz and Sidewinder!
Suffice it to say there's nothing between the two planned yet for a while... At least in what I have planned out. That being said if there's still interest after we get back to Apojet, maybe a side-story or a later side-chapter will be in order!
He’s a T H I C C Q B O I
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Yep, he must have an earth pony porn star ancestor or something.
Clop my good man, if I sell you my soul will this turn into a very long romance story for Apojet?... please?
I need my 200k+ word romance fix man and this is the ship I wish to see fly to the moon
Also a scene of Apogee going to school and describing her weekend to Drizzy
He drank the potion. He’s gonna fuck them both.
8589652
Woo!
Yet another great chapter for sure. Gave me a couple of good chuckles too, which is quite a rarity for clopfics. Good job with the worldbuilding as well. Especially Delta's story of how things were back in the days I really quite enjoyed. It was a little hard picturing Jet Stream as the shy, submissive one at first, but with the explanation and his mishap, it does seem plausible.
Seriously though, the way you portrayed Delta in the present time ... this is what I was aiming for in my story! It's just the right amount of 'I don't give a shit' without making her sound like a lowlife. Bravo for that!
As for Apogee's struggles in high school ... it brings back memories, I'll say that much. It's good to know she now has someone to turn and talk to, though.
Other than that, pretty much everything I wanted to say has been said by other people here, so yeah. Great work once again. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Also ... holy crap, thank you so much for the shoutout! Much appreciated! ^^
8590653
Hahaha, we're playing telephone tag in our respective comment sections! I just commented on the Delta/Jet dynamic differences we have.
I think there's actually not that much conflict. I'm with you that jet would take the lead on basically everything in the relationship as a confident, intelligent, smooth talker. In this last chapter they've been dating a little while (you can see how jet has made all the plans and is driving things along)... The only difference is for physical intimacy, which Delta is forced to take the lead in.
No conflict at all in my opinion, if anything it joins up with the dynamic i envisioned pretty well! And after this first time I can guarantee you that jet would also be much more confident in taking charge of bedroom activities as well.
8590665
Hehe yeah, I just noticed. I'll keep my reply limited to here, though, to save both of us switching back and forth from story to story.
Anyway, I appreciate the compliments. I'm still quite new to writing 'serious' stories, so I'm glad to see people are liking it so far,
There really are quite a lot of possibilities here, and a lot of potential as well. I gotta say, I do like your idea of Jet Stream becoming so focused on his work (really, that could be the reason why he's so successful nowadays) and leaving Delta behind to take care of a baby-Apogee. Hell, for all we know he might have only started truly caring for her when she was in her late toddler-years, and after Delta had struggled to make ends meet for years. One could write an entire separate story about a successful Jet Stream climbing the career-ladder until one day the realization that his ex is somewhere out there, struggling to survive with their daughter, hits him hard and he gets all overly-protective about Apogee, takes her into his penthouse in Las Pegasus, etc. He doesn't seem like that kind of person to me, but hey, it's just one of many potential scenarios I could see having happened in the past.
But yeah, the reason why I'm hesitant to push this deep into the family's backstory is that, essentially, it could all become redundant with one update made by Shino. Don't get me wrong, I highly doubt he'd go out of his way to 'ruin' what little headcannons exist about the family, but it can be a tad frustrating spending days working on a deep, emotional storyline, just to have it declared non-canon (unintentionally or not) a day later, regardless of whether or not it's a good story on its own. Really, that's the reason why I kept my story rather vague and had it relying as little on the main storyline as possible.
But I'm rambling here, I hope you get my point.
As for a conflict between our stories ... really, I don't think there is any at all. Hell, I didn't even think about where in the timeline the flashback-part of my story is set, as I literally just went through the timeline-pictures on the blog and sorta molded them into one piece.
For all I know, thefirst time-part could have happened after the kiss-scene, before it, or whatever. If I had to be a nitpicker and pin it down, I'd say that their first time could have been between their kiss in the park and the graduation party where (as implied by Shino) Delta got pregnant, but really, I couldn't care less about some minor discrepancies here and there. Art (including something as seemingly mundane as pony-fanfiction) is subject to readers' interpretation, and if people prefer believing that, between kissing each other in the park, and Delta getting pregnant with Apogee, the two were out partying for half a year or so, I sure am not going say it's wrong.Rambling aside, I don't feel like the two stories need to be exactly pointed out on one canon timeline, as there might always be some additions from Shino himself later on, but I do think everyone has a different approach they like most, and I'm normally not one to take that room for interpretation away.
Jesus, I can't believe I just spent half an hour typing all this out. I should've gone to sleep three hours ago.
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Get to bed!!!
These feather-butts will be waiting for you tomorrow!
I'm with you, but even more so because I don't want to pressure Shino into one fan-Canon or another... I want to see his story! I can't wait!
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Aye, so we're on the same page in this regard. I'm glad ^_^
Who needs sleep when you have ponies?
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You know, I don't think that's where it'll go: it'd just be too awkward for Jet and Apogee, and there's no way in hell Delta is going to go through something like that with the way things are between her and Jet right now. Plus I have the feeling the idea of having sex with her daughter is actually abhorrent to Delta, anyways. Though, the longer Delta's there to cockblock them, the harder it will be for both of them to contain themselves after they drink the potion.
If all three of them have dinner (since Delta's already mentioned that possibility in this chapter) it'll probably result in Apogee doing something with her hind legs to Jet's fleshy stallion missile under the table while they both try and fail desperately to not appear awkward or like they're acting weird. And if things go fine and Delta leaves without suspecting a thing, then they'll probably do stuff so freaky they'll wake up the following morning with next to no recollection of the events of yesterday except for "they did it".
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It would be kinda cool if apogee can fit jet's stallionhoods head just in her mouth as it flares and she gets forced to swallow an entire load.
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I have to agree. I don't think Delta would ever be okay with the very thought of doing anything with her daughter or Jet. It'd be far too much everyone to ever have that kind of interaction. As depressing as it is, Jet and Delta shouldn't really have sex or get back together. Whatever happened that caused this breakup and potential divorce was tragic enough to ruin something that seemed to good to fail, and they both have done their best to move on from that. To have any sex would kind of undermine their whole seperation.
I also fully agree with your prediction that Apogee will do something to her dad while have dinner with Delta. Jet is certainly not going to complain about her daughter doing such a thing now. We can only hope Apogee remains coherent once Delta leaves them and gives Jet his chance to let himself loose.
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This may or may not be (spoilers: it is) pretty much exactly what the first clop scene of the next chapter will be.
I don't want to disappoint anybody looking for a full blown 'aristocrats' type scenario... But the line I've been teasing with believability with this fic would be left a million miles behind if I wrote that type of scene. Maybe one day I'd do it as a side what if April fools day exercise, but otherwise I've got no interest in writing it here as it's just too far gone.
Still, you're pretty close on the initial scene, you mind reader!
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Yeah... But depending on where Shino takes it, is
love to write the clop scene that brings them back together. Still a lot of canon story for that to happen though, I think!
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Hah! If I can find some plausible way for that filly to fit that hoof-sized organ into her maw, that will definitely happen!
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You realise this is a clip fic right? This isn’t meant to be a slice of life fic.
(Plus, incase you missed it, Delta is the sex pest here)
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I'd love for everything to work out as well. It's just going to be really difficult to make sense or happen. Delta would have to be somehow be okay with incest, which many find revolting, and repair whatever happened with Jet. Shino sure is building up on how badly it didn't work out, and clop isn't going to repair a horrible breakup so easily.
But who knows? Like you said, Shino still has a lot of story planned out, and we have no idea what he'll do. I'd love nothing more to be proven wrong, and to read some amazing writing that can convincingly have it all make sense and have everything work out. Who wouldn't love a happy ending for all these lovable characters?
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Well, Clop did say he wants this to be at least somewhat believable. I just don't see Delta being okay with having sex with either her ex or her daughter.
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It’s a clop fic. He essentially bought a lust potion which he probably drank as he hoof was “shaking”. Earlier in the story it was implied that he’s more attracted to Delta than anyone else and Delta is the sex pest who’s fine with describing her sex life to her daughter.
They’re gonna fuck and you’re gonna like it!