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If I was AJ I would just pat hom on the back and say good frickin job.
But...... aim for Spoiled next time
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I've studied Filthy Rich's behavior in the show and the relationship with Applejack's family. He may be prideful, but he's not really such a bad guy. His wife on the other hand is a b****.
Seem to be getting a lot of downvotes... Alrighty then.
The Cutie Mark Sounds very Fitting
While I do agree that Filthy isn't as bad as a lot of people on here make him out to be, I can't help but feel he would have apologised to Dylan over calling him a 'trained ape', or at the very least a 'pet' before leaving.
He's an understanding sort and would DEFINITELY have realised he'd insulted Dylan when AJ says he's family.
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He will apologize in a later chapter.
This chapter felt better but when it suddenly stopped it looked like it would have been only half of what could have been there, you stopped this chapter to soon.
Oh great.....hello Spoiled Bitch.
This feels unfinished. Aside from a few typos, that's the only thing I feel is wrong with this chapter.
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Yeah, sorry about that, I really was in a rush at the time.
Dylan didn't exactly spit in their reaction just because of prejudice. They did insult him pretty badly. Something that is in my opinion worse than such a harmless spit that didn't hit them. Additionally Filthy actually threatened him. Sure he thought he was an animal, but still that would mean he threatened to buy him for animal abuse. Filthy seems evil here compared to canon. This doesn't have to be a bad thing of course. And the whole chapter seemed also rather unjust, which also doesn't have to be a bad thing either. It all really depends where you want to take it. I'm just sharing my thoughts on this.
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I appreciate everyone's criticism, so here's an upvote from me. And while I agree that Filthy Rich appeared out of character, I've noticed in the show that he can be pretty smitten with his wife, Spoiled Rich, so he'd be pretty protective. He does "spoil" her after all.
Also, as the story progresses, he becomes nicer. I'm even going to be writing a chapter taking a pure focus into his life with Spoiled Rich. It's gonna be a bit of a slice of life thing.