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I can fell the Love train coming sister/mother love that is can't wait for more.
You can really be proud of yourself, Dylan.
and if another helper is going to gather them the like he wants, then we are even slower than with that person missing.
I tried to say that they are probably little bit faster no matter if they get him iron legs if another one is helping.
I just wish you would add a story part where they actually get to know each other.
It's just weird to me to have them act like they know each other already sometimes or later asking questions they normally should know already.
Try to make the chapters 2.000 words long maybe, with more description or something like that. I just noticed it feels more complete that way. I know there are only little events here and there till now but it is kind of rushing trought the story.
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You are right there.