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Nice work, happy christmas to you
I have to say, you did a real god job with this chapter, the character moments and interactions were believable and nice, the humor gave some lightheartedness that I liked and I have to add bonus points for the extra world building with the pineapple juice.
You got my like 👍 now, and I hope to see what else you do in the future chapters.
Still cute, but I would really like it if more main chars would swap the place with the love interesst, I mean in how they act.
I think because of those timeskips I feel like I don't know him that much and that's why I'm not to happy with everything.
In the end the christmas part didn't felt to bad.
Did he really felt that confident already, that he tried to trick Amber under the mistletoe, or did it accidently happened?
Before you missunderstand it, I don't need the main chars to act cool and everything in front of the girl, but they are always so affraid, embrassed and everything like that even when there are people that are in the middle or not fazed by anything.
It is always the main char that acts like Dylan did here.
Sadly if I get a character that acts different he is sometimes some kind of asshole.
The feels are strong in this chapter
Everything is a rock.
Rock is love, rock is life.
Thanks for doing this part, you made her not forthwall break.
Noooooooo!
it made me want to cry very excellent ch