Rainbow Dash said delivering a tactical smooch to Applejack’s check. Applejack gushed and squirmed, immediately becoming happier. Rainbow Dash led her out to the living room to present her to everyone.
Smooch Tactical smooch Fully automatic assault smooch Also Sunset,rarity and pinkie being babied would be nice
Yes I would love to see the other girls get a chance to be babied. But you could always add the Fluttershy babysitting for fun too. Great story with more realistic tones. Love it keep up the amazing work.
I’m glad to see that Applejack has finally taken the opportunity too call out a color other then green. While I’m sure we all would like to see more of the happy little jacky, we still have yet to see her call out red and this I believe, was only the first time she has called out a different color.
8875504 Yes this is the first time she's called a color other than green. I wrote that scene specifically with that in mind. I don't think I'll ever write her saying red though. That's supposed to be reserved for her like, actually being afraid for her safety, and I don't think Rainbow Dash would even put her in that kind of situation.
If we get a bonus chapter, I'd prefer it to be Sunset, Rarity, and Pinkie getting babied.
Smooch
Tactical smooch
Fully automatic assault smooch
Also Sunset,rarity and pinkie being babied would be nice
If we get a bonus chapter I say it would be great to read about Sunset, Rarity and Pinkie getting babied.
Yes I would love to see the other girls get a chance to be babied. But you could always add the Fluttershy babysitting for fun too. Great story with more realistic tones. Love it keep up the amazing work.
Great chapter.
I’m glad to see that Applejack has finally taken the opportunity too call out a color other then green. While I’m sure we all would like to see more of the happy little jacky, we still have yet to see her call out red and this I believe, was only the first time she has called out a different color.
Can’t wait to see what happens next!
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Yes this is the first time she's called a color other than green. I wrote that scene specifically with that in mind. I don't think I'll ever write her saying red though. That's supposed to be reserved for her like, actually being afraid for her safety, and I don't think Rainbow Dash would even put her in that kind of situation.
*Deep breath* "Tactical Smooch, Incoming!"
Also, this.
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that was only a one letter mistake so you're only getting 50 bonus points.
I want to see the others being babied, I think that's a good idea, but I think Fluttershy being added to that list would be ADORBABLES! :3
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I would like to see the three girls get babied a bit when you get to that point. Also great work! I really enjoyed the story and the calm pace of it.