I really enjoy this story. Normally I hate reading but I like stories like these. I come check this story every day looking for an update and I have not been disappointed, though I do hate whenever I reach the end of a chapter since I have to wait to continue. I can't wait to see how this story develops, especially now that some of the others are starting to get suspicious. I can't really give any constructive criticism since I felt like this chapter was perfect (in my opinion) so all I can really say is "keep up the great work"
8706815 Sorry about that I guess the change to the description didn't save. It's a deviant art user thunderDash07 https://thunderdasher07.deviantart.com/. The description should be updated now too.
I really enjoy this story. Normally I hate reading but I like stories like these.
I come check this story every day looking for an update and I have not been disappointed, though I do hate whenever I reach the end of a chapter since I have to wait to continue.
I can't wait to see how this story develops, especially now that some of the others are starting to get suspicious.
I can't really give any constructive criticism since I felt like this chapter was perfect (in my opinion) so all I can really say is "keep up the great work"
*sigh* Pinkie... why do you have to be a creepy stalker sometimes? Also, I see the new cover pic, but who made it?
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Sorry about that I guess the change to the description didn't save. It's a deviant art user thunderDash07 https://thunderdasher07.deviantart.com/. The description should be updated now too.
Thanks. I'll be sure to look at their art. Also did a quick reread and found two possible mistakes.
...Not entirely sure what you meant to put here. Also, Wemon?
Awesome chapter looking forward to more of it my friend
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good catches 350 bonus points to you.