a series of bets between Applejack and Rainbow Dash goes too far.
"What?" Applejack asked confused. Her question was quickly answered when Rainbow Dash held one pink and one blue diaper to Rainbow Dash.
I believe something needs to be fixed there.
Aside from that, this was a pretty good chapter.
8576581good catch 10 bonus points to you. I fixed it. Now she's showing them to Applejack instead of to herself.
Will this be getting a chapter 4?
8589372Yup. I'm currently in the process of editing chapter 4. Should be up tomorrow-ish
8591117Awesome! I’m looking forward to it!
hmmm I do have to say this is a completely different taste for my liking but for whatever reason, I um like it...
I believe something needs to be fixed there.
Aside from that, this was a pretty good chapter.
8576581
good catch 10 bonus points to you. I fixed it. Now she's showing them to Applejack instead of to herself.
Will this be getting a chapter 4?
8589372
Yup. I'm currently in the process of editing chapter 4. Should be up tomorrow-ish
8591117
Awesome! I’m looking forward to it!
hmmm I do have to say this is a completely different taste for my liking but for whatever reason, I um like it...