1003784 my fave part was, "you are retarted but nice she wept against me..."
1003836 Pretty sure the majority of us consider the author a troll, we still just think the story is funny as heck and that's why we, well at least me, keeps on coming back.
Welp, I think the comments all say the same thing:
Avoid this fic.
I got a proper message just from the title and the description. I have a tip for you, Mr. Author.
Writing a fiction is not like talking to someone over the Internet, you do not forego proper spelling and grammar. You capitalize all your 'I's, you end all your sentences with a period, you properly space out your sentences with commas, semi-colons, and other special characters.
Every character who speaks gets their own set of quotation marks, and their own paragraph every time the speaker changes.
It sounds like you made an honest attempt here, and I haven't yet read the actual story, so I'll spare you the hateful words.
My brain is ready, my mind is locked up in a bullet-proof, bomb-proof vault, and the Hour of Reading approaches...I can only pray to God that I'm ready for this...
I'll make a comment with every chapter I read, and each one will be a skit! Here reading with me today is Twilight and AJ.
1007960 B-but... I want him to make more chapters... this stuff is down right hilarious when you don't have to read it. I fully encourage apple short to finish this project; it might actually make him fairly well known in the fandom as well.
Tell that to the others who took an outright negative response to this. I don't mind what he does, so long as he learns, and improves. And really, things can only go up from here! I mean seriously, this is rock bottom. Eeyup.
I'd prefer a bad fic fade into the shadows, and be regarded more as a joke while people enjoyed my better fics, than something like this
lol this one has a bit of the authors commentary along with the reading; love some of the reactions. Also this settles it: I'm going to be posting my own dramatic reading of this soon too.
1009653 lol i know its bad but i was told its best to finish this one get better and learn to write better then go back and edit or remake it once im good.
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portle is supposed to be spelled portal, you know.... just like the game you like so much?
Awesome... as ever.
we made love once more in secret while celest slept.
That's just priceless!
Goddamnnit guys, stop responding seriously to this, you are trolling me harder by getting trolled than he would by posting trollfics.
1003784 my fave part was, "you are retarted but nice she wept against me..."
1003836 Pretty sure the majority of us consider the author a troll, we still just think the story is funny as heck and that's why we, well at least me, keeps on coming back.
There's more?!?
I love how her name is Celest. This entire story seems to remind me of 'im nut ok i promiss'. Only this has more substance...
I'm loving this story.
I love the way our protagonist is a horsefucker pervert always fucking ponies for no fucking reason.
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I swear I'm losing my god-damn mind by continuing this...
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Welp, I think the comments all say the same thing:
Avoid this fic.
I got a proper message just from the title and the description. I have a tip for you, Mr. Author.
Writing a fiction is not like talking to someone over the Internet, you do not forego proper spelling and grammar. You capitalize all your 'I's, you end all your sentences with a period, you properly space out your sentences with commas, semi-colons, and other special characters.
Every character who speaks gets their own set of quotation marks, and their own paragraph every time the speaker changes.
It sounds like you made an honest attempt here, and I haven't yet read the actual story, so I'll spare you the hateful words.
My brain is ready, my mind is locked up in a bullet-proof, bomb-proof vault, and the Hour of Reading approaches...I can only pray to God that I'm ready for this...
I'll make a comment with every chapter I read, and each one will be a skit! Here reading with me today is Twilight and AJ.
Can't wait!
Ready t' rock.
Well then...let's do this.
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seriously though after hearing those last two chapters I feel like this: thepowblock.com/storage/images/mlp%20my%20little%20pony%20meme%20bronies%20pinkie%20pie%20brain%20is%20full%20of%20fuck%20jackie%20chan.jpg?__SQUARESPACE_CACHEVERSION=1340235495427
Also, I know it's terrible but I've been wanting to make this pic since I first read chapter one: img35.imageshack.us/img35/7669/mlfw44981335174850314.png
So sorry and your welcome all in one.
1007960 B-but... I want him to make more chapters... this stuff is down right hilarious when you don't have to read it. I fully encourage apple short to finish this project; it might actually make him fairly well known in the fandom as well.
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Tell that to the others who took an outright negative response to this. I don't mind what he does, so long as he learns, and improves.
And really, things can only go up from here!
I mean seriously, this is rock bottom.
Eeyup.
I'd prefer a bad fic fade into the shadows, and be regarded more as a joke while people enjoyed my better fics, than something like this
be all I'm known for.
It's embarrassing.
Found another reading of this:
lol this one has a bit of the authors commentary along with the reading; love some of the reactions. Also this settles it: I'm going to be posting my own dramatic reading of this soon too.
1009653 lol i know its bad but i was told its best to finish this one get better and learn to write better then go back and edit or remake it once im good.
Perfect.