Heavy Key Reverb

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Knight of Crows

Knight of Crows #1 · Sep 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Let's see how the rewrite goes, though it probably would have been better to do a new story instead of rewriting a few chapters.

Yacob24shots

Yacob24shots #2 · Sep 4th, 2019 · · ·

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True, but I felt that this was the right thing to do.

GlitchyFox

GlitchyFox #3 · Sep 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

i dont usauly like anthro storys but i did read the past version so i want to see what you will do with this so knock us dead with awsomeness spewing from your brain hole. also will noboadys and dream eaters apper later?

Knight of Crows

Knight of Crows #4 · Sep 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Still minor grammar errors, I didn't notice any spelling errors (I read quickly, might have looked over them). You might want to make sure to put some space between when characters are talking around the beginning, and when a character is thinking to themselves you might want to use ' instead of " or us italics. Still want to see where this goes partially because of the keyblade choice.

You know speaking of the Keyblade of Hearts it's always bugged me how insignificant it was especially when the X blade was explained. 20 fragments, 7 lights and 13 darkness'. This keyblade was forged with 6/7, after the 7th was released it faded away and we haven't seen it since, but for all intents and purposes it was likely an incomplete X blade. There has to be a counterpart using the 13 darkness' instead, I think it's kind of surprising how such an important weapon still has so little relevance to the series.

Yacob24shots

Yacob24shots #5 · Sep 4th, 2019 · · ·

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I will be introducing the Nobodies, but I'm on the fence about the dream eaters. I already have multiple arcs planned out, so if i do introduce them it'll be later on in the story. Thanks for reading!

GlitchyFox