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Nice Job, although Gryphon king reminds me of a king from another story I read. My thoughts on Sombra is......Sombra likes ya and he wants ya we could do this the easy way or the hard way.
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I'm not sure which king you would be referring to but yeah, Sombra takes what Sombra wants
Hm, and I wonder what would have had happened had Nate tried to read Guto... ...would he have had realized the Idol was sentient? Would he have perceived the deceit? Woud Guto or the Idol notice?...
Also, Discord seems way too wicked, he could have been talking about either Nate, Guto OR Sombra...
On another note, feel free to experiment with chapter length. Take care though, fics like FoE had chapters long enough to be separate novels . I think this one could have been split into two (4k and 7k or thereabouts) if you wanted to, but this works too, so you do you.
Nice cliffhanger btw, and a Great chapter!
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Thank you for your continued support Jay